Ball Iron Guard

When I read Chapter 10, I was confused. Regardless of the performance on the field, the forward changed to guard, and training was never mentioned. It was just mentioned in a very inexplicable way. Not to mention the flow of writing, time and space were still confused. When he talked about a fight in the woods, he immediately turned into teammates saying that he played well. What a mess.

The author should write slowly, his writing can be polished slowly, and he should write a more realistic novel. Don't write it like the kind of invincible novel about me being the best in the world and being invincible. It's not interesting. The career of a super athlete can only be exciting if it has ups and downs. No athlete can always be at the top. After all, no one can be 18 years old forever, but there are always people who are 18 years old.

Brother, stop writing. I'm confused after reading one chapter!

Except for the slow pace, everything else is pretty good.