Love Is Cautious

, I can only say come on, pay attention to grammar, fluency and typos before posting, and don't make paragraphs too long. Good luck and good luck 👍

That writing style is still very green. You have to write how you interact with people in normal situations. When someone tells you that you don't need to ask, you then say sorry to others for doubting you. It's very inconsistent because no one in the society will talk like this. The first is that it doesn't sound good. It's impossible for you to say that Ji Soo admires something because they are all young people and don't understand people's hearts like those foxes in their 40s and 50s. Furthermore, they are public figures and have to keep their inner thoughts secret. Then it's whose turn to introduce, rose. You wrote this expression as dissatisfaction with Ji Soo, but if you write it or it really exists in society, you don't hide this behavior from the male protagonist. This matter should not exist for idols. You can't show ugly expressions even if you are thrown by black fans. Any strange expression will be over-interpreted. This is something they will learn when they are trainees, not after their debut. There are very few BP books. I don't know if you can stick to it, but I hope you will continue to learn how to write in the process of writing a book. Come on