The Shogunate Begins with the Third Ninja War

Come on, author, I like the protagonist very much. He looks like a fool. He is often slapped in the face for being funny. He is reckless and talkative. But this kind of divine logic is actually a mockery of being incompatible with the ninja world. It's not that much of a sly thing, it's not that I'm a coward and calls myself Lao Yin, it's not that I just lie flat, and there's no exaggerated LSP in the end. I really like the fearlessness of the protagonist, especially in a fucked up world like the ninja world. I don't care about the writing style and I don't understand it. What I care about is the author's imagination and the logic that breaks out of the world view of the original work. It doesn't matter what the character of the protagonist is, but the most important thing is not to lick, and to dare to say no to the ninja world. . Dare to shake a fist at the ninja world, many authors are biased in writing. The purpose of fan fiction is to realize the dream. It means that it is hard to reconcile the meaning of the original work. If you don't subvert it, what kind of fan fiction can you write? I am a long-time fan, and I love reading this kind of imaginative article about cleaning up the ninja world. Thank you! I am very happy to see it, please update more.

Traveling to Naruto, without playing with chakra or cultivating immortality, what is the protagonist going to do? Other loser protagonists have poor qualifications at best, but the protagonist of this book has no qualifications at all, which is quite speechless.

Doesn't the protagonist know that sentence? In the face of absolute power, any conspiracy is useless!

When did Hiruzen Sarutobi become known as the God of Ninja? Isn't he a Shinobi?

Did the author cut this? That's right, I haven't read it but I read the comments. The protagonist doesn't play with chakra or senjutsu. Naruto's training system is just these two. If you don't play it, it won't have the taste of Naruto. If you write a Naruto fan novel that doesn't taste pure, no one will read it. After all, most of us came to see Naruto. You can't even play with the cultivation system, and not many people can stand it.

Naruto doesn't want money, and he writes fan fiction without even reading the original work? Are you just making it up all by yourself?

The protagonist is too mentally retarded and full of chuunibyou, which is very unpleasant to watch.

How about clarifying Naruto's level first before writing? Is it a special jounin who doesn't know anything?

It's a mess, so don't write it, it's a waste of your time!

Abandoned the book, the author☁Hokage made me vomit after reading it

Same as Shet

Hi nt author, wasting my time

Chapter 24 starts to shed some light, obviously the previous part was well written

Has anyone read the Conan fanfics from the ancient times? Conan's Police Story, this book is the author's new work. Everything starts from scratch. The brothers support Uncle Fang, and I, the secretary-general, will take the lead in the charge.