The War Between Heaven and Earth Begins with Ip Man

I think I can buy a few kilograms of mutton and go to Big Big Wolf in exchange for some inventions.

The writing is okay, and first of all, the world is okay! The second world is simply outrageous, with incorrect views, lust, and unclear understanding of people! Abandoned

What you love most is yourself, so you don't need to say it. When you say this, you are cooperating with someone sleeping with you and traveling through time without saying hello. It's so sb.

Basically, when I see the so-called nine yin and nine yang, I immediately cross it out.

I couldn't stand reading this book until I reached chapter 27. The transitions between plots are really abrupt. For example, as soon as you enter Qitian Dragon Slayer, you go straight to Zhuwu Lianzhuang. This is something a normal person can do.

Now that we have reached the key point, let's briefly analyze similar novels. Generally speaking, during the transitional stage from martial arts to fairy tales, things can become boring if you're not careful. First, give up on the unpopular plot copies. You need a lot of boring explanations to introduce the world view. Those who have seen it think it is nonsense. Without introduction, half of the people will not be able to understand it. Second, it needs to match the style of the previous dungeon. In fact, it is more appropriate to start with Gu Long's world view in the early stage. At this time, taking over the world of Canghai, the protagonist will have more obvious growth. Third, if you follow the world view of Jin Yong's novels in the early days, it will be difficult to arrange the plot in an interesting way. There are very few similar world views of Qi Flow. More people choose Double Dragons of the Tang Dynasty, and a few choose Qin Ji. The plot of the magic reform is an idea, such as the legendary Li Xuanba, or the pre-Qin Qi practitioner. Fourth, most people who choose Fengyun will just rush in. After all, those who practice martial arts can slay dragons, and those who wait for the next dungeon to cultivate immortals will be like that. If they don't arrange an innate god and demon to brush up their performance, they won't show progress. If they do, it will give people the feeling that Pangu, the great god of creation, is in the Nascent Soul stage, and the story will be over.

Don't write about martial arts. The author's power system is too extreme. It feels like poison when written.

This kind of novel should only be in Yitian. Jin's Yitian itself is poisonous. If you wear it, you will directly drive away what you want to read. Jin's Snow Mountain Flying Fox and Yitian are two poisonous books, and the results are not good.

Looks great. Suddenly a hero comes to save the beauty.

Taking the heroine everywhere, extremely poisonous

The hero saves the beauty🙄, I don't want to read it anymore

Bai Yuechang? Isn't that Lei Luo's wife?

You are serious about creating this system with more than 100 chapters. To be honest, although there are some shortcomings and some minor poisonous points in the previous chapters, it is still readable. When it comes to the system, I have no interest in reading it at all, especially since the protagonist is completely passive and exploited. Why don't you read similar books before writing the system?

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The only fly in the ointment of yours is that Zhu Jiuzhen and Wu Qingying confiscated it, it is not evil enough.

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