May I Ask Who You Studied Under?

I have talked a lot with the author in the past few days about the performance of this book. I believe everyone has seen that compared to the books in the rankings, the author's book is, to be honest, better by I don't know how many grades. However, it is such a good-looking book, but it has no performance. As for the author, I look at him and he seems to be a little overwhelmed. I have also seen the background data. There are only a few dozen subscriptions every day. Up to now, there are only more than a thousand subscriptions a month. To put it bluntly, I have been reading for so long, and I have never seen that author with such poor grades and still working hard to write. But people need to eat more, and the picture shows a few taels of broken silver. The author talked to me a lot today, mostly from him, and I was listening. He told me that he didn't want it to end like this, but this book was no longer good, and asked me if I would continue reading it if I restarted the entire Tianyuan system. To be honest, why do I personally like the author's books so much. In addition to the character of the protagonist written by the author, which is very consistent with my wishes, the continuous Tianyuan system is also an important bonus. The author's books, from the first one to the present, although every time they fail to have a happy ending due to poor grades, the stories are all related. There are very few books like this nowadays. I cherish the author Da Da very much, so I thought about it while I was sleeping, and decided to post a post to tell everyone. If you want the author to restart the entire Tianyuan system, please leave a message to let the author see that there are so many people supporting him.

The author means to open a thread and see how many people come to the black bar.

I laughed, this is another novel about a person who has been cultivating immortality for thousands of years and then reincarnated into a novice cultivating immortality, showing off his touching IQ in the mortal world.

In fact, there are no requirements for personal reading. As long as you don't engage in fake and disgusting things, it's fine.

The protagonist's character is honestly quite unlikable.

Returning to the reckless man style, if I want to see Brother Jiang hammering people, it's best to have a 360-degree spiral collision.

It feels like the writing is really messy, and it feels so pale and feeble.

It's too depressing. To be honest, the author really doesn't need to write it like this at the beginning. The result of this writing is that old readers will give up after just reading it, and there will basically be no new readers. The beginning of the chapter has no foreshadowing, no introduction, no excessive introduction, and it is also cruel. It will directly send away most new readers and bookworms who are not reading. Take your time, why are you in a hurry? The current content and plot of this book can be postponed completely. You can write some beautiful ordinary life content in the front. After five, six, seven or eight chapters, monsters will be introduced through an event in the school (implying that the world is not ordinary), and monsters will be introduced through counter-killing. The beads will be obtained through counter-killing, which will increase the alienation value and make the world that the protagonist can occasionally observe true, and then lead to the current content (a world of despair)

To be honest, I like the character of the protagonist very much, and the plot is not cliché. However, after reading about ten chapters of the plot, I couldn't find a key point. Maybe the author wanted to lay out too big a plot, but I couldn't find the key point, so I didn't read it.

Some monster pictures found on Weibo

I sorted out what I have written so far in this book. It can be seen that the background of this book is very grand, and the difficulty level is probably very high. First, when Brother Jiang entered this world, he entered by force. Please refer to the first picture for details. Secondly, judging from Liu Baiyuan's plot, this world should belong to the kind of worldview in which only a part of the world remains. Liu Baiyuan and the others are the last group of monks. The others should be almost dead, or have become monsters in the edge world, transitional world and the outside world. For details, please refer to the information written in the first 25 chapters. Third, this is the most important thing, that is, the inner demon catastrophe. I thought this thing was an illusion at first, but from the author's writing in such a large space, I personally feel that this inner demon catastrophe is likely to be related to the world view, and it should be a very important point. As for the details, we will look at it next. The fourth is the world of inner demons. From the current point of view, the background of this world should belong to the invaded world. For details, please refer to the two chapters of the scripture. What really matters to me is that from the current perspective, this world does not look like a fantasy, but a real world. However, Brother Jiang has not been able to get in touch with the truth so far and is still wandering around. The only good thing is that Brother Jiang has obtained an inheritance and is barely a blank body. The setting of this world is very dark, and the character setting is also very dark. The combination of the two always makes people feel very cruel. I am currently very curious about the ultimate purpose of this world, and I am also looking forward to the author's reversal. I won't say too much. What can be seen so far is really limited. I can only say that if this book is written at this pace, it should be very exciting.

How did it take so long to overcome this inner demon?

The author of Pujie is seeking to read it online. I hope this book can be recommended! ! !

I admit that your writing is beautiful. But good writing comes from good writing. If you write a prelude, it will be gone. How about you? Poor grades should not be an excuse for your failure. An attitude like this doesn't matter how good your writing is. Never get good grades

The writing is really good, but the author writes one book and throws out another one, which makes people sigh. Nowadays, it is really difficult for a good book with a serious starting point to get ahead.

I started with Brother Jiang's layout and read it in detail, from what he told Li Meng to what he wrote after he retreated behind the scenes. I doubted that Brother Jiang had woken up. After all, he gave all his golden elixir to Li Meng, and because of Jiang Zheng's plan to reach the sky in one step, it seems that Brother Jiang may have woken up. The layout behind this looks like a conspiracy. Coupled with the plot of the talisman, I can boldly speculate that Brother Jiang boarded Tongjiuyou, then woke up, and felt that there was something wrong with his one-step climb to the sky. He gave the golden elixir to Li Meng, made her a target, and then hid himself. In this way, combined with the plot of the talisman, everything seems to become more reasonable. But now that Brother Jiang has woken up, I don't understand why he hasn't escaped from his inner demons, and what is he planning now? The author's copy is wonderful. Now I'm just waiting for the author to finally reveal the mystery. Then I'll see if it's the same as I guessed.

Your sign cannot be a light novel, it should be classified as a fantasy cultivating immortality. I accidentally saw this book on someone else's book list. It is well written but the category is wrong, and the title of the novel is not attractive enough. I read this book just because I was waiting for takeout and flipped through it. It must be renamed and classified into the fantasy and immortality category, so that it has a chance to stand out, and I think some of the descriptions in the article are not good 😒 The world view and plot of the novel are quite attractive.

My writing was okay at the beginning, but after arriving in the new world, I felt that my writing became worse and worse.

I am a student of Master Ma. May I ask who you are a student of😁😁

After reading ten chapters, I still don't know what I'm talking about. Who is the protagonist? What kind of world is this? What is the Tianyuan system? There is a reason why your book is not popular. There is not much introduction. How can you retain people if you don't write something in the first three chapters?

I didn't read the book, I just looked at the title. I'm learning from Feng Ling Yueying.

It was quite complicated to see the author saying that he wanted to finish the story hastily, but the result felt to be expected. Let me tell you my personal opinion. I feel that this book is a relatively typical one that is well-received but not well-received. First of all, it is about Tianyuan System and Jiang Shang. Readers who have followed the previous works have a certain understanding of these two, but for new readers, this has invisibly raised the reading threshold. At least based on my own experience of following it directly from this book, half of The World of Inner Demons was really in the dark, and it wasn't until I finished the previous work and added the boss's message that I could roughly understand it. The second issue is about the length of the world of inner demons. Although I know that the author wants to give a big character to the protagonist in this volume, it is too much and too detailed for the first official copy. Generally speaking, the first few books should be served as "appetizers", but the author directly serves the "dinner" in the first book. The result is that new readers like me develop "indigestion". In addition, I personally think there is a problem with the transition arrangement into the world of inner demons. The author wants to describe a world in as much detail as possible. But personally I think this is a failure in connecting the two worlds, and it feels like I suddenly changed the book while watching it. Finally, I wish the author good success with his next book.

It looked like a seedling and I planned to keep it first, but today I saw a book with less than 500,000 words. God, a new book has been released. Is the author so awesome?

. . . . . It's very well written, but it's a little confusing.

Good guy, you just collected and kept it and it's over? Sister-in-law, thank you for your hard work😓😓

I read the beginning, it's pretty good, it flows smoothly and I want to read on. But my writing skills are good, but don't pretend to be advanced. Your introduction and chapter names are really unattractive. I clicked on your new book Bajiquan.

Let me talk about it here. Book friends who like this book should try to support it. After all, no matter what you do, no one can persist without gain. I also know a little about the starting point. If the average subscription is less than 500, basically a book should be Eunuch, but the author's last book I have seen the hard work, so I believe that the book friends who have followed this book should really like the author's writing style, and hope to support him more or less based on their own abilities. One hundred and eighty yuan is not enough to go out for a bowl of rice, but it can make the author work hard to write a book, which is quite cost-effective.

Hey, you can see from this chapter how exciting the author's background and subsequent plots are. It's such a pity. We can only see the plot of the world of inner demons. There is no way to see the world of fire and the Hunyuan Xuanjie of the Taiyi Twelve Golden Chapters. It's such a pity for such a good book.

Can anyone explain what I'm talking about next, about the world of gods or something like that? I'm even wondering if I'm looking for the wrong book.

Don't get me wrong, this is a continuation of the previous novel, so it's normal to not understand it. The previous novel was about endless battles. Very good, I just watched it this time.