An Ordinary Trainer Among Elves

Don't keep coming back and forth with hatred. If you have a grudge, just take revenge! If the elves can't be defeated, then go for a sneak attack and build a bomb. As for the security section, don't do anything that bullies the weak and fears the strong, but just be aggressive with the toughest.

The writing is good, but the protagonist has lived in two lives, so he should have the basic qualities of a trainer, right? He won't be stunned for a long time during the battle.

A reborn person should look like a reborn person. When selling miracle seeds in the first chapter, I won't talk about it because the protagonist doesn't know the price. He doesn't know how to check the value? He is simply a social noob.

Some personal suggestions 1. The construction of the team must be planned well 2. You can start a small plot and continue the big plot 3. Clarify the goal of the protagonist 4. Think carefully about the battle scene 5. Make some foreshadowing 6. Think about how to end in advance to avoid the final ending The above are all personal opinions, please don't criticize if you don't like it, thank you

Chapter 5: It's like a dream, rebirth is like playing, gone

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Did I curse? Or is that your temper?

What about this one?