Dou Po Life Simulator

Opinion Building.

Medusa is an extremely popular character, but the author made her so miserable that it makes me want to quit.

This book was really good before Medusa appeared, but it became more and more blunt as it went on. I feel like the author was too influenced by the comment section and chapter reviews. Many plots seemed to have been changed suddenly without any foreshadowing. If the author continues to be influenced by the chapter reviews, it will only get worse. A successful author will not pay too much attention to chapter reviews and comment sections. Unless he is speaking from a big boss who rewards a lot, it is best to write according to his own outline.

I feel that the author has fallen into a misunderstanding. You blindly cheat the protagonist, give him skills and pills, but do not give him a stage to show himself. There is no clear contrast before and after cheating. Even if you make the protagonist directly become a fighting emperor, the readers will not feel the slightest satisfaction after reading it. For example, after Xiao Yan learned the Baji Beng in the original work, he used it in the coming-of-age ceremony within the clan. He killed the drug-addicted Xiao Ning with one move and pretended to be angry. Readers will feel great after watching it. The protagonist is currently lacking similar plot points. Also, please end this recent original plot as soon as possible. Fast-forwarding to the famous scenes in the original work is the most important thing. When you fight against fellow fans, the biggest highlight is actually to crush the original protagonist Xiao Yan in all directions. Being too obsessed with the original plot is putting the cart before the horse. The above are purely personal thoughts, please don't comment if you don't like them.

Strange Fire Ranking Emperor Yan (Tuoshe Ancient Emperor) Ranking: No. 1 Color: Brilliant and colorful, the color of the fusion of twenty-two different fires (PS: In addition to the original non-existent first strange fire, there are twenty-two other different fires on the list. Tuoshe Ancient Emperor himself is one of the different fires. After devouring the other twenty-one types of strange fires on the list, he became the number one strange fire on the list, with twenty-one hair colors.) The so-called number one on the strange fire list has no specific name. Whoever can break through the shackles and stand out from the cruel devouring of strange fires can be called the number one on the strange fire list. Everything in nature has its own spirit, and the same is true for strange fires. There was once a strange fire that was born between heaven and earth. It took thousands of years to form, gather spirits for thousands of years, and cultivate latently for thousands of years. It mutated slightly in the dark. As we all know, ordinary strange fires take shape and rarely leave the place of birth. But this fire is different. After it possesses spiritual intelligence, it walks along the underground magma, wanders under the ground for thousands of years, and makes a living by swallowing fire. The fires it swallowed were all ranked on the list of strange fires, and all twenty-one types of fire it swallowed were eaten by it. After this extraordinary fire was accomplished, it was named Emperor Yan, and then practiced again for thousands of years before it emerged from the world. At that time, he was respected as "Tuoshe Ancient Emperor" (his fire was "burning"). The Swallowing Flame of Nothingness The Swallowing Flame of Nothingness Ranking: 2nd Color: Black Second on the list of strange fires. This fire is born in nothingness, has no form to be found, and is invisible to grasp. It is a rather strange existence. The Swallowing Flame of Nothingness, known as the thing that swallows the sky and the earth, has the ability to devour all things. Only a few things between heaven and earth can compete with that kind of swallowing power. Pure Lotus Demon Fire Ranking: third Color: milky white, pink when extremely strong Conquered by: Ancient Emperor Tuoshe → Pure Lotus Demon Saint → Yan Emperor Xiao Yan (Xiao Clan) and Xiao Xun'er (part of the origin) It has the special effect of purifying all things. Anything that gets a little bit of it. It will be purified into nothingness. You can even use people's emotions as a guide to enter the body, and the fighting energy of the body and soul will be purified into nothingness. The power is extremely terrifying. This kind of strange fire is extremely rare in the world. Only one flower exists. But no one knows where they are. I don't know who recorded this thing in the first place. But no one has ever really seen it. Golden Emperor Fentianyan Ranking: 4th Xun'er's natal fire will definitely kill him once he draws it out, but he can also draw points of the flame and give them to others, but it must be him himself. It is not as mysterious as the Pure Lotus Demon Fire, but it also had a great reputation in ancient times. Moreover, this kind of strange fire is the fire inherited by the ancient tribe, and few people can subdue it. Jindi Fentianyan is a terrifying fire that is said to burn even fighting spirit. According to legend, the first master of the Golden Emperor's Burning Heaven Flame burned the space created by a strong fighting saint into nothingness when he used this fire. The Flame of Creatures Ranking: Fifth Color: Green The liquid green flames rose in the wind. As the sea of ​​green liquid fire filled the air, layers of mist rose. In the rising mist, countless kinds of strange medicinal materials grew slowly, exuding a moving breath of life. This type of strange fire is extremely strange, because although most of the strange fires have different shapes, they are all filled with destructive power after all. However, this creature's flame does not show strong destructive power. What it is famous for in the world is the kind of life force it is filled with. It is said that these strange fires spread out, As long as you put the seeds of medicinal materials into it, the seeds will sprout and grow quickly. In other words, with this kind of strange fire, you basically don't have to think about searching for medicinal materials. As long as you have enough seeds, you can get the medicinal materials you want continuously, which is amazing. Moreover, this Fire of Life is also known as the Fire of Longevity. The lifespan of those who obtain it is comparable to those of Warcraft that are famous for their longevity. The only shortcoming is that this fire is not good at fighting and does not increase combat effectiveness very much. If this creature's flame is formed, it will have a very high spiritual intelligence. Usually it will not appear in the form of fire, but will change into various medicinal materials, and then quietly take root in the soil. Sometimes, even if you walk by it, you will not be able to identify it. Only those with great luck can find it out of the ground. Bahuang Destruction Fire Ranking: Sixth Color: Light Black The most advanced alien fire owned by the Yan Clan, it has been indelibly imprinted with the soul by the previous controllers of the Yan Clan. Huo Xuan of the Yan Clan once transformed it into a pair of flame wings that were as large as a hundred feet, which was really domineering. Jiuyou Golden Ancestral Fire Ranking: Seventh Color: Gold Originally held by the Jiuyou Diming Clan and now owned by the Yan Clan, it has been fused with the volcanic stone flames to create a new type of strange fire, which can compete with the Golden Emperor's Burning Heaven Flame without falling behind. Red Lotus Industry Fire Rank: Eighth Color: Deep Red Dark red, quite coquettish flames, and as the flames rise, they will form the shape of red lotuses. Three Thousand Starry Sky Flames Ranking: Ninth Color: Purple-black, pure black when extremely rich Also known as "Three Thousand Starry Sky Flames". The fire is purple-black, formed in the starry sky, and can absorb the power of the stars, constantly becoming stronger. Silver fire falls from the sky, and the land thousands of miles away is like a desert. There is no distinction between day and night, the stars do not appear, and the shining sun does not rise. Because we are in a place in the starry sky that is difficult for ordinary people to reach. Therefore, the existence time of the Three Thousand Flames Flame will be longer than that of other strange fires, and it is precisely because of this that it has been given enough time to evolve. Therefore, most of the Three Thousand Flames Flames discovered are the kind of super heaven and earth spiritual beings with high intelligence. Even if they are found, it is extremely difficult to capture them. This kind of strange fire has a very special ability, which is the rumored "Three Thousand Stars Physique". Some strong men who have fought against people who have possessed three thousand flames call it the "immortal body" (it has extremely strong recovery ability, as long as it is not bombarded to a pulp, it can recover, but it is only a matter of time). Nine Nether Wind Flame Ranking: Tenth Color: Black Born in the endless abyss of the extremely gloomy place, where the gloomy wind never ceases all year round, this strange fire took shape in the place where the wind is most violent. This fire has a strange wind sound coming from it, and when this wind sound reaches people's ears, it will make people feel a strange irritability. This strange sound can cause people to have emotional fluctuations. Bone Spirit Cold Fire Ranking: 11th Color: Forest White The strange flame that combines extreme cold and extreme heat can only be encountered in places of extreme cold and extreme darkness every hundred years, when the sun and moon alternate. Nine Dragons Thunder Gang Fire Color: Silver It has been passed down by the Burning Flame Valley for hundreds of years. Strong men of all generations have imprinted indelible blood soul marks on the origin of fire. Unless they have practiced the Burning Flame Valley's valley-suppressing technique "Qingming Youyan Jue", otherwise, even if they get the Nine Dragons Thunder Gang Fire, they will never be able to use it for their own use. Silver flames, as the flames rise, nine silver fire dragons can be seen faintly, shuttling in the flames. Within the strange fire, there is a concentration of dragon power, so there is a silver flame with a magical effect that can shock the soul. Nine small fire dragons shuttle around in it, as if they have spiritual wisdom, and there is a faint dragon power permeating out of it, which makes people's soul power feel a little depressed. Turtle Spirit Earth Fire Ranking: Thirteenth Color: Brown Shaped like a giant turtle, with sharp fire thorns all over its body, and a strange brown flame filled with blade-like fangs in its ferocious mouth. Fallen Heart Flame Ranking: Fourteenth Color: Transparent and colorless, milky white when extremely rich Fire is generated from the heart, quenches the energy and refines the bones. Known as the "cultivation cheating tool", it can speed up your practice. Once the Fallen Heart Flame is successfully refined, a kind of heart fire will be continuously generated in the body, and this heart fire will be completely uncontrolled every day and night, calcining the fighting energy in the body every moment. During this almost non-stop tempering period, it is as if the body is in a state of cultivation all the time, and the effect of this state of practice is better than that of ordinary practice. This kind of practice will naturally be much higher than ordinary practice, so it is called a cheating device. Fire is born from the heart, quenches the energy and refines the bones. This fire can also summon inner fire, burning a person from the inside out. The magma lake below the Heavenly Burning Qi Refining Tower of Canaan College is the place of origin, and two flowers were produced one after another. Haixinyan Ranking: 15th Color: Dark Blue Dark blue flames look extremely mysterious. When the flames rise, they spread slowly like clear sea water, with faint ripples, like water waves. Fire Cloud and Water Flame Ranking: Sixteenth Color: Unknown The original work only mentioned that it was owned by Huo Yao who came up from the Yan tribe. Volcanic Stone Flame Ranking: Seventeenth Color: Dark Red Now owned by the Yan Clan, it has been fused with the Nine Nether Golden Ancestral Fire to create a new type of strange fire, which can compete with the Golden Emperor's Burning Sky Flame without falling behind. Windfury Dragon Flame Ranking: 18th Color: Earthy Yellow Born in the eye of the fire tornado in the ancient desert. Unlike other strange fires, it does not have a fixed location, but appears randomly anywhere in the desert during the hottest days of the year. It is extremely rare. When it is displayed, it will form a tornado shape. The combination of wind and fire makes the flames reach hundreds of meters high. It roars and rotates like a huge fire dragon. It has extremely strong destructive capabilities and turns into a sea of ​​​​fire wherever it goes. Qinglian Earth Core Fire Ranking: 19th Color: pure cyan, dark cyan when extremely rich As the name suggests, it is the flame that exists in the lava in the core of the earth. Born in the depths of the earth, it has been tempered, fused, compressed, and carved by the fire of the earth countless times... It takes ten years to become a spirit, a hundred years to take shape, and a thousand years to become a lotus. When it is fully mature, its color is green, and a cluster of green fire grows in the heart of the lotus. It is called Qinglian Fire, also known as Qinglian Earth Core Fire. The power of this fire is unpredictable. It can even cause volcanic eruptions near volcanic areas! Form the destructive power of nature! The treasure that is symbiotic with this fire is the green lotus seat. It can calm the mind during practice and avoid being possessed by fire. It can also make people very sensitive to the fire attribute energy between heaven and earth. Only jade objects (such as jade rulers, jade knives, etc.) Can be cut from the rocks under the volcano. The Earth Fire Lotus Seed is a treasure produced on the Green Lotus Seat and has a wide range of uses. Only when the Green Lotus Earth Core Fire and the Green Lotus Seat are in the same place can it condense into one seed every hundred years. When Xiao Yan obtained the Green Lotus Seat, there were eleven Earth Fire Lotus Seeds on it, proving that this Green Lotus Earth Core Fire had existed for at least eleven hundred years. Nether Poison Fire Ranking: 20th Color: Green The flame that existed in the ancient Nether Poisonous Lake. After tens of millions of years of being infected by the poisonous miasma that covered the sky in the poisonous marsh, the flames burned the endless poisonous miasma. It took hundreds of years to become a spirit, and it took thousands of years to take shape. When it was completed, its color was green, and it was like a will-o'-the-wisp traveling through the poisonous miasma. Since the flame itself is a spirit fed by a poisonous miasma, it contains highly toxic substances. As long as it is exposed to the sparks for a moment, the body will be poisoned, let alone swallowed and fused! It is precisely because of this that few people look for this kind of strange fire, and not many people know its existence. Yin and Yang Double Flame Ranking: No. 21 Color: Black and White Born in the void of the universe, two colors of flames, one black and one white, are entangled together, swimming like Yin and Yang fishes. Yin and Yang are the laws of nature and the source of all things in the world. The yin and yang twin flames born in the origin are one of the flame forms transformed by the origin, full of the dual power of life and death. The yang fire saves people, and life continues, but the yin fire kills, and no bones remain. The Spiritual Fire of Ten Thousand Beasts Ranking: Twenty-two A red flame that vaguely resembles the beasts. It is condensed from the soul of all beasts and the blood of all beasts. The flame contains the violent and ferocious aura of the beasts and can absorb and restrain most of the beast fire. Xuanhuang Yan Ranking: 23rd Xuanhuang Yan Color: Dark Yellow Xiao Yan was found in the Strange Fire Square in the Ancient Emperor's Cave. Summoned by Xiao Yan during the battle between the two emperors.

You can read it when you're relaxing. It's just an ordinary cool article. Although it's full of routines, it's well written. It may not be interesting to watch Too Many Right. Basically, you can guess the plot behind it by looking at where the protagonist is going.

It's a good product, but the update is a bit slow, but the problem is unlikely and the quality can be guaranteed.

Why don't you write the last few chapters where the protagonist runs through a plug-in simulator?

All 6 votes are given to you

1. Tuoshe Ancient Emperor The so-called number one on the list of strange fires has no specific name. Whoever can break through the shackles and stand out from the cruel devouring of strange fires can be called the number one on the list of strange fires. Ranking: No. 1 Color: Brilliant and colorful, the color of the fusion of twenty-two different fires Conqueror: Emperor Yan Xiao Yan (Xiao clan) Owner: Ancient Emperor Tuoshe (the self-proclaimed emperor) 2. Void Swallowing Flame: The Void Swallowing Flame is the second on the list of strange fires. This fire is born in nothingness. It has no form to be found and cannot be grasped. It is a rather strange existence. The Void Swallowing Flame is known as the thing that swallows the sky and the earth. It has the ability to devour all things. Only a few things between heaven and earth can compete with that kind of devouring power. Rank: Second Color: Black Sub-fire Conqueror: Hun Mie Sheng (Master of the Soul Palace), later swallowed by Xiao Yan (Xiao Clan)'s Pure Lotus Demon Fire Dizi Fire (Advanced Sub-fire) Owner: Hun Xuzi (Chief Alchemist of the Soul Clan) Owner : (former) Tuoshe Ancient Emperor Huntian Emperor (Soul Clan) (present) Yan Emperor Xiao Yan 3. Pure Lotus Demon Fire: It has the special effect of purifying all things. Anything that gets a little bit of it. It will be purified into nothingness. You can even use people's emotions as a guide to enter the body, and the fighting energy of the body and soul will be purified into nothingness. The power is extremely terrifying. This kind of strange fire is extremely rare in the world. It seems that only one flower exists. Ranking: third Color: milky white The origin of demon fire is pink Conquered by: (former) Tuoshe Ancient Emperor Jinglian Demon Saint (Present) Yan Emperor Xiao Yan 4. Jin Emperor Burning Sky Flame: It is not as mysterious as the Pure Lotus Demon Fire, but it also had a great reputation in ancient times, and this kind of strange fire is the fire inherited by the ancient tribe, and few people can subdue it. Jindi Fentianyan is a terrifying fire that is said to burn even fighting spirit. It is said that the first master of the Golden Emperor's Burning Heaven Flame burned the space created by a strong fighting saint into nothingness when he used this fire. Ranking: Fourth Color: Gold Conqueror: Xiao Xun'er Ancient Clan Partial Origin: Emperor Yan Xiao Yan (Present) Xiao Xun'er 5. The Flame of Creatures The green flame, like a liquid, rises in the storm. When the sea of green liquid fire fills the air, layers of mist rise. In the rising mist, countless kinds of strange medicinal materials grow slowly, filling the air with a moving breath of life. This type of strange fire is extremely strange, because although most of the strange fires have different shapes, they are all filled with destructive power after all. However, this creature's flame does not show strong destructive power. What it is famous for in the world is the kind of life force it is filled with. It is said that these strange fires spread out, As long as you put the seeds of medicinal materials into it, the seeds will sprout and grow quickly. In other words, with this kind of strange fire, you basically don't have to think about searching for medicinal materials. As long as you have enough seeds, you can get the medicinal materials you want continuously, which is amazing. Moreover, this Fire of Life is also known as the Fire of Longevity. The lifespan of those who obtain it is comparable to those of Warcraft that are famous for their longevity. The only shortcoming is that this fire is not good at fighting and does not increase combat effectiveness very much. Ranking: Fifth Color: Green Conqueror: (formerly) Old Shennong (now) Yandi Xiao Yan 6. Eight Desolations Destruction Flame: The highest-level alien fire owned by the Yan tribe, with a special mark. It can be transformed into a pair of flame wings that are as large as a hundred feet, and they are extremely domineering. Rank: Sixth Color: Light Black Conqueror: (Zeng) Huo Xuan (Yan Clan) Present Yan Emperor Xiao Yan Seven. Jiuyou Golden Ancestral Fire: Now owned by the Yan Clan, it has been fused with the volcanic stone flames to create a new type of strange fire, which can compete with the Burning Sky Flame of the Golden Emperor without falling behind Ranking: Seventh Color: Gold Conqueror: (former) the leader of the Yanyan Clan (Present) Yan Emperor Xiao Yan 8. Red Lotus Karmic Fire: A deep red, rather coquettish flame is slowly rising, and as the flames rise, they will form the shape of red lotuses. Ranking: Eighth Color: Red Conquered by: (former) Huo Zhi (Yan Clan) (currently) Yan Emperor Xiao Yan 9. Three Thousand Yan Yanhuo: Three Thousand Yanyan Yanhuo, also known as the Three Thousand Starry Sky Yanyan, is a purple-black fire that is formed in the starry sky. It can absorb the light of stars and constantly becomes stronger. This kind of strange fire has a very special ability, which is the rumored "Three Thousand Stars Physique". Some strong men who have fought against people who have possessed three thousand flames call it the "immortal body" (with extremely strong recovery ability). Ranking: Ninth Color: Pure Purple Conqueror: (former) Danta (Now) Yan Emperor Xiao Yan 10. Nine Nether Wind Flames Born in the endless abyss of the extremely yin place, where the wind does not stop all year round, this strange fire took shape in the place where the wind is most violent. This fire has a strange wind sound coming from it, and when this wind sound reaches people's ears, it will make people feel a strange irritability. This strange sound can cause people to have emotional fluctuations. Ranking: Tenth Color: Black Conquerors: (formerly) Elder Wanhuo (Medicine Clan) Yao Xingji (Medicine Clan) (later taken back by Elder Wanhuo), the Medicine Clan was destroyed and probably fell into the Soul Clan In hand Yao Clan (currently) Yan Emperor Xiao Yan 11. Bone Spirit Cold Fire: A strange flame that combines extreme cold and extreme heat. It can only be encountered in places of extreme cold and extreme darkness every hundred years, when the sun and moon alternate. Ranking: Eleventh Color: Forest White Conqueror: (formerly) Yao Chen (Yao Clan) (Present) Yan Emperor Xiao Yan Twelve, Kowloon Thunder Gang Fire: Having been passed down by the Burning Flame Valley for hundreds of years, the strong men of the past generations have left an indelible imprint of the blood soul on the origin of fire. Unless one has practiced the Burning Flame Valley's valley-suppressing technique "Qingming Nether Flame Jue", otherwise, even if one obtains the Nine Dragons Thunder Gang Fire, it is absolutely impossible to use it for one's own use. Rank: Twelfth Color: Silver Conquerors: (former) Past Valley Masters of Burning Flame Valley Tang Zhen (Lord of Burning Flame Valley) (Present) Yan Emperor Xiao Yan 13. Turtle Spirit Earth Fire: Shaped like a giant turtle, with sharp fire thorns all over its body, and a strange brown flame filled with fangs like blades in its ferocious giant mouth. Ranking: Thirteenth Color: Brown Conquered by: (former) Yaotian (Yao Clan) (now) Yan Emperor Xiao Yan Fourteenth, Fallen Heart Flame Fire is generated from the heart, quenches Qi and refines bones. Known as the "cultivation cheating tool", it can speed up your practice. Once the Fallen Heart Flame is successfully refined, a kind of heart fire will be continuously produced in the body, and this heart fire will be completely uncontrollable, every day and night, calcining the fighting energy in the body every moment. During this almost non-stop tempering, It is as if the body is in a state of cultivation all the time, and the effect of this state of cultivation is better than that of ordinary practice. This kind of practice will naturally be much higher than ordinary practice, so it is called a cheating weapon. Fire is generated from the heart, quenching Qi and refining bones. The magma lake below the Heavenly Burning Qi Refining Tower of Canaan College is the place of origin, and a total of 2 flowers were produced. Ranking: Fourteenth Color: Transparent and colorless (slightly milky when extremely rich) Conquered by: (previously) Wu Zhu (previously) Lord Tianhuo (former) Mang Tianchi (Thunder Clan) (present) Yan Emperor Xiao Yan ( Formerly) Lord Tianhuo (now) Canaan Academy Tianfen Qi Refining Tower 15. Sea Heart Flame: The dark blue flame looks extremely mysterious. When the flame rises, it spreads slowly like clear sea water, with faint ripples, like water waves. Ranking: Fifteenth Color: Dark Blue Conqueror: (Previous) Dahai (Previous) Han Feng (Later) Old Man Mugu (Soul Palace) (Present) Yandi Xiao Yan 16. Fire Cloud Water Flame: A magical flame shaped like a fire cloud and possessing the power of water. Rank: 16th Color: Sky Blue Conqueror: (former) Huoyao (Yan Clan) (currently) Yan Emperor Xiao Yan Seventeenth, Volcano Stone Flame (Nirvana Rebirth Flame) Now owned by the Yan Clan, it has been fused with the Nine Nether Golden Ancestral Fire to create a new type of strange fire, which can compete with the Golden Emperor's Burning Sky Flame without falling behind Ranking: Seventeenth Color: dark red Conqueror: (former) Yan Jin (Chief of the Yan Clan) (present) Yan Emperor Xiao Yan 18. Wind, Thunder and Fury Yan: Born at the intersection of the three major energies of wind, thunder and fire, this flame is extremely violent and has the power to change the weather. Ranking: 18th Color: dark yellow Conqueror: (former) Tuoshe Ancient Emperor (now) Yan Emperor Xiao Yan 19. Qinglian Earth Core Fire: As the name suggests, it is the flame that exists in the lava in the core of the earth. The first type of strange fire obtained by the protagonist. Born in the depths of the earth, it has been tempered, fused, compressed, and carved by the fire of the earth countless times. It takes ten years to become a spirit, a hundred years to take shape, and a thousand years to become a lotus. When it is fully mature, its color is green, and a cluster of green fire is born in the heart of the lotus. It is called Qinglian Fire, also known as Qinglian Earth Core Fire. This fire is so powerful that it can even trigger volcanic eruptions near volcanic areas! It forms the destructive power of nature! Ranking: Nineteenth Color: dark cyan Conqueror: Xiao Yan, Emperor Yan (PS: Medusa used this strange fire to evolve into a colorful sky-swallowing python) Twenty. Dragon and Phoenix Yan (Qiongqi Lieyan) Legend has it that this Yan is the offspring of the dragon and phoenix, the mating of two ancient mythical beasts. The animal fire on the feathers of the dragon and phoenix can rival the strange fire. Ranking: No. 20 Color: deep red Conqueror: (former) Tuoshe Ancient Emperor (now) Yan Emperor Xiao Yan Twenty-one, Six Paths of Samsara Flame (Yin and Yang Reverse Heart Flame) This inflammation only exists in the six paths of reincarnation. Those who get this inflammation can borrow the power of reincarnation, six paths Soul, it is said that a Dou Zong broke through to Dou Zun, known as the Lord of Reincarnation! Ranking: twenty-one Color: dark black Conqueror: (former) Tuoshe Ancient Emperor (now) Yan Emperor Xiao Yan Twenty-two, Ten Thousand Beast Spirit Fire Xiao Yan discovered it in the Strange Fire Square in the Ancient Emperor's Cave. It is a red flame that vaguely resembles all kinds of beasts. Rank: Twenty-two Color: Red Conquered by: (former) Tuoshe Ancient Emperor (now) Yan Emperor Xiao Yan Twenty-three, Xuanhuang Yan Xiao Yan found it in the Strange Fire Square in the Ancient Emperor's Cave. Ranking: 23rd Color: dark yellow Conqueror: (former) Tuoshe Ancient Emperor (now) Yan Emperor Xiao Yan

In the original work, Yun Yun was just a wolf with white eyes. Yun Shan raised it, taught it skills, and passed it on as the leader of the clan. But how did it repay Yun Shan? As soon as Yunshan's front leg died, this guy's back leg became friendly with his enemy. In the end, even Yunshan's body was not taken back and buried in peace. Is this something human beings did? Don't talk about the supremacy of love, only a heartless white-eyed wolf would say such things. I feel disgusted that this kind of thing should be the heroine, it is not worthy. 😡😡😡😡😡😡

The more I write, the worse it gets. The only ones who can continue to persevere are Shennong 😐 I really thought this book was good before it was put on the shelves. After it was put on the shelves, the author has become more and more free of himself. He no longer needs logic, characters, and the language has become younger.

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I saw Chapter 14 and slipped away. If the fanfic does not follow the basic settings of the original novel world, then it is better to write about the new world directly.

A few thoughts In fan creations, there are just a few attitudes toward the protagonist.       ，， Second, make friends with the protagonist. This appeared in the previous Douluo, the current Dou Po, etc. Third, as an unrelated passer-by, such as this one. What choice you make is related to the character of the protagonist. To give two extreme examples, Lin Dong and Tang San. Lin Dong is my favorite potato protagonist. The friendship between the three brothers, Lin Yan, Lin Diao's first big brother, the three brothers' escape from the Dongxuan Territory, Xiao Yan's Tiger Army, there are too many. As the Lin Dong brothers who grew up together, you are safe. Tang San, don't say much. The most awkward thing is the third one. The first and second situations are easier to write. Either kill the protagonist to seize resources, or share resources. But the third type, because of recent readers' tastes and market choices, there are more of the third type. It's not that this is bad, I can only say that it's not good to write. Being a wallflower is not pleasing to the eye. If you want to please both parties, if your writing skills are not strong enough, you will end up pleasing both parties. Just like in the case of this book, I have subscribed to it a lot, and most of the disputes mentioned in the chapter are due to the protagonist's treatment of Xiao Yan of the Xiao family.        ， Brother, don't be surprised.

The author felt that the results were too good. I guess the reason for many withdrawals was because Medusa was made so annoying and the protagonist was tepid. Then he killed Yao Lao without any foreshadowing.

The last few chapters have been a bit confusing Forget it I originally wrote a few hundred words Let's keep it simple 1. Xiao Yan's character has been changed, and his behavior has become less intelligent 2. The protagonist Xiao Ming has no temper. He didn't care about the attitude and tone of Xiao Yan and his brother, and didn't get angry at all. Have you become an immortal or a god? No more emotions? Do you really have no temper at all? Very generous? You are amazing and noble. (The protagonist has never offended them, and has even been helping the Xiao clan. They are not from the Xiao clan? So they have not received any indirect favors?) 3. Who is the protagonist Xiao Yan? Is the relationship good? Why would the protagonist Xiao Ming not hesitate to conflict with the Yungang Sect for Xiao Yan? 4. Water, the author is slowing down the pace 5. Are the protagonist's plug-ins useless? Then why would he be willing to protect Xiao Yan just because of Yao Chen's experience as a senior alchemist? Your plug-in can even get the alchemist talent, strange fire, and Emperor Dou Qi (it seems to be called that), but you can't get a high-level alchemist? The latest chapter is about fighting with the Soul Palace. Are you just a cheater just trying to make money like this? Did you just go through with it without any details? 6. I can't tell whether the protagonist is strong or not, Momoji . . . . . . . . . Summary: After the protagonist meets Xiao Yan, the poison comes

Most of the protagonists are far less upright than Xiao Yan in the original work, and they have double standards. Ask the audience in the comment area, is the protagonist of this book toxic? Similar to Medical Saint/God of War/Dragon King, if you lose your IQ, you can decide whether to fall into the trap!

Good grass identification: System plug-in (✓) The simulator system has successfully solved many problems that need to be solved in the past: such as elixirs, exercises, elixir recipes, alchemist experience, etc. In short, the system is omnipotent. If the settings are unreasonable, look for the system. Faction Birth (✓) This is the start of the Xiao family. If it is a normal Xiao family start, the score will be lower, because generally the Xiao family's map brushing route at the beginning is Utan City-Qingshan Town-Desert-Empire. The quality of subsequent works mainly depends on the author's writing skills. Although it is the beginning of the Xiao family here, I went to play the plot of Canaan College early. The overall feeling is fresh, which is equivalent to equaling the Xiao family's beginning. There are also some minor flaws that are acceptable. After all, it is an original plot. On the basis of equality, the author made a bonus point, that is, the anti-inflammatory drug failed to attack Gu Lian'er at night. Xiao Jialiu's starting point was to rush to Gu Li'er. Even if they didn't dig, Xiao Yan would not be able to successfully attack at night. Otherwise, Gu Li'er would be a troublemaker in the middle and late stages and it would be inconvenient to destroy Xiao Yan. Attitude towards Xiao Yan (✓) The first chapter directly explains that a fellow traveler will not come to see a fellow countryman, nor will he kneel and lick, he is just a passerby, and a passerby also indirectly avoids the slightly poisonous trick of "good brothers" backstabbing. Dou Po fan fiction is very taboo about kneeling and licking, or having two male protagonists, because it is inherently enjoyable; and then there is the backstabbing style, which depends on the level of acceptance. Generally speaking, the protagonist just kills the original male protagonist head-on. The backstab flow just doesn't look that good. The subsequent identification mainly depends on the routine of anti-inflammatory drugs. Dou Po is a cool article about system plug-ins. The mainstream million plus is to destroy Xiao Yan. As long as Xiao Yan is eliminated in the future, there will be no big problem. One of the hidden poisonous points is that Nalan Yanran broke off the engagement and just watched the show, or just wasn't there in person. If you insist on standing up for Xiao Yan, you will easily be labeled as a dog licker. If you want to be more naughty, you can take Ran Yanran as your disciple and give her an Earth-level single-target instant fighting skill so that she can interrupt Xiao Yan and set off the Fire Lotus later. In general, Dou Po has much fewer hidden mines than Dou Luo, as long as they focus on killing Xiao Yan. As for killing him, there is no other way. One is that eating strange fire will inevitably lead to a laning, and the other is that in the later stage, we have to worry about arranging the plot for him, so we can just forget about killing him. The default black plot is that Qinglian failed to obtain the Earth Core Fire, and the first crack in the Dao Heart was created, and then the three-year agreement failed and the crack expanded. When he returned, the Xiao family was destroyed and expanded again. He returned to Canaan College to focus on the Fallen Heart Flame, and took advantage of Han Feng to steal the strange fire. The protagonist returned with the young body of the strange fire. A strange fire exchanges anti-inflammatory drugs for blackening. For now, it is considered to be a good quality grass. At least from the early stage, the protagonist should not fall into Xin Yan in the second stage of Dou Qi. It can be seen that the protagonist is still normal.

The first part of the book is really good, but I couldn't understand the second part. The part about the three-year appointment was very abrupt, and the heroine's emotional line felt so sloppy, and the character's emotional expression was so numb. I couldn't read it after seeing Yao Lao die.

It's getting more and more boring. It was okay at the beginning, but then it became more and more like the original. It felt like the main character's name was changed, and it was pretty much the same as the original.

In this new plot, if your protagonist can let go of the snake people, I will be happy. Can you tolerate this attitude? Who dares to open his mouth like a lion? How dare you offend a sixth-level alchemist with unlimited future? I really can't stand it if she's so stupid and doesn't kill her.

To sum up, there is nothing new in the plot of Xiao Yan who changed his name.

Really, it was good at first, but then the more I wrote, the more outrageous and clumsy it became, especially after it was put on the shelves.

I've been raising it for a long time and I've read the latest chapters. It's really awesome. Anyway, in the eyes of the author, Xiao Yan is right to write rubbish. He takes away Xiao Yan's opportunity and belittles him. He eats other people's food and smashes other people's pots. 666

I would like to give this book to my daughter. I have been pursuing it for so long and it is actually a gift for my daughter! You have cleared up Xun'er's capture of Xiao Yan, and now you're sending it to the queen or another woman? I vomited, just fix Xiao Yan. I even sabotaged it at the beginning. I thought this book was not for girls, but I didn't expect that it was for girls. I can't pursue it. If I don't complain, I have wasted so many book coins. This book is really annoying.

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Aya Qingzhu

When I watched it two years ago, I was still in college. At that time, I felt that it had the best development path among the Dou Po fandoms I had read. As a result, one day it suddenly stopped updating. Occasionally I go to Qidian to read novels, and I always feel sad when I read them. Unexpectedly, he survived. Anyway, since welcome back. Come on, author.

I just found out you're back. I haven't watched you since you joined the army.