Green Decathlon

The beginning is written about the national football team. . . Can persuade most people to retreat

Friends who read the book suggest starting from chapter 31

Very well written, don't write it next time

It's well written, and it's the only new competitive book I've been able to read recently.

Business sense. . . Do you really think that stars invest on their own?

Write less emotional lines, you are still young, it will be too embarrassing to watch!

The number of words in each chapter is a bit short.

Watching him get promoted, watching him go 3-0 in the first game, watching him. . . . . .

The writing style is generally very immature and the story is bland, not attractive enough to read. After all, it can be understood by newcomers. The advantage is that the rhythm is relatively smooth and there are no poisonous points. It can tell a complete and smooth story. It has enough potential. What it lacks is just experience. My personal suggestion is to accumulate experience while maintaining the current style and rhythm, highlighting the character of the protagonist, writing as few emotional scenes as possible, don't include knowledge of goods, and slightly increasing character interaction to increase interest.

Very well written, keep up the good work👍👍

Many people think they have invested, and you know, the money is waiting there. In fact, some things are just like a wolf stealing a sheep. If you steal, the owner will eat less, and then people will unite to shut down the dog and beat the dog. If you become a dog and seek refuge with people, you can share some food with you. If you want to become a human and raise sheep, have you asked the attitude of the sellers and mutton eaters? A lion is awesome and cannot stand up to human greed and will kill you, and a wolf is fierce and cannot stand up to your intimidation. Threatening the interests of mankind and massacring them, don't say that you are going to other countries, just say that you are in your own country. The difficulty of getting from an ordinary person to the top of the pyramid is smaller than the chance of being cured of cancer. Think about how many sins and desperate struggles you have suffered in the middle, how many people have lost their lives in the middle, and the lucky few are cured because of luck or money. The chance of becoming a human being is even smaller than this, so your success sometimes really depends on luck and the starting point of the backstage. And the Internet is like thousands of troops crossing a single-plank bridge. Anyone who succeeds will not think that they are the son of destiny the day before. Microsoft is not the first to make software, Google is not the first to make browsers, and Twitter is not the same, not to mention the successful imitation companies in China. Hundreds of them compete at the same time, so people would rather sell 10% of the 50 million investment from big companies. For shares, you will not be asked to invest 100 million to get 15% of the shares, unless you have no vision or are easily satisfied. Some companies fail because of a small wrong decision or a small mentality problem of the leader. So if you can really influence their historical development, then they will 100% not have the success they have now. Don't bet on the greed of countless living people with the results you know. Even if you are so awesome that you turn a few of them into brother companies, that person will never be able to go against the trend. The best result is to take out the money. This is the fate of too many trusts in the United States, let alone one person. If you want to mix well, the best result is that you can earn 100 billion, and all 80 billion will be distributed, because you have snatched this 100 billion from the shares of countless peers and the tables of other capitalists. Only by sharing most of the interests to form an alliance or join an alliance can you take the lead in eating other people's flesh instead of being eaten by others. After all, only the largest, tallest and most ferocious wolves can unite to eat the fattest sheep. Even after a tiger kills its prey, the pack of wolves can work together to drive it away. The king has to draw water from a bamboo basket to make a futile effort and know the current affairs, otherwise he will still be a meal on his plate.

Geng is too little, don't say too much, at least two thousand words a day, many people are trying to support it, and Geng is too little and it is easy to die.

The Marine Corps has come out. Will he eventually go to Liverpool? He will be a superstar under Uncle Zha. He happens to be one year older than Son Heung-min. He can make great achievements in building the team in 14 years.

In order to avoid unnecessary trouble, pseudonyms will be used for some domestic club names and personal names in this book. I ask for your understanding here. I will speed up the early pace of this book and let the protagonist move to a larger stage in a reasonable way.

Off-site branch lines can also be enriched.

The writing is dry and too fast. Really, you just have a little more content than the outline of the story. It is like a running account. You have to write carefully and broadly. The characters have no image at all. A 3D movie is written as a 2D painting, which is still drawn by a beginner.