I Am in Douluo, I Can Make Unlimited Deductions

Is the author a newbie? I feel like there are some problems with the writing, especially Bibi Dong's attitude towards Yu Xiaogang. It changes at any time. I personally suggest changing it.

I thought you were a newbie until I saw your book on my bookshelf...

The author of more than 3 million words, your writing is... Very speechless

17 Pictures of me, I almost cursed, I was beeping with that Yu Xiaogang for a long time, water, and disgusting, and then I said, if I had known better, I would not have killed the villain, just severely injured and sealed the soul power. If I had known earlier that you could seal the soul power, I wouldn't have seen it. Chapter 17, when I saw you kill all five villains, I yelled at you, good guy, you asked them while you were killing them, but after you finished killing them, you forgot. I wanted to ask something myself, and I only remembered it after one or two pieces of water. Why, you deliberately left Yu Xiaogang behind to take the water, right?

After reading the introduction, I thought it was awesome. There are actually people who can write cuckold stories openly.

Toris is here to fight, and Wobo will give you more Aces!

If the protagonist conquers Bibi Dong within a month, there will be no secret room incident. The reason why Qian Xunji secretly escapes Bibi Dong is because Yu Xiaogang is from the Basketball Tyrannosaurus family and not from the Wuhun Hall. As long as the protagonist joins the Wuhun Hall, the Wuhun Hall will not refuse the protagonist's talent to become a god!

It's so dull, and it feels so stiff to read, and I have no interest in reading further.

I stopped reading the author's last book before chapter 50. Do you know why? Everything else is very interesting, but you just put a lot of shortcomings, disgusting things, things that I don't know whether I have done, and assigned them to Qian Xunji or others. Of course, the first dozen chapters are still very good to read, but the later chapters are getting more and more ugly. Then I thought about reading it again, so I skipped here. In the part about God Shura, did you still add a lot of things to him that I don't know whether he has done or not, and gave him moral approval? It's really disgusting to belittle your enemy and improve yourself.

The creativity is there, but there is definitely something wrong with the writing. The master in the original version has no ability and a cowardly character, but he is not a bad guy. The way of writing that belittles the enemy and exalts oneself is also a bit dissuasive.

Will Tang San come out again? Will he come out as the son of the protagonist? ? ?

Regarding Bibi Dong, I have always believed that if you have the ability, go to her, and if you don't have the ability, stay away from her. It is the most foolish to fall in love without the ability.

The talent building can also materialize 29 items. You can put forward any talents and martial arts that you want the protagonist to materialize. If they are suitable for the protagonist, Xiaozi will join them😁😌 There are only 29 days left Thank you for your support😁😁

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Dear author, I feel that there is something wrong with the writing of the 500,000 pounds in Chapter 28! Not to mention how powerful a god is, but half a million kilograms, the speed of swinging, and the Sharingan can bring even a hint of threat to a Titled Douluo. This is too much! If you want to say that God weighs five hundred thousand catties, I will reluctantly accept it. But for a titled Douluo, the protagonist's Sharingan can keep up with the speed, plus the martial spirit can change length and weight up to half a million pounds. Can it only bring a hint of threat to a titled Douluo?

Recently, because of the development of a new batch of plug-ins in fantasy literature, these plug-ins have also flowed into the fan fiction market. Doupo already has a book about simulator plug-ins. It's a very good book. Then the book Douluo begins to analyze: Timeline issues The overall timeline of Bibi Dong's girlhood is relatively small. If it is for the sake of purity, the routine of "The Emperor of Douluo: The Dragon Shocks the World" is usually used, and he travels through the past timeline in the middle period to save Bibi Dong. This way of writing means that the first chapter comes with Bibi Dong's favorability. Any time the timeline of Bibi Dong's girlhood is written, because there are too few references, it can be said to be purely original. Readers have to rely on their own imagination to imagine the original character's young image. So it is inevitable that readers will quarrel with the image of the original character when he was young. —— The first point that can dissuade readers is the period when they first met Bibi Dong The Hongmeng-like stick martial spirit + three magatama sharingan appeared in the simulation The martial spirit is too unconventional, and there are Honghuang-style cheats at the entry point. Sharingan is something the author has added to the difficulty. One is the combat power conversion system. How to convert combat power? One is that due to the overwhelming popularity of Dead Fire, some readers are completely disgusted with Dead Fire's overseas publications and will abandon the book directly after seeing it. That's why I added an extra Sharingan to make it more difficult for myself. —— Sorry, it's so embarrassing, I can't stand it anymore. Bibi Dong Girl's timeline is really difficult to control. If the level is not high enough, Qian Xunji cannot be stopped. If the level is too high, what will happen to the later plots and what will happen to the plots during the Tang San period? So the trick of traveling through the timeline to save Bibi Dong in the mid-term came up. It might be better if the timeline of this book was when Tang San was the same age, and then travel through the timeline in the middle to save Bibi Dong. It slipped away. I really wanted to read the advice and lose my mind. This is a refreshing article. However, I have read too many Douluo fanfics now, and I couldn't stand this one. If I had read it earlier, I should have been able to read it. The first Douluo fanfic I read was the plug-in version of Sansheng Wuhun Honghuangliu. Finally, come on, author.

Sure enough, whether a novel is good or not has nothing to do with how much is written.

Seriously, this is a comic book

Wang Lihong? Article? Yu Xiaogang? I felt who the author was connoting🤔, I said I couldn't understand it, but I was shocked😎

The protagonist has a harem and can he explain it to others with a smile? I really don't know what kind of mentality it is to be so awesome

Damn it, this protagonist has a pig brain, modern people think like a girl and don't understand anything. I really admire this author. At the beginning, he created the image of a scumbag who wants more than ten wives, but then no scumbag understands the characteristics of women. It's really hard to write in such a stiff way. Water pussy

The only thing I ask for is that we don't make the protagonist into an extremely tall person like the last one, and the bad characters into characters that you hate. That's why I was persuaded to quit the last one.

I only ask for one thing, please stop writing like this, okay? Please

I just wanted to ask and everyone said there was something wrong with the author's book, but the book's label said it was funny and thought-provoking... Anyway, I don't think there's a big problem with the content.

I have only watched a few episodes, but Bibi Dong was written like a nympho by the author.