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Doing takeout in the era of big brother, haha, both of them would be bankrupt

I just happened to read this book. The author's pen name is quite special. I don't know what the meaning is. I've just finished reading a few chapters, and I'm looking forward to the exciting developments in the future!

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​: I also saw reviews of books that the author said he has been writing for more than ten years, but looking at the content of the book, I can't accept that it was written by a veteran. I was a little confused after reading the first chapter, and confused after reading the second chapter. After barely finishing the three golden chapters, I decided to run away. Thinking of the author's more than ten years of book writing experience, I decided to give some suggestions (just personal suggestions). My impression of the first three chapters of yours is chaotic! Very confusing! I have no idea what you want to express, there is no story at all! This is not my own opinion, I saw others in the comment section feeling the same way. This beginning will not attract people at all, so I suggest you refine it again. I haven't read the content after the third chapter, so I won't say more. But I really recommend the author to learn more about how to write a novel. I can't tell from your book that it was written by an experienced hand. I didn't feel the most important story aspect of the novel at all in your first three chapters. I just felt that you wrote it in a hurry and in a mess. I have only seen this from writers who are completely new to it. To put it bluntly, if you have been writing for more than ten years and are still at this level, I suggest you start practicing again with a short story of a few thousand words.

Will this book be bad? Are you blind?

I also want to understand the world of my fathers, and use the protagonist to travel through time to trace the traces of my fathers.

I think it's pretty good! In 1995, those who sold machines in a state-owned factory must have been educated by the police. Wasn't the protagonist's background abandoned by his parents since childhood and raised in an orphanage? Will his team win the first place in the 2022 Intelligent Robot Competition? This should be the ending! After reading the last few pictures, I realized that the airborne landing was just a conspiracy. It's just that the author's writing is a bit too plain, but it's okay, readable, and easy to understand.

The pace is so fast that this chapter could be written in detail for several chapters. The cause and effect are not clearly explained, and the storyline feels a bit awkward. Was the person who sold the equipment taken away by the police? I could write a chapter on this. The background of the protagonist... A lot of it is not clearly written. Don't rush the author, write slowly.

It feels like déjà vu, it's beautiful and the writing is very realistic!

It's quite imaginative, distinctive, and worthy of your attention. Come on, give it a thumbs up and update it soon!

Although there are not many words, it can be seen from the existing chapters that the author is still very good.