The Beginning: Learning Talents in the World of Film and Television

It was really amazing at first, but then I felt that the author was determined to feed readers dog food for someone, let alone the word "water". These days, the word "water" is a deformed product of the environment. If you don't have water, you can't fight for it. However, the rhythm is ruined by too much red tape. There are still some advantages, such as the on-the-spot introduction of various songs, although it is quite naughty.

Don't rush the author anymore, the rhythm is messed up and it will be difficult to have the best content in the future. Please don't rush and let her take her time to brew.

The Little Thing of First Love Xia Miaomiao as an adult

Because a certain author has been squeezed out and can't add more updates :), I couldn't wait any longer and had to do it myself. This is the plot after waking up in the second world that I was discussing in the group. I sorted it out and made it into a 10,000-word extra to satisfy my brothers and sisters. For the first time If you have any comments, please leave a message and tell me, thank you orz Maimai's pink dress

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How can I put it, it seems so awkward now, when two people who like each other have to twist and turn, it is the readers who are tormented. The blurred memory is a big poison. The protagonist has all kinds of promiscuity in the film and television world, but in reality, he is submissive. They are two different worlds. Not to mention how much has changed, but at least he must build up his confidence, right? Anyway, now I suggest you get your memories back as soon as possible. The two of them are sweet together, and the other is to build up the protagonist's self-confidence. His character is too twisted. Above.

. . . . What is the difference between this protagonist and a psychopath? Because you know and like Zhao Jinmai and then you go crazy over Li Shiqing? Is she still shy? Still worried about you? If Xiao Heyun didn't enter the cycle, only you and her would be able to make sense of this reaction. Now the beginning of this book feels like this to me: a psychopath knows that he likes Zhao Jinmai's face and wants to have sex with her, and then she also becomes a psychopath and you two fall in love with each other.

I didn't see the protagonist, I just saw a psycho who felt good about himself, and a group of psychos who were cooperating with him

Stream of consciousness writing is becoming more and more common. The author is caught up in self-pleasure, and the story narrative is very incomplete. The author needs to change it quickly. You are writing a novel, and you must have the narrative structure of a novel. You have not written a bunch of self-pleasure and obscene fragments. The fragments alone cannot support the outcome of a novel.

It feels like the protagonist is a seriously ill patient

The ever-changing heroine

Did you just let yourself go in the first world? What you know is the beginning, what you don't know is the autobiography of a mental patient.

If you can, just keep writing. The Beginning, Pi, Take My Brother Away Movie Version, Rebirth, Linglong, All Zhao Jinmai🤭

The author writes very well, don't write it next time

Not recommended, quality education kept me from spouting dirty words

Rub, rub, rub! ! If you write a protagonist who grinds and grinds like a sissy, I will go crazy! ! Where do all these inner dramas come from! ! This dog system's electric shock warning point is really poisonous, extremely poisonous!

This protagonist is somewhat perverted.

I have been scolded too much recently, so I can only change the settings first, and then change them back later. I am very sorry if it causes trouble to you! 1: First of all, I would like to apologize to my book friends for the recent chapter. Due to my ability, I was unable to write this plot well, which made it boring and boring, which affected your reading experience. Two: Someone once asked me that the protagonist's awakening time is different from that of Li Shiqing. He has a complete day and super powers. Why can't he go crazy? I think so myself, but I just indulged myself a little by avoiding harmony and the non-American comic background of this book. Three: A book friend just said that this repetition is too boring, and it is impossible for pure college student Li Shiqing to fall in love with a stranger just because of a confession! I want to say that what you said is right, and I wrote it the same way. As for why you still ask this, it is obviously because you have lost interest in reading and just read the most recent chapters. 4: The problem of the small theater makes this book seem frivolous, especially in the dungeon plot, I will pay attention to it. Five: I feel that the readers attracted by Beginning are mostly young people and fans of Li Shiqing. This book is also biased towards romance, but maybe I am not very patient, and I also have problems with my writing skills, which is why the book is a bit sloppy. Six: Let's sort out what happened in the copy cycle. The thirteenth cycle is the dividing line.... Li Shiqing and Xiao Heyun are still waiting to wake up on the bus. Su Yuzhe opened another copy with a loop. Except for the concert, the protagonist did not attract Li Shiqing through his confession. It was the love and understanding of her during the relationship, coupled with the encouragement and help of his best friend, that gradually made Li Shiqing try to fall in love. Remember, it's just trying... Not falling in love. The 13th time: The protagonist claimed that his cousin went to sing downstairs in the girls' dormitory. At the instigation of his best friend, Li Shiqing tried to go out together and went to the concert. (I didn't write it because I was moved by the confession!) The 14th time: It was discovered that Li Shiqing had no memory. The protagonist sent a book to prevent Li Shiqing from getting on the bus, and then went out to wander. The 15th time: The protagonist was thrown to death while driving! The 16th time: I took Li Shiqing to bungee jumping and was slapped! The 17th time: Go to the entertainment venue to find girls and fight until early morning. The 18th time: I took the initiative to approach Li Shiqing again, arranged flowers, baked cakes and watched a movie together, went to a small park in the evening to see the beautiful scenery of the Boardwalk, and sent her back to school. The 19th time: I asked the basketball team to dance "Catch and Jump" together, and Zhao Erxi threw a basin of water on it. Then I went swimming with Li Shiqing's three best friends, and ate and sang in the evening! The 20th time: I took my cousin Li Shiqing to meet Qin Rourou. After Qin Rourou's analysis, the protagonist confirmed that he really fell in love with Li Shiqing and was not a substitute. The 21st cycle: Confess your love again, take Li Shiqing to Ethan's concert... Sing a song for her! ...... It's over, stop here! Thank you for your follow-up reading and comments. I didn't write this plot well, so I'll be sure to pay attention to it in the future! Let us look forward to what Li Shiqing, who has recovered all her memories, will think of Su Yuzhe's theft.

At the beginning of the plot, the male protagonist was written like a lunatic. There is no such outrageous brain circuit if the brain grows on the muscles. Later, when it was almost over, there was a double headshot. This is how this force is used. What's so cool about it? And then another hero will appear with bullets and bombs?

The writing is terrible, and a lot of the original plot is used to fill the content. I came to see something different, not to watch the original drama again. The male protagonist is also a wretched man with well-developed limbs and a simple mind. He only knows to call Mai Mai, suck ~ I feel like vomiting. If you want to write your own original plot, please don't use the title of the film and television drama. If you bring it, write it better. Everyone is here to solve the case, not to watch a person's yy.

The protagonist is written like a psychopath, jumping up and down, and the heroine is still shy and worried after all? I didn't even finish the story at the beginning and I was really going to be poisoned to death. I clicked into this book and it really made my eyes dirty.

Watching TV series, many people criticize Li Shiqing, what's wrong with society? When she pretended to have heart discomfort, her aunt actively gave her medicine. When he was pretending to be raped, the Internet celebrity brother took the initiative to leave a certificate and said that the police would contact him if needed, and the muscle brother stepped forward to help. Pretending to quarrel broke other people's melons, and the uncle didn't blame them after sharing the melons with everyone. There are no indifferent people in the car, and they are all criticizing Our Lady. When is it wrong to be kind and do whatever you want? Our Lady is always a complimentary word. When is it wrong to be kind to society?

I read a few books about the beginning. The main characters basically look like they came out of a mental hospital. Sure enough, those who can time travel are not normal people.

Antecedent: Li Shiqing takes the bus to buy books, Xiao Heyun takes the bus to the company for a meeting, and the protagonist delivers express delivery! The first cycle: Li Shiqing was killed when she woke up from sleep, and the protagonist passed by at the intersection. The second loop: Li Shiqing woke up and was killed by the explosion. The protagonist discovered the loop and found the bus. The third cycle: Li Shiqing interfered with the driver, and the protagonist was hit by a bus trying to get out of the way at the intersection, causing a car accident and a double kill! The 4th cycle: As above, this time the protagonist gets into a car accident in line with the plot. The 5th loop: The protagonist waited for the bus in advance and greeted Li Shiqing, and then the car crashed and exploded! The 6th cycle: Li Shiqing kidnapped Xiao Heyun out of the car, but failed to keep the appointment of life and death with the protagonist. The protagonist was killed in a car accident and fell into a state of excitement. The 7th cycle: teammates +1, Xiao Heyun enters the cycle! Start repeating! The protagonist is resurrected and explodes again! The 8th slave cycle: Xiao Heyun, a new player, caused trouble. Li Shiqing lay down helplessly. After saying hello to the protagonist, she was killed in a car accident again! The 9th cycle: Li Shiqing shouted: Don't come over! The protagonist did not touch the porcelain, Li Shiqing and Xiao Heyu were killed by bombs, the protagonist got off work, ended his death, and restored the original cycle time. The 10th loop: The protagonist went to see Li Shiqing in the morning. Memory can affect Li Shiqing in the loop. Li and Xiao got out of the car to intercept the protagonist, and the three-person team met. The 11th cycle: Li Shiqing shouted that there was a bomb in the car, Auntie Guo detonated it in advance, the two died, and the protagonist got off work early! The 12th cycle: Li Shiqing got out of the car and called the police. Then the trio gathered. The police failed to rescue, Xiao Jiang died, and then entered the police station! The 13th cycle: ..... The dividing line starts from here! Li Shiqing and Xiao Heyun on the bus are still on their thirteenth cycle! But the protagonist prevented Li Shiqing and Xiao Heyun from getting on the bus, and the loop memory was not awakened, so they started a new loop alone! ..... More updates later!

The writing is so disgusting, anti-human, right?

The protagonist is a psychopath with well-developed limbs and a simple mind. Jumping up and down like a fool. To be honest, it's hard to like. Unless the author forces the arrangement, no woman would like such a person.

Mai Mai

Brothers! In fact, my archive has already accumulated 70,000 words, and I'm afraid I'll go crazy if I continue writing. But the actual situation no longer allows for more updates every day, either deleting articles or adding updates. But I can't wait to test the waters and push... I don't dare to go too fast. You can't run around naked. The starting books for the frontline troops have been recommended and then took off... I feel like I want to cry without tears. I will try to reduce the number of updates in the next few days this week to see if I can wait for recommendations. If not, I will add more updates naked. Thank you all book friends for your continued support and rewards, thank you very much! Finally, sincerely say... Mai Mai is mine.

It's very, very ugly. I forced myself to read it, but I really couldn't stand it. The author went crazy inexplicably as he wrote it. Maybe he was suffering from an illness. Then he wrote the protagonist like a pervert. He wanted to write about the pleasure and freedom of the game life, but he wrote it like a neurosis suffering from polio. A primary school student can write better with his feet than this. I really don't know why a lot of people say it is good-looking. Maybe it's because this was the first book I started doing as a fan at that time, so I took advantage of time.

I'm very sorry to tell you that the volume of "Liangxingxing" is not very well written. I'm very sorry. When I was writing it, the main perspective was still that of Lin Beixing. The male protagonist Su Yuzhe just carried his grandfather's system. There were a lot of interactions at the beginning, but his presence gradually became very low later on. When I wrote this part of the plot, the content of the book was still at the beginning, and there was no one to communicate with and there was no way to adjust it. As soon as I posted it, I felt something was wrong! First of all, many readers who were attracted by Mai Mai have never seen Bright Stars and have no interest in Bright Stars. Secondly: the male protagonist does not dismantle the cp, and does not appear to guide the plot. Some book friends suggested that next time you write about this kind of other world, you should write the protagonist well and write it at a fast pace. If you don't want to break down the cp, then just pick up the pieces. Originally, I planned to gain some rewards with academic attributes in this world. In fact, when I finished publishing the first chapter of Bright Star, I almost collapsed. I didn't know how to write the subsequent plot. The whole story was written according to the flow. This volume is actually unfinished, but I have to give an ending. Oh no, or from the middle, if you can't focus on Lin Beixing's perspective, it will already be boring. We should have taken the thick wool route after guiding Lin Beixing through his senior year of high school, instead of focusing on the love story between Lin Beixing and Zhang Wansen. Forget it... Just don't say it! I would like to say I am very sorry to all the book friends. It was my willfulness and I will make adjustments in the future. Book friends who have suggestions and ideas can come to the free water friends group. In addition, after writing Bright Star, there will be a section focusing on the main world, and then the small matter of first love, which may change the plot. I understand very well the book friends who criticize me, and I am very grateful to the book friends who have opened custom books and trusted me. Thank you very much for your support. I hope we can meet again at that time! In addition, I feel a little ashamed of the silent reward from the past boss!