Hashira Mie: This Swordsman's Surname Is Uchiha

The plot is good, but I would like to ask the author if he has watched Naruto and if Itachi's character could be any worse.

Susanoo? Is it a foul? Judging from Naruto's performance, he is extremely strong, right? At least from the perspective of Demon Slayer World

Everything is fine, but why is Itachi Uchiha the white-eyed wolf psycho?

It doesn't matter if you write a book or something, but you can just clean up a villain and get away with it. What are these three views?

Just a suggestion, you can change Itachi, any Uchiha can be used, Itachi is a bit inconsistent, his personality is different from this, the writing is good, but Itachi is a bit out of character.

To be honest, Itachi is a perfect example of being brainless, and so is Shisui. According to the setting and timeline of the animation, Uchiha had three pairs of kaleidoscopes: Fugaku, Shisui, and Itachi at the same time. Then look at the Hokage series, there is only Danzo, the third generation of the elderly, who has not transplanted the Sharingan without Izanami, Jiraiya and Tsunade are all outside, and the three Susana Gundams are completely crushed, and they can plow Konoha all over again. As a result, one of them died due to internal strife, and Danzo fell ill and was tricked by Danzō. It is really outrageous that such a wise character can still boast!

I don't understand why those who hate Itachi come to see it. Isn't this just being mean? Just like what Guo Degang said, if you don't like hot pot, you stand in front of a hot pot restaurant and curse. Isn't this looking for trouble? Besides, every animation, animation, comic, TV, and movie, who allows it to not have characters that others like?

Can you imagine Itachi calling Tanjiro brother and acting like a younger brother? The feeling of subverting the personality is difficult to replace

Itachi in Naruto, how can I put it, is the kind of extremely smart person, and the kind that tends to be rational. This kind of person will not express his feelings very obviously, at least not on the surface. And his brother-in-law is the one who has a big picture and view of the overall situation when all his relatives are dead. Observation, I won't express that kind of thing, that's what I mean, you can understand it, don't talk about his good and evil, just talk about his talent, you can understand, he is a very rational kind, I very much doubt that keeping his younger brother at that time was to leave a seed for his family, and he was not a brother-in-law. He was not sure when he would die.

Isn't your second-guessing too much? To put it bluntly, in the original work, Rank 6 and the others are not in the same echelon. Even if you cut off your head at the same time in the magic version, you will not die. I can't even think about Ranking 1 and the second and third rank.

Has Itachi become the protagonist? I admire you so much, why don't you kill your parents to worship heaven?

The idea is so good, why do you have to write about the sand egg who killed his biological parents?

To be honest, this idea is very good, but if you change the protagonist to Naruto, you can do it without Susanoo. Even Uchiha Madara can do it. Itachi either said that he is not good, or he feels a bit perverted. A fool who was brainwashed by the will of fire still wants to save a hand until he dies. Madara is purer than him.

Before Itachi was killed in Naruto, he was terminally ill and kept coughing up blood. After joining Akatsuki, he has been relying on medicine to maintain his body. So in another world, his body wouldn't have lasted long (I forgot how old Itachi was when he died, probably in his early twenties). Did Itachi end up lying in a coffin in 89 years after he came to Demon Slayer? Will he want to do ghosts at that time? As a ruthless man who can kill his father and mother, turning into a ghost and eating people is just a joke, right?

Your comment section is the most outrageous comment section I have ever seen. They are all teaching authors to write books... If the comment section says something, you should change it. Otherwise, please download the book and let these old buddies in the comment section write it.

It would be better to just make the Uchiha time traveler who was killed by Itachi the night of the genocide the protagonist.

One question, there can't be a second pair of Sharingan in this world. What should I do if I'm blind?

The writing style and plot logic seem to have no major problems at first glance, and it is worth recommending.

Protagonist

Well, how can I put it, the emotional scene with the little girl is a bit poisonous

First put a column chart

I'm too lazy to watch Jun Itachi. It's not that the writing is bad, but the original Naruto Itachi is really unlikable.

Without a sense of immersion, it is better to write that the protagonist knows the plot and has the ability of Weasel D

It would be great to write about Sasuke. Or maybe Madara.

There is a serious OOC phenomenon, it is poisonous, so use with caution

I found an interesting idea When the ghost king became a ghost, he did not go on a killing spree Instead, he organized his own family The ghost king led his family to build a village The ghost king served as the first generation village chief The village's economic source mainly comes from maintaining peace in the area (killing people), and the main task is to find a flower The ghost king's place The village in the village has absorbed many rare-blood families The first generation of governance is called the rule of proletariat (what is the name of the ghost king? Which word comes from? I forgot) After it was exposed that the ghost king likes to eat people, he met a sun-like figure, codenamed the sun The ghost king was defeated and split and ran away The sun served as the second generation of the village At the same time, the sun created a The organization of ghosts Commonly known as the Demon Slayer Squad (with the leader, the Taiyo Demon Slayer Squad, the deputy leader, the Moon Demon Slayer Squad, and the Wind, Fire, and Thunder squads, etc.) The sun cannot withstand time, old age and death The village has entered the Sandaime period The Demon Slayer Squadron of the Taiyang line has entered the twilight period After decades, it has entered the Yondaime period In the Fourth Generation period Taiwan Ghost The dawn of the killing team is coming The fourth generation is defeated by a ghost and rushes to the street The village has entered the third generation period again The Taiyo Demon Killing Team is fighting for the location of the fifth generation tomb Speed up the speed, and finally the Taiyo Demon Killing Team is destroyed by the genius of the team "Yang★Itachi" Put me up, I want to hand it over to the author for writing (the dog head saves his life)

He's 1.4 Meters tall and it really made me laugh

Well. The protagonist of the explosion of three views is sb stuff.

I feel that the author is still suitable for writing daily life. The fighting scenes and emotional scenes really have no sense of immersion. The previous writing was not bad. When I started to go on solo missions, I felt as if someone else had written it.

I see there are a lot of black weasels in the comment area, I will share my thoughts, don't comment if you don't like it Itachi and Madara are actually very similar. He is so conceited that he thinks he can be the savior by himself and let the whole clan be buried with him for the so-called righteous dream, including his dearest brother. In fact, when Sasuke saw Itachi killing his parents, his life was no longer bright. Itachi, an undoubted young talent, was evaluated by the Third Hokage as having a Hokage-like thinking at the age of 7. His extraordinary talent allowed him to have a long-term vision, but his lack of life experience made his thinking too idealistic. Itachi had always believed that other members of the Uchiha family, including his father and mother, had no "measures" and had too narrow vision. In a certain sense, Itachi is great and successful. He loved his brother, deeply and selfishly. He simply hoped that he would survive, but he never thought that there might be something more painful than death. He changed Sasuke's life and created Sasuke's almost perverted personality with incomprehensible logic. He is very careful in his thinking, and I won't go into details about this. Perhaps there is only one thing that is beyond his expectation, and that is Obito. Without Obito, Sasuke may return to Konoha as expected, and the loss after revenge will slowly disappear over time. But after all, he was still negligent. As he said when he was reincarnated in the dirty land, he did not realize what he was capable of and powerless. What this character is like depends on personal opinion. As I said before, don't criticize if you don't like it.