Lux's Spell Penetration Staff

So far, all 616 chapters have been ordered and will be abandoned. The book itself is of good quality, the writing is smooth, and the plot is not draggy. Reading this book is entirely based on the IP of LOL. Originally, I just copied the existing settings of LOL and LOR, and did not need too much originality and expansion. The growth of Eno, the weather, geographical environment, humanities and culture of Forsbarrow... The author tirelessly chews it up bit by bit and feeds it to the readers, and even spends completely unnecessary words explaining some useless information in the "Author's Say" of each chapter: Why does the oxen pull the cart shake? What is the use of this kind of trivial information 🤔? Why write these original details that have no effect? Isn't the LOL universe full and vivid enough with so many settings? If there are ready-made ones, don't use them, why do you have to do so thanklessly? I want to watch Lux, watch Qin Nu, and watch the heroes of the LOL universe collide and rub against each other. You spend so much time writing about Forsbyro's farming sex? I really want to read about farming in another world. Wouldn't it be better to watch "Release That Witch"? I always think about the development of County B every day. There are so many heroic background stories and so many major events that can be directly used. You have to create your own mushrooms. Some people grow mushrooms to save the survivors of the land abandoned by the gods, and to promote the protagonist upgrade and main storyline that must be developed in the subsequent plot. Are your original Shadow Realm mushrooms useful? Yes, your mushroom cultivation improved the lives of the people of Forsbarrow, and then paved the way for subsequent changes throughout Demacia, but who saw you writing about the development of Forsbarrow? It was baffling. We will write a lot about the changes in Demacia in the future, and we will film "House of Cards" in Demacia, right? 🙄. I want to read political and historical novels. Why don't I read the history category next door? Isn't the power struggle of the Tang, Song, Yuan, Ming and Qing dynasties not interesting? Even if I don't take a book specifically about historical political battles, I just compare it with the "Feng Nv" on the same LOL theme track. I really want to read this kind of theme combined with the LOL setting. Why don't I just go next door to read this Feng Nv? Either it is purely original, or else it is directly applied to the original settings, or borrowed some settings. Why do you have to expand your own setting based on the original world view? Every time the plot is written about the second creation, giant brain hemorrhage, Shurima stone men, silent men... What the hell are they, the demon searchers burst into tears when they heard it, and Singed had to press the mercury furiously to fear that he would be cognitively contaminated. What kind of bullshit is worthy of being included in Runeterra? I don't know what the score of this book is, but the problem I can personally see is that there is no discussion at all in the 600+ chapters, and no one has interacted and left messages. Personally, I think the reason is that too many second creations/originals lead to conflicts with the Rune Continent that readers are familiar with, and too much ink in the original parts leads to imbalance. I wonder if the author has ever considered that 99% of the readers who are immediately attracted by the introduction and title of the book are LOL players. Even Riot Games knows how to release several skins for popular heroes a year. On the other hand, if the unpopular heroes have skins? They are already writing LOL-themed novels for the LOL player community, so they must be writing about popular heroes. What the hell, it's already written about Crows attacking Ionia, so let's write about Riven being sent to Ionia to fight Yasuo. After the fight, both of them died, but Yongen was saved, and there was a wave of tears. Write after finishing it, write about the big incident of Tetsuo, pull the two out and resurrect, Yasuo said "my stupid brother" to Yone who did not become a half-demon, and then make Yone into a half-demon at the cost of letting Yasuo Riven resurrect the world, and then collect tears. Then just let Riven and Yasuo die on Mount Targon, ascend to heaven and become a protoss. Anyway, LOR also has protoss skin endorsement. Then he became a star spirit and simply resurrected in the human world. He could fight light against darkness, and he also had skin endorsement. Anyway, just pull out a few popular characters to poke fun at LOL players, just pull them out and sneak away and that's it. Let's not talk about whether the plot is well written or not. Just say that the traffic is very unsatisfactory. When the time comes, the comments section will explode or not. What's the use of writing about Ino, who has no character at all? What's the use of writing some inexplicable originals? Your books are not tagged with "farming style" or "power plot". Can you attract readers to watch this kind of plot? It's not that the original is not good, or that the details are not good, but the readers who see this title and the free chapter at the beginning are mostly LOL players. Some people may know the LOL universe better, but most people only know the popular heroes and stories. Then you have to figure out the composition of your readers and identify their needs. 95% of the first half of the book is 5% original with the original universe setting. Now it is written for you with 20% original setting. Let's just say, then why don't I read 100% original, or 95% original with 5% LOL setting? Before, I was thinking, "Don't worry, I will write more and more heroes in the future, and they will be more exciting." When I was waiting for the party, I was reluctant to give up the pursuit, but now it is getting more and more excessive. I want to drag more heroes from the original setting to your fourth-tier county to watch farming and outfits. There will be a lot of dog-blooded virtues soon. Marcia's low-end version of House of Cards... My pride was so high that I felt like I was going to give it away with a deliberate punch when I was chasing the book. I really didn't look forward to the follow-up plot at all... The book is well written and I like it very much, but don't write something original next time 🤤.

One thumbs up for a day, help your children.

To be honest, I don't think there is any need to engage in class struggle. Because the proletarian struggle is based on the environment of large factory production, it is obvious that Demacia has not yet reached that stage of development. Alas, I feel that today's authors are obsessed with class politics, as if they are not advanced enough if they don't know how to socialize. But doing this in the League of Legends world view is actually a bit inconsistent. (I just finished reading the first volume, and I feel inspired)

Reward floor,,,, reward yourself once on the first floor, help the children! The child is really great👍🏻

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I have read the latest chapter. From my personal point of view, it is the best alliance background fanfic written so far. The reasons are as follows: 1: The plot is complete and there is no redundant description 2: The character creation is successful and impressive 3: The character's behavior is consistent The character design, the development of events conforms to general logic, and there are no poisonous points 4: The advancement of events conforms to sociological principles. The protagonist (Lux)'s understanding of things is advanced through constant practice, and the real protagonist acts as a mentor. Readers who like historical texts should be the most comfortable reading this book. 5: The trial location chosen by Karl for Lux is in line with the idea of ​​dialectical materialism. It opens up the weak links in the extraordinary world, enhances its own strength and cultivates its own power, and then as its own abilities increase, it can change the world by itself! In line with materialism, I can only say that the author is awesome! ! ! !

It's like reading a historical text, just wearing a layer of Valoran skin. Come on, there are many disasters that Runeterra has to face. Darkborn, Demon, Void, Dragon King, Iron Man, Ruined King, World Rune is not a worry-free thing. The protagonist is a time-traveling dark descendant. After experiencing the horror of void invasion, he still plays "playing house" level class struggle with a little girl? The whole world is at stake

Stop thinking about your kind of fields. Nothing has changed in the fields that have been planted for 10 years. Now they are holding skills competitions... In real life, have you never participated in the May Day? Go read it in the novel... The fights that should be written are briefly mentioned, and the farming is written like an old woman's foot wraps are smelly and long.

Very good, but why use this world of individual power as the background? Material determines consciousness. The ideas and methods of our world are not suitable for a world where extraordinary power determines everything. Talking about politics and contradictions in this world is just a moonlight in the water and has no decisive effect.

The more I read, the more boring it becomes. The purpose of fan fiction is to see the collision of characters in the original work. It's all about stacking up settings and political struggles. What's the point of a time traveler adding a thousand-year identity and not cheating on it? If I tell you in advance that this is a farming novel, I won't read it.