People in Marvel: My Talents Can Be Infinitely Enhanced

After reading a few chapters, I feel like complaining. Kama Taj is located in the Himalayas, and is set in Tibet. However, all the characters produced in the past, except the king, are all foreigners, and everyone calls the protagonist "Oriental boy, Oriental, which is very strange

What are Sanjiang and Zhou Qiang pushing now?

No matter how powerful or bullshit you say, everyone will just tie people up with chains. What's the use of learning so many magics? Do you not have the ability to write or have no imagination? You just know how to tie people up and beat them to the sword, and then you brag about how strong you are after you finish the job?

I've read the first few chapters. Let's not talk about the plot. You have too many typos. Why haven't you corrected them after such a long time?

It's very watery, with all kinds of shocking structures. The writing skills are very poor, and the sense of dissonance is very strong, as if I am reading a novel about cultivating immortality by a novice, which ruins the atmosphere of Western fantasy. The dialogue is very juvenile, normal people would not speak like this.

Absorb and use the surrounding environment. Is this how Marvel's magic is set up?

When I saw the New York battle, I vomited and couldn't resist it.

Not recommended, it's just a running account.

Is there anyone who writes that Marvel doesn't lick Chaoying and Gu Yi, and stands up to be a human being? They are the kind of people who have their own will and purpose, and will destroy anyone who dares to stand in the way. It has nothing to do with justice or evil.

Casillas rebelled for his family... How did he become so pretentious?

You can write less about surprise. After all, novels are not like movies, they are too expressive.

The source of Marvel magic doesn't even know what you're writing about? And if you learn magic in Marvel Karma Taj, no matter how talented you are, you can't surpass Weishan Emperor.

The author, Ancient One was present at the time.

After reading dozens of free chapters, I feel that the writing is very simple. Learn magic from a and you will learn it instantly. A said, you are such a genius. I was so shocked. I learned from b again, and I learned it immediately. B said, I was so shocked, you are really a monster. I learned from c again and learned it in no time. C said, I can't believe it, you are so talented, how could there be someone as talented as you. I learned from D again, and I learned it right away... D said, you are the most amazing genius in the universe. I learned from e again and learned it in no time. ... It feels like reading a fantasy cultivation novel called Diaosiliu Counterattack. I think the choice of words and sentences for the protagonist should have a bit of a Western flavor. Don't write it in the tone of a fantasy novel.

It's a bit poisonous, and the rhythm is basically absorbing talent - pretending to be awesome - everyone is shocked - absorbing talent - pretending to be even bigger - everyone is shocked again, dry

This book is completely copied from FL. Even the main character's name remains the same. It's awesome.

Although they are all free chapters, author, do you think what you wrote is interesting? You keep repeating the process of shocking others. The protagonist has watched the Avengers and still acts like a retard and doesn't know how strong he is. Is there any point in writing such a chronicle without ups and downs?

I would like to give the author a suggestion: find some primary school Chinese textbooks and learn grammar carefully. I have read countless books, and this is the first time I have seen such a stuttering work like yours. Learn how to use words such as because, so, but, however, moreover, and so on.

This author's writing is really rubbish. Let's not talk about the plot. I want to ask what is the meaning of adding a hot figure behind a thin person? There was also a word "Fengmei" added at the end. What kind of cow head and horse tail are you writing about? Is it a thing? If you can't write it, then don't write it. Damn it, it will make people panic. You can just describe it casually, and I feel good about it. After all, it's a science fiction novel, and you want to show off your rubbish writing style. I'm really convinced.

When I saw that Ultron could do magic, I didn't want to watch it anymore. What the hell. Will Thanos learn magic next? Anyway, it's just mindless to strengthen the protagonist's enemies to make the protagonist show off. Is this how the author writes a novel? If this is the routine, then the author can just entrust the studio to write it directly.

It is a very outrageous novel. Every time I learn magic, I am shocked. Every time I cast magic, it is the most powerful. I can't even control the power of magic. I can only say that it does not belong to you. It will tear down mountains and destroy planets at every turn. How are you going to write it next? A magic destroying the universe?

This book, it's hard to describe in one sentence, was written more than ten years ago: this child's terrifying routine was transferred to Marvel

This book should not occupy a precious traffic exposure position on the free channel, it should be included in the daily guide

I can't stand it anymore. I wrote dozens of chapters about a fight. I wrote notes over and over again. I had no idea what I was writing. I described half of it in my mind. Then I finished it inexplicably. I spent a long time writing about the mental construction and mental description of the supporting characters. I promised me to find a factory to tighten the screws. Stop writing.

It's so well written. The first line on the first page persuades you to quit.

The first time I saw Chapter 2, I was poisoned and died. . . . A few days later I came back and told myself not to watch it with my brain. . . . In the end, I only lasted until Chapter 4. . . . Too poisonous. . . Too poisonous. . . I can't believe this is a new book. . . . The writing is at kindergarten level. . .

Can this also happen in Sanjiang?

At first glance, you can tell that it is a template novel written by a studio and produced on an assembly line.

Don't look, don't look, run! ! !

Karma Taj's magic dog doesn't even learn