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After devouring fans, you are the only one left in my bookshelf. I originally had a sword, but it's a pity that Hanhan's writing was too stingy. Virtual Universe Company is like a beggar.

Complain about it After reading a lot of Devouring fandoms, you will find that they have a common problem - the strong people of the tribe are always in shock, and they are all shocked at the protagonist. Every time the protagonist does something, there will be a strong person who will shock him, which can reflect how strong, talented and shocking the protagonist is. Normally strong people maintain their own identity, plus they have lived for a long time and are well-informed, and their mood swings should not be particularly strong unless it is a matter of life and death or due to their own personality. The fan author has no other way of describing the protagonist's strength from the side. It is easy to write them in such a way that they are shocked and shocked. The strong person does not look like a strong person, but like a group of grandma Liu who just entered the Grand View Garden.

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The novel Earth Swallowed Starry Sky is the pinnacle of the novel "The Battle of Geniuses", and then it starts to go downhill. Personally, I feel that the later chapters are difficult to write. One of the reasons is that the calculation of combat power is easy to write down, and the other is to enter the virtual universe company, the growth route, and the machine selection is just that. You can write some of your own ideas, but it cannot surpass the original work, which makes it boring to watch!

I want to know, the author, how you will solve the problem after the earth is found out by the overlords of the universe? You must know that Hong did not remind Luo Feng after he knew in advance that the special characteristics of the earth were exposed, and he did not even fart. This is a fact (Hong was a disciple of Giant Ax at that time). How would you solve this problem, author? Kill them directly or something? (Luo Feng was a disciple of City Lord Hun and was still forced to give up his right to live in most of the earth.) Moreover, the earth at that time was bullied by the cosmic people who were also the main camp of mankind for a long time. Hong still didn't fart. (I forgot the specific details! It seems!) To be honest, when I read the original work, I really wanted to kill all the powerful cosmic humans and wipe out their tribe. What would you write, author? There is no need for the author to reveal specific details. As long as the author can give a sentence, can you prevent this from happening? ? If you don't let this happen, you can only kill him and threaten them to stop it. It's useless, because the Chaos City Lord at that time couldn't make them compromise. Can you, the author? Otherwise, this would be a big poisonous point, because the protagonist knew the plot and still let it happen to him. What else could it be if it wasn't a poisonous point?

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I feel that the quality of the plot starting from the chessboard of heaven and earth has dropped by more than one level. The description and performance of the protagonist are a bit childish, and the word "um" pops up at every turn, as well as the "Invincible Hot Wheels", and the performance of the cosmic sea later, especially the sentence "The three-eyed ancestor god An dares to bully me" It made me laugh. The main rhythm of the cosmic sea is to fight for treasures. Do you think you have been to every house? In the original work, what was Luo Feng's performance like when he entered the cosmic sea and was pursued by the Lord of the Five Huns? Respond calmly, be able to escape, but not escape. The clone dragged Wu Hun to death. Afterwards, he just regarded it as a normal thing and prepared to kill Wu Hun later when he had the strength. Wu Hun's description was also very normal. It was just a fight. There would be no inexplicable sulking and funny actions. And what about the protagonist? Inexplicably, he believed in the three-eyed ancestor god. After being used to block the gun, he hid in the ancient god's space and sulked. He slapped the chair and said, "How dare the three-eyed ancestor god bully me?" And his subordinates also agreed? Is this what a strong person should do? This is the way to write a mentally retarded male protagonist in a palace fighting drama, and it is extremely dramatic when used here. Even if it is simpler to directly write about the protagonist using the ancient god space to take advantage of the two true gods, it feels better than adding these side descriptions. The writing style of this book is very different from before to later. The strong style in the front is completely lost in the back. I don't know whether the author let himself go or someone else changed the story. The protagonist behaves relatively calmly in the front, but in the back he looks like an adventure story for a "high school student" (that may be an exaggeration, but it makes me feel like the male protagonist of a Japanese comic high school student). The character creation has not kept up with the progress of the copy, and the thinking mode has not kept up with the progress of his own strength.

In Swallowing the Starry Sky, only the Earth chapter is okay, but the other chapters are boring

Personally, I think Hong's cultivation talent is obviously a level higher than that of Luo Feng himself. He cultivated the field on his own at the planet level with almost no external systematic education. He is simply a monster. Thor is very good and has better talent than Luo Feng. In fact, you can focus on investing in the three of them, not just Luo Feng. Since they are the same person, they can give Hong and Lei Shen all the opportunities that Luo Feng has, such as clones, encounters in secret realms, secret books, chaos tablets, powerful teachers, etc., And I believe that their achievements will not be worse than Luo Feng.

I have long wanted to complain about the protagonist's title of Lord of the Universe. The god is called the Ancient Lord. Isn't it better to just call him the Ancient God? Although the title of the Lord of the Universe is the Lord of xx, it is not necessarily the case. There is no mandatory rule in this regard. Aren't Emperor Yan, the Lord of Chaos City, and Luo Feng's Galaxy Lord an example?

Swallowing the Starry Sky - The original book is not very good either. It just has a novel setting. I like to read stories on the earth, but I changed the map early.

The protagonist is a disciple of the original ancestor who is also a disciple of the Lord of Chaos City. The status is comparable to that of the Lord of the Universe. What qualifications do the immortal princes of the Universe Country have to welcome the protagonist personally when attending a banquet? They should kneel down and express gratitude to the boastful protagonist for allowing them to see him. Even if you borrow the plot from the original work, you still have to use your brain.

The back is really too much of a nanny. Everyone who has anything to do with him wants to be taken away without reservation! I really couldn't accept the Enlightenment Monument from the beginning! All such opportunities are fully open! The most important thing is that the Monument of Enlightenment cannot recognize its owner! How can I put it this way? I feel like the protagonist is too scheming! There are various restrictions on other people's inheritance! Come to the protagonist and let go! No matter who it is! Don't be afraid even if two god kings reincarnate! It was as if he was destined to be invincible and no one could be better than him!

Is this book a nanny novel? What kind of good things are you giving to someone like Luo Feng?

The hook is too fierce, and the world beast is now a toy. The complete restoration of the eternal ancient world is the infinite Chaotic Source space, and Daogu is Pangu😎.

Is this the one who stabbed the Devouring Nest?

This book is good. Apart from the fact that the main character "gives birth" to 18 children, there is nothing toxic about it for me.

After resurrecting Hu Yanbo, he should be killed in front of Dang Babata. Hu Yanbo didn't regard the earthlings as human beings and he liked to enslave souls at will, so he was killed for the sake of the plot, otherwise it would be the protagonist's turn to rise. . .

Is there any Devouring fanfic that I can watch?

Ball refining

The writing is good, but after reading it, I feel that there are too few words. Well, I will leave recommendation votes for you every day. Come on, the author is great!

The author's ideas and creativity are really great. Currently, you are ranked second in my mind when it comes to integrating the creativity of Devouring fans into the setting. I found that the ancient gods in the author's creation "The Immortal Rebellion" are really in line with the Devouring system. The setting of the four-star ancient gods is said to have a basis for subsequent control of the rules. It just corresponds to the domain of the Domain Lord. After all, the domain is also for the Devouring system. In order to better perceive the fluctuations of the law, the five-star ancient god touches the rules and corresponds to the realm master. The realm master happens to focus on understanding the laws during this period. The six-star ancient god fully masters the rules and corresponds to immortality. After all, immortality can only be achieved by understanding a law, and he also has the ability in the field of laws, which corresponds to the six-star. It is really wonderful! The one-star ancient god set by the author corresponds to the planetary level, and the nine-star ancient god corresponds all the way up to the true god level, the strongest person in the universe. The only thing that I personally feel bad about is that the name of the secret method created by the author at the beginning of the name of the abandoned protagonist is too old-fashioned. When people see what this thing is, they usually just take a look and leave without insisting on putting it on the shelves. I personally thought about it for a while and replaced "Xuanzong Sword Code" with "Lingzong Xuanjian", and replaced the old-fashioned name of "Phantom Xiaoyao" with "Close to Me", which ignores space and time. In line with the effect, I replaced the simple "Spiritual Phantom" with "True Illusion" and replaced the dragon with a real dragon. This feels a bit more upscale. Of course, this is also my personal feeling. Everything else is fine. Alas, it can only be said to be a pity. There should have been better results. The author should be writing a book for the first time and has no experience in naming.

The old author recommends his new book "The Mentor and Helpful Friend of the Villain Reborn in Swallowing the Starry Sky" Li Zhou can get multiple feedback on the efforts of the villain reborn. Emperor Yan, Queen of the Zerg, World Beast Bedi... The timeline is before the original ancestor was suppressed.

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