Successor of the Dao Sect of the Great Dream Qin Shi

What comment do you want? Also, during the Warring States Period, the Golden Light Curse had not yet been invented. I remember that the Golden Light Curse was created by Zhang Daoling, and then he founded Longhu Mountain. There was no such person as Zhang Daoling during the Warring States Period. How did the Taoists at that time know about the Golden Light Curse?

What is the identity of the protagonist? He is a prince. Which king is his father? You also wrote that Han Fei is the ninth prince of Korea. Don't tell me that you don't know that the Warring States Period requires the son of a prince to be called a prince. Common sense is wrong. What are you writing about? Do you want to read it yourself after writing it? Or a studio?

I can't read the first two chapters. I call him "Gongzi". Did the Warring States period call him "Gongzi" casually?

Two chapters, the most, is a mess. The author's logic is messed up. He writes wherever he thinks. I don't know if there is an outline, but it doesn't seem to have a main line at all. Moreover, the writing is too plain, and Xiaobai's writing is not such a white method.