I Hope You Also Have the Same Attitude Towards Cultivating Immortals

It's a standard cool article, and it can be seen that the author has tried his best to write an interesting plot. The writing style is still a bit lacking. Playing one joke in multiple chapters at the same time can already dissuade most readers. There are also some similar back-and-forth reversals in movie plots. The description is a bit too long. I believe most people will not finish it and skip more. In general, it is a refreshing article. I can see that it is very enjoyable to write, but it is not natural enough. It's like I always say I can do something but never do it There are also many small details described that are relatively simple, crude and illogical. There are many nonsensical things and are extremely unfriendly to old bookworms That's it. 26 Chapters have been read.

The author writes very well, I hope he can continue writing

It doesn't poke. The needle doesn't poke. It's just a little short 🙂

One of the few books that left a lasting impression on me. Personally I think it has great potential. I am looking forward to the story of Zuo Jianxian.

The book is good, reward me with 500 points

The rhythm in the early stage was quite good, but suddenly there was a big battle, and the level was exceeded. The strength was too loose. Maybe it was because the realm was not suppressed enough?

So writing your first book is best done as a side job. Without the author's own desire for expression, this book would not have been written. Very few people become gods with their first book (but it is true that most people become gods with their first book), so the author must first determine why he writes the book. My personal suggestion is to satisfy your desire for expression. Only when you feel comfortable writing can you have the motivation to continue writing. And if the financial conditions are not good, it is best to find a part-time job. If you expect too much financial rewards from writing a book, you will easily be influenced by the will of the reader. No book has survived that was influenced by the will of the readers Readers' opinions can be referred to, but they cannot be influenced. Reading a novel is actually like playing an RPG on the "server" in the author's text. What kind of world the author can build and what kind of story he can create are the biggest selling points of this "server". Every author wants to build a different "server", and every reader wants to play a different "RPG". Therefore, the author can only make the best "server" he wants to build, and of course he can also consider popular elements to embellish it. But the bottom line requirement for a server is stability. The logic is stable, the story is stable, the characters are stable, etc. Each unstable point is like a bug to the reader. Readers will ask for bug fixes. At this time, the author must first consider whether this is a bug? Then consider the impact of fixing the bug. The last thing is whether modifying the bug will have any impact on other readers. ------------Don't want to see it? Just jump to the conclusion---------------- Write the story you want to write, and then listen to the readers' opinions to improve the story. Instead of writing novels for readers.

As a 13-year-old bookworm, this book written by the author is already a masterpiece in my opinion, because the advantages of the author's works are so outstanding that they can cover up other shortcomings. It can be felt that the author's writing style was very changeable when writing this book, because he was looking for different ideas. I think the other chapters are good, but the part where the protagonist dies is a bit stiff in order to quickly advance the plot. Simply put, the image of the villain is not full enough, and he does not stand up as a relatively pure tool man. The author's restraint in writing is also a unique part of this book. The characters he writes all have some personalities and special experiences, but the author only briefly describes them and quickly skips them. I think this is because the author has made some compromises for the fast pace of online articles. I think this kind of writing has the potential to open up a new genre. Longer works like Mortal Cultivation of Immortality may not be very popular with current readers, because people nowadays have less and less time to leisurely read online articles.

How to say it? This book is very good, but there are some poisonous points, but these poisonous points will be explained in the end, and they are very reasonable. However, if you don't know what is behind, these points are poisonous points. Don't give up reading because of these poisonous points. In the end, they are all foreshadowings, but it seems a bit unreasonable in the front. The Battle of Haotian in the second volume directly canonizes the gods.

Brothers, can you support me? I want to be the operating officer of this book. If I do, I will give everyone benefits!

It's time for the annual traditional show again! Leave your current cell phone battery, I believe you will be able to find the other half who has a battery that adds up to 100! It's the same old rules I'll go first: 99%

"I hope you have the same attitude towards cultivating immortals." "From now on, people will ask you if you have a Taoist partner." "Just do it!" "In the future, people will ask you what your cultivation level is." "Just deal with it!" "Just show off and it's over!"                             ————Chen Xuanqing

Great content. Exaggerated plug-ins naturally need to have a matching world background. The author has a good grasp of the strength of the plug-in and the depth of the world background. It looks very satisfying. Long Aotian will not be one-sided, nor will he be a one-sided abuser. Such a perverted plug-in, if it weren't for the dark and dark background of the big world, would appear to be overly output. However, the simple darkness can affect the perception. It needs to be matched with enough humorous daily life and interactions, sprinkled with positive energy, and add some standpoints to blur the line between good and evil. The balance is just right. Only when the balance is grasped can the tilt of good and evil, promotion first and suppression later, and pleasure and cruelty become meaningful.

I can't figure out why the protagonist is so hostile to the demon clan, especially what he said to his adopted son. He clearly knows that demons eat humans, and humans eat demons. Natural selection favors the strong. As long as the protagonist is strong enough, demons can also be his subordinates. Yet, he still seems to want to exterminate the demon clan. After the demons wiped out the clan, wouldn't a large number of the materials for making alchemy, weapons, and exercises become extinct?

I hope you can leave here immediately after reading my comments. This book is completely poisonous. I really don't understand why some people can say that they are gods. Just because their settings and language expressions are good can they be called gods? The plot of the story is completely unreadable, the main plot is very confusing, and the character of the protagonist is even more confusing. Taken together, this book is just the author's idle moaning and the author's self-pleasure novel.

I can't stand it anymore. . First of all, the emotion towards the heroine. . In fact, the heroine was only given eyes. . There was no death or anything like that. . . Then he remembered it in his heart and cultivated immortality just to resurrect her. . If I were the heroine, I would feel a bit outrageous. Then the protagonist cannot get used to demons and cannibals during his journey of cultivating immortality. Because that would make the protagonist forget the essence of human beings. But he has had relationships with many women. What about the immortality you cultivated? Then the protagonist becomes a demon himself and can't stand it. Afraid of the rise of monsters and threats to mankind. . All kinds of traps. He is also extremely indifferent to his biological son. . Too much kindness to an adopted son. . But don't forget, immortal cultivators are not good either. Don't forget the dark side of Taixu Sect, and the Immortal Sect ignores mortal lives in order to deal with the Ghost King. . What's the difference between him and those monsters? . Not to mention that when the protagonist was dealing with the Ghost King in the Immortal Sect, he set up a large formation and killed countless monks just for their blood essence. . And the protagonist has a hook, so there is no need for these. . That's it, we still need to create a good senior brother in Taixu Sect.

It starts to rot in the middle and later stages, and is extremely poisonous. In the later period, the author wanted to write about the space-time rescue scene, but he didn't have the writing style at all, and the writing was a mess.

This is the poetry building! It can be said that poetry can be written as a poem! Ten miles of red makeup came to nothing, and the red sword raised its hand to cut this place. The hatred of the family and the country has been forgotten. From now on, only Princess Jing is left. ——"Red Makeup" This hatred lasts forever, and the short position has no roots. How to talk about drinking and singing? Not empty birthday dusk red! There is no word or cause in the world, and the red silk falls with one sword. The white-headed green fir tree sighs at the sky, where all the stars in the sky have nowhere to go. ——"Born in the Sky" For a long time, life and death, Wuwei Kong is the enemy, the long sword points to the sky, and the reverse blade points to the mysterious land. People who have not returned to this world have a reputation, and people say that they have been drunk for three thousand years, and the years have passed and the pass has been cold. Stay away from names and poems, be the right person, don't say anything for a long time, and say goodbye to all the beautiful people to live a long life. People who work hard, God will not let them down, and they have been willing to pursue it for 30,000 years for one wish! This situation is not what I expected, and my heart will always seek the gift of immortality. ——"Ode to Immortality" Night, deep and quiet. The moon, bright and holy. The interaction and blending of night and moon make up a grand scene. You and I are walking on the path, laughing and talking and having fun. Fading away... The night is sinking, The moon is disappearing. I knew that the sun was rising... The sky was bright again. ——"Night Hour" If you live up to your reputation in vain, you will serve your country with your heart! The ambition is still strong after a long journey, I recommend Xuanyuan with my blood! After a while, Fang Hua Bai Sheng was born, bowing his head and waiting for the sound of the time. Rise up into the sky and fight against reincarnation, killing thirty million humans and immortals in the sky! I pick up my sword and dance with my butterfly body, leaving bloodstains and knowing my pain. Protect Cang Nian with your own sword, and all who come will be killed and never come back! ——"Fang Sheng" Sit empty and have no worries and rejoice, only regrets when you grow old. I lament that the years are like running water, and I walk alone in heaven and earth. How can anyone look back when he touches his shirt and cuts off his robe? When people leave, they feel empty of care, and lonely shadows come and go as they wish. ——"Businessman·Wanting the Heaven and Earth Alone in Regret and Leaving His Works"

What's the use of the protagonist's plug-in? Apart from having some effect in the early stage, it has no use in the later stage. At most, an invincible one is of some use. But wouldn't Invincible be cracked by the Heavenly Tribulation later on? Do you call this Invincible? The instant kill is even more weakened. Do you call this an instant kill? Heavenly tribulation is worse than instant kill, so why not call it damage increase? The system can obviously be modified, but it doesn't use so many functions, just use instant kill and invincibility. I felt even more aggrieved when I hit Shangguan Jinghong. What did you change? I only read the early stages of this book, and what I wrote in the later stages.

How should I put it? This main line is laid out directly. But I think it is so interesting. There are three lines. One is as the inner demon said. I feel that this inner demon is the way of heaven that has taken a liking to the protagonist, or the seeds are buried in the heavenly book. The second is that Taiyi engages in karma and does bad things, which is standard for model workers. The third is the development of the dark line sect. This is normal. There are two sides as bright as they are.

The protagonist originally went to practice immortality for the art of resurrection, but now he can't be resurrected. Instead, he went to fight against Jiuzhou Da Ren and help Tiandao save the fire. He had just been deceived by Tiandao and went to help Tiandao. 🐷What's the picture of his feet? He helped Tiandao save the flood just to resurrect people, but now? When did the protagonist really become a saint who takes the world as his own responsibility?

After reading a few chapters, I don't understand why Sister Li doesn't practice so many exercises, but instead practices some animal transformation exercises? You have already failed in Invincible. Is it difficult to practice your own race? ? ? 🤔

Shi Qingxuan was suddenly choked and speechless. This bastard didn't leave any face to her! In anger, Shi Qingxuan stamped her feet and wanted to turn around and leave, but was grabbed by Bian Fulai's arm and pulled into the front room. As soon as he entered the room, Shi Qingxuan, who was still struggling, was stunned. It turns out that this is a mourning hall, decorated with great care, and a portrait is hung on the place where the spirit is placed. A man and a woman are leaning against each other. The man is handsome and the woman is pretty, they can be called the perfect couple. "This is... This is..." Shi Qingxuan looked at the spiritual tablet, her beautiful eyes filled with moisture, and she murmured to herself in disbelief. Bian Fulai hugged her gently and said softly: "This is a portrait I drew based on the appearance of Qingxuan's parents when they were young, and I built this tomb in the quietest corner of the mansion. I hope Brother Shi and his wife can rest in peace under the Nine Springs. They have suffered too much in this life, and I hope they can live happily together in heaven forever." Qingxuan can also come here to pay homage to her as a child. " Shi Qingxuan looked at the portraits of her parents and couldn't help but have mixed feelings for a moment, thinking of her parents' tragic death and thinking of herself dedicating her innocent body to that disgusting man for revenge. All kinds of feelings came to her, making tears burst into her eyes and she cried uncontrollably. Bian Fuli hugged her gently from behind and took her a few steps closer. In the portrait, the rich and handsome Shi Zhixuan and the immortal Bi Xiuxin are more clearly identifiable. Shi Qingxuan controlled her emotions a little, pushed away her side, and kowtowed three times to the spiritual throne respectfully, sobbing: "Father... Mother... Ugh... The unworthy girl Shi Qingxuan kowtows to you all the time... I hope my parents' spirits in heaven can be happy... I... I... Wu wu..." Halfway through, she burst into tears and couldn't continue. After a while, Shi Qingxuan calmed down a bit, then she took out the jade flute that never left her body, put it to her lips and started playing it gently. Listening to the sound of the flute, which carried the autumn wind and autumn rain and brought melancholy, I knew that Shi Qingxuan was used to playing the flute to relieve his emotions, so I didn't bother him and waited quietly. Finally, Shi Qingxuan finished playing and gently wiped away her tears. Looking at Bian Fuli, who had been standing quietly beside him, she sincerely smiled at him for the first time and said, "Thank you, I didn't expect you to do such a thing for me." Bian Fuli chuckled and said, "Qingxuan, you're welcome." After a pause, his tone But suddenly he changed and continued: "It's just that just saying thank you verbally doesn't seem to be enough." Looking at the man's familiar lewd smile, Shi Qingxuan couldn't help but feel a chill in her heart. She took two steps back and asked in surprise: "You... What do you want to do?" Bian moved up to Shi Qingxuan and controlled her before she could react. He leaned in front of the woman's beautiful face like a fairy in the moon, gently licked the small earlobe twice, and said with an evil smile: "In order to comfort the souls of Brother Shi and his wife in heaven, Qingxuan should express her happiness in front of her parents when she is loved by me. This is the duty of a daughter, haha. " Shi Qingxuan's face turned pale. In her eyes, the quiet courtyard where her parents' graves were placed was like a small house in the forest, a pure land for her soul. At this time, the bastard actually said such words, why didn't she frighten her? However, after getting along with each other these days, Shi Qingxuan knew that the man in front of her was not something she could control at all, so she had no choice but to beg softly: "Please, please don't... You can do whatever you want in other places. Here, I really don't want it here... Please..." Looking at this stunning beauty begging me in a pitiful and soft voice, Bian moved his big hands to the curves of the woman's delicate body, and said leisurely: "Qingxuan, you have also seen how Xiu Fang and Xiu Xun talked to me. I would like to ask you to imitate your sisters first."

I read it in one night, and the content of the surprise book made me linger. I seemed to have returned to the attraction and indescribable feeling I had when I first came into contact with online novels. Looking back, I recalled the content and writing. It was not very outstanding, but my imagination resonated with the author's thinking, so I quite like this book. The book is great, cheers for the author!

If an external incarnation has its own will, what else can it be called an external incarnation? What Tai Yi writes is a real failure. Even if the protagonist dies, shouldn't it normally take over Tai Yi's body? After all, Chen Xuanqing is the original body. Can an incarnation with its own will be called an incarnation? How about calling it one body and two souls? Multiple personalities? It's outrageous to be able to enjoy the invincibility of the protagonist's system at the same time, but still have the will to kill the protagonist.

I watched the birth of this book bit by bit. I personally felt that it was really amazing in the early stage and I was happy to read this book every day. However, I stopped reading it because of the exam. Later, when I wanted to pick up this book, I found that I didn't want to read it, so I haven't read it. Even now, I still feel that it is tasteless and it is a pity to abandon it. But I still ordered them all, let's add some details.

How to evaluate it? The main line of the story gives people a sense of expectation, which is really rare in Qidian's new books. Whether it is Chen's line or Tai's line, at least the future development and achievements will be seen. I don't know if there will be any surprises later.

Logically speaking, it should be popular. Unfortunately, the author is not good and the writing style is also messy.

Wind disasters tear apart, floods cause great destruction, fires cause great collapse, and natural disasters cause great sand sculptures 🙂🙂🙂

Many characters have not appeared, so it is unnecessary to reveal the character information first, which feels like a spoiler. You can change it later, otherwise it will lose a lot of surprises, and it will be more convenient for you to foreshadow Tai Yi and Chen Xuanqing are the same person, so what girl Zhou's dream should be her future body. Left Sword Immortal, Chen Xuanqing is talking about holding the sword in his left hand, so it must be different from holding the sword in his right hand. Maybe holding the sword in his left hand is the real sword intention of Nirvana. Well, I finished reading it in one sitting today. My evaluation is that it is better than the previous one. The plot of the previous one was too confusing and the character creation of Jiang Chen was confusing. The only thing now is that the storyline is too slow. Some dungeons or unexpected plots can be set up. The Ghost King counts, but it is too short and the second volume is Taiyi's home field. On the contrary, you can spend more time describing Taiyi, a capable general, who is under control now, but remember that one person is the king, and the main thing is to improve your cultivation, especially Taiyi. The first second Taiyi opens the system, he should focus on what skills, magic skills or treasures Can you create your own characters? I thought of a good person who fits the Taiyi camp to make up for the regret of the self-created character in the last book.