The Road to Immortality Through Refining Weapons

There is no clear introduction as to whether the protagonist is an Aboriginal or a time traveler. If he is an Aboriginal, the writing is unreasonable in many places. If he is a time traveler, it is not written.

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There are too few chapters, so it's okay for now. In addition, if the protagonist is a native, the phrase "husband" will be very dramatic, "Langjun, Alang, husband, husband". . . Don't these work?

Let's take a look at the book of the demon monk. I hope you don't become a eunuch like the demon monk and update it no matter what.

Still writing? No update for two days

The protagonist is almost a second-generation cultivator, and it didn't make me feel immersed in the movie. Moreover, he also has a beautiful wife, which made me sad. In good novels, most of the protagonists are grassroots, because most of the readers are ordinary people, so they have a sense of involvement. Secondly, the protagonist must be handsome, so as to have a sense of involvement. Don't drive every now and then. Most readers want to see you cultivating immortality, or driving in urban novels, looking at those female celebrities, stars and protagonists, not more. . . It is best not to find a Taoist companion if possible, but a rich woman cannot refuse