Douluo's Watchman

There is an old man at the top of Wuhun Palace who doesn't care about anything, and the other three are just licking the dogs. Do things regardless of the consequences, and in the end, your subordinates will foot the bill. The middle class of the two empires are bad. The people at the bottom and the royal family at the top have no problems. If you want to reform, you just need to deal with the worms in the system. As for the Wuhun Palace, although the basic branches of the Wuhun Palace are all over the continent, the bottom layer has the blindness of Su Yuntao, the middle layer has people like Miles who seek power for personal gain, and there is a bunch of licking dogs on the opposite side of the high-level people. With such a configuration, let alone losing in the end, it is already a miracle that it has not collapsed now.

How to deal with Xiao Wu? Should she be refined into a flag demon, or should she be killed directly and become a spirit ring?

Well... Can you say something in the comment area? It's so deserted, which makes me feel a little unsure😭

I came in based on the title, but didn't want to read it after reading the introduction. I feel that the author should check the information to understand the watcher, and then think about how to derive the ability. Also, the pretense should be invisible and not too deliberate, such as "Who are you? I am a farmer" (I forgot where I saw it).

It was good at first, but I have to add a system. Why do I have to have a system?

The heroine must not be Hu Liena (white-eyed fox)

Each of the first three flags can only accept one flag demon. From the fourth flag, a qualitative change will occur and the growth will double. There are 8 four flags, 16 five flags, 32 six flags, 64 seven flags, and 128 eight flags (one theory is that this is the total number of flag demons that the Huang Yao banner can accommodate, and another is that this is the number of flag demons that each Huang Yao banner can accommodate) This is a secret from the Da Geng family, and it is publicized that each Huang Yao banner can only accommodate a maximum of three banner demons.

The number of flag monsters is wrong. One flag has 3 flags, two flags have 6 monsters, and three flags have 12 monsters. The increase is multiplied. Your setting of one flag and one flag is too harsh.

Every time I see someone trying to build a power, I feel bad. Tang San became a god in his 20s and ascended. You can't be slower than him, right? Building a power for more than ten years is of no use. Isn't it nice to take girls out to have fun when you have the free time to build a power?

The salted fish me appears again ๑v๑hehe

The system overwhelms the style of the watchman. Personally, I think that when the system appears, it only needs to be given two things. One is a skill that can be practiced to surpass the level of the God King and can be carried and grown in the Douluo World. The other is the Golden Scale Absolute Curse. This way, the protagonist can conquer the God Realm in the later stage. If he cannot defeat the Five God Kings, he can just use the Golden Scale Absolute Curse. This will not raise the starting point too high and can pave the way for the later stage.

Emm To be honest, I think your writing style is pretty good. But when writing Douluo fanfics, you added too many things other than Douluo. I only understand a lot of things. I can't understand it. I guess many people do. I've never seen a watchman or anything like that. It is better to write about Douluo or Wuhun. Flag demon or something. You might as well make a Ten Thousand Soul Banner or something. It is easy to absorb the souls of dead soul masters and soul beasts to drive enslavement. At least I can understand it. There are too many peripherals that I can't understand. Woo woo woo

I'm sorry, it's really rare to see ace censor fandom

I think the higher-ups in the Wuhun Palace are outrageous. Qian Daoliu just sits there and does nothing. Bibi Dong is obsessed with Yu Xiaogang and is unwilling to kill the twins when he comes to help the enemy ask for the solution to the twin martial arts. Qian Renxue is the most outrageous. She likes it at a glance. She even invited Tang San to join the Spirit Palace with the help of Ju Ghost Douluo and a group of Spirit Palace members who had chased Xiao Wu.

Before watching Douluo, first ask who the heroine is. After all, the heroine determines whether Douluo's performance is good or bad.

It's a good idea, but it requires a broken system. All system documents are rubbish, bar none. A book is a real world. What kind of system does a real world have? If a real world system really exists, it will happen to you for no reason and you will definitely die from the system in the future. There are no accidents. Those who gain from it will be destroyed by it.

What a mess! ! The control of time and place is a complete mess. Gui Douluo is almost the Pope's personal secretary. How can he be the dean of Wuhun Academy? And shouldn't the talents of Pig's Feet be cultivated in Wuhun City? Wuhun City is located at the junction of the two empires and is close to the Star Dou Forest. Shouldn't Ghost Douluo go back to Wuhun City after taking the pig's feet to train in Star Dou? Why are you running around? For example, Douluo Continent is like the Eurasian Continent. Wuhun City is located in Mongolia, next to Siberia, Tiandou is in Beijing, and Xingluo City is in Europe. Moreover, the author has considered the traffic conditions and the speed of transportation in Douluo Continent. Carriages are faster than airplanes and they will reach wherever they go immediately? If you don't know how to write, just draw a map based on the original work. Mark the sphere of influence and it will be clear where the force is...