Start Practicing Taoism from the Devil

The images that flashed through my mind included Naruto's Orochimaru, the monsters from the Book of Mountains and Seas, and the pictures from Akutagawa Ryunosuke's Hell Transformation...

I came from Zhihu. I am a girl and I also like to watch Jin Yong's martial arts. The writing style has a sense of the times. I personally feel that there are many modern vocabulary. In addition, the name is really a bit hasty, bro dei. The above is just a brief comment from a reader who loves watching martial arts and a Zhihu friend. It is purely a reader's idea. Congratulations on taking this big step. Come on!

The protagonist's name is a bit out of place, and the sense of immersion is so bad... It would be better if you reversed your pen name and changed it to Li Xiaxia.

I'm here on Zhihu, what do you think of this book? Let's draw a conclusion first: the results will not be good, and it will be a bit difficult to sign a contract. Tell me the questions: 1. From the book title, introduction, protagonist name, text content, to writing style, it shows that you have read relatively few online articles in the past two years, and the writing style is quite ancient. This is why I ask you to read less Jin Yong and more online articles. Because you don't understand the market, you don't know how to present your story according to the market's preferences. 2. The title of the book only shows that it is a fairy tale theme, but does not show what genre you want to write about. "The Dafeng Watcher" stated that it wanted to write a fairy tale detective style, and "The Scholar of the Wei Dynasty" stated that it wanted to write a story about fairy tales and Confucianism. You imitated the skin but not the bones. 3. The introduction does not show the genre, does not briefly introduce the world view, the golden finger is not very attractive, and most importantly, the selling points are not outstanding enough. 4. The main character's name, the fairy tale theme is named Tian Xia Li... It's quite dramatic, like a city. 5. The content of the text starts with introducing who I am, where I am, and what I want to do, but you haven't introduced any of it clearly. Highlights: 1. Writing is online, writing online articles is enough. 2. The suspense at the beginning is pretty good. Finally, come on!

As a reminder: a good novel always has at least two stories. The story of The Condor appears to be Guo Jing's growth story, but behind it is the story of Genghis Khan's rise. The second story is invisible. Behind the growth story of Zhang Wuji in Yitian is the love and hatred of the Yang Dingtian generation of Mingjiao. The same goes for Dou Po. Xiao Yan's story also has Yao Lao's story behind it. Mystery is Klein's upgrade, followed by the story of Amon's resurrection. In fact, the story of Emperor Russell is superimposed as a prequel. This book is better at this point. The story of the protagonist is set up at the beginning, which has already led to the confrontation between the two major factions. Looking forward to it, come on.

As a reminder: On the surface, all Internet articles have one cheat finger, such as the big snake possessed by this article. In fact, all good Internet articles have more than two cheat fingers. Time travel itself is a cheat finger, which is always present and invisible. The Lord of Mysteries has three golden fingers superimposed: Keyboard Strong (Time Travel), Gray Mist, and Emperor Russell's Diary. There is no pre-travel introduction in this book, which is a major flaw and also affects the sense of immersion.

I can accept the slow pace and the writing is pretty good, but the plot is still bland.