Teacher Douluo, Please Save Me

At first I thought it was interesting even if I didn't watch Licking Bibi Dong and I didn't follow the protagonist group. Then the more I read it, the less interesting it became. There were a lot of typos, so I'll pay attention to them next time, but readers picked them out and didn't change them, and then they made the same mistakes again next time. Especially the fighting, it's hard to describe in one sentence. It's clear that the soul ring configuration is high, and the martial soul of Ultimate Darkness is also strong, but with such a top-matched martial soul and soul ring, you have to rely on trash talk, mentality and various damaging moves to win in the same realm.

It is recommended to learn from Blackbeard and use your Shadow of Darkness Martial Spirit to devour a martial spirit, so that you become a twin martial spirit. It is recommended to devour Tang Dachui. You can wait for the Titled Douluo to devour it, swallowing it together with the nine soul rings. If you write like this, I guarantee that you will order everything.

Create a silence effect like Sima Yi's second skill. Use the first soul skill to silence and interrupt others' soul skills, and then kill them.

The configuration is high, the protagonist is rubbish, he is really poisonous, and he is really disgusting to watch against the golden generation. After cultivating the relationship for so long, he will know some things and cannot write an original feeling. You can write like the Lord of Shadow Stream. When you enter the Soul Fighting Arena, you will become the Lord of Shadow Stream. Does that bear look match it? He doesn't look like the Lord of Shadow Stream at all. It's okay to kill him after a thousand years, and he also appears to bite people. There are still people behind him who praise him as a genius. Should he be afraid and pay attention? Is it worthy of a gangster fighting? Still want to fight Tang San? Does the protagonist have that qualification? A time traveler? After all, you are an adult. Have you never played games? Why is the battle so childish? Really poisonous

What does this book say? Very poisonous. The early stage looked pretty good. Ever since the protagonist absorbed the soul bone from his head. Obtained the Purple Divine Light. Did the author not understand it or something? That was the purple divine light that Tang San only had with the purple demon pupil. It's not just the head soul bone. There are also 7-in-one martial soul fusion skills. It is unique to the Seven Treasures Glazed Pagoda. It does not mean that there is a master. He always loses his temper with his woman.

When a level 33 fox fights against a level 36 fox, even if he can't crush the game, he still uses all possible means to win miserably, and then uses Millennium Kill on the fox? ? ? I just want to say that Tang San's fights in the original work were never so nasty. If Tang San was level 33 fighting a level 36 fox, the fox would be beaten violently without using a hidden weapon.

This protagonist is not likeable, he made a fortune following the Pope's lineage, but ended up inciting two teachers to rebel. Moreover, according to the logic of this book, Xie Yue should be the protagonist's only weakness, but the next second he actively verbally abused and disgusted him! Please forgive me for not wanting to be that person, so I had to withdraw.

I feel like I have no sense of immersion, the characters are also crazy, and it feels like the text is all in vain.

What's the point of this fight? The martial soul is better than the opponent, and the soul ring is better than the opponent. Eating grass jelly makes you immune to fire, and your mental strength is also strong. Then Da Yan and Hu Liena narrowly defeated each other

It involves several women in dozens of chapters, which is tolerable, but it caused amnesia within a few chapters of its release, which is extremely poisonous.

The three most annoying heroines in Douluo, the rabbit spirit Zhu Zhuqing and Hu Liena

Qian Renxue

I didn't see the advantages of martial arts. I didn't see how great the advantage was in terms of the constitution, soul power, quality, and age of the soul ring. It's almost a world of difference. Otherwise, why would you go all out to get more years? The risks are not proportional to the goods. The logic should be more logical. Use your brain more. Readers will think this is a good book when they see your attentiveness. Come on.

I feel that in the later stage, if I can push my martial soul to the top level, the upper limit of the soul ring is too high, and I have eaten so many fairy fucks, I can only push my soul power up to 4 levels at most.

How to put it this way, I feel that the protagonist's abilities are quite strong, but the moves he uses are too weak and fail to reflect his own strength. Instead, he feels a bit sneaky and sneaky. Also, the writing style is still a little immature, so work hard!

Judging from the title, I must think that the protagonist of this book will practice the Way of the Second Man. It's really exciting and exciting Master, save me!

This is a rubbish book. The main character is so useless. What happened to the three ultimate dark soul skills? The one who failed is not a small one. He couldn't be invincible at the same level. It took so much effort to defeat Hu Liena. Later, he went to fight with all the major forces and fought hard. The author has never read the original work, and the setting is wrong. He is 12, 3 years old and level 39. The protagonist also calls others rubbish. He can be said to be the number one genius in the mainland. The protagonist is simply a waste. It is recommended that everyone not watch it.

So when fighting, you should do whatever it takes, but to be honest, is that really the case? Thousand years of killing? Biting the thigh? The original work wouldn't dare to spend so much money

Qian Renxue is only eight years older than the male protagonist, but the author made it ten years older

I don't know what you think, author, but just killing a bug can scare the protagonist out of his wits

It's outrageous that all the traffickers have come out.

It's so bad, it's really all over the place, Shui Yun'er is inexplicable, and Ruola, they have become gods and they still can't control their passions. It doesn't matter if you say it's interference from divine power, but these people are keen on doing those things without interference?

Are there any Douluo fanfics where the single heroine is Qian Renxue?

Is it really easy for a level 98 Super Douluo to break through? Is grass jelly that powerful? Tang San himself didn't even know that he only knew that it could speed up the leveling up of people below level 70.

Can this be done?

People are not impressed, and the quality is not high.

Why is the author's paranoia so serious when writing Douluo fan fiction? Are they all taking in mothers and daughters? Anyone who is normal can't accept the mother and daughter, right? Sisters, you can still think about it

The plot and concept are excellent, but the writing is not good, there is too much trash talk, and there is no sense of immersion at all.

Why are there fewer and fewer updates? It takes several days to update a thousand words.

With extreme attributes, it's so difficult to fight at the same level. Isn't it too bad? With ultimate attributes, it's no problem to hit higher levels. What about you? It's so uncomfortable to fight against someone of the same level. It's so uncomfortable to fight against someone at the same level. You still keep mocking others without completely crushing them. You can't crush them with extreme attributes at the same level. You have the nerve to mock others. You are the only one who still has extreme attributes. You are completely embarrassing the extreme attributes.