The Brave and Invincible Young Master

It feels like updates are getting slower and slower. Is it my misunderstanding?

This is the beginning. This golden finger. . . Extreme Demon

The author's book is based on novels such as Yakuza-ryu and Mubi Bleeding. If there is a female protagonist, it will be enough to have a single female protagonist or double female protagonists. If there are more than one, it will feel like a harem. Of course, this depends on the author's own emotional drama. If the emotional drama is well written, dual female protagonists are also acceptable. If not, either there will be no female protagonist, or there will be only one female protagonist! Of course, from my personal point of view, I prefer novels with a single heroine. Of course, this depends on what the author writes in the outline. Finally, I wish the author will get better and better, and his works will become more and more popular. Come on, author.

In fact, I still like Mr. Pianpian Yu more. . . This scene of the two-meter-tall man from King Kong holding a big ax to kill people still looks like a villain. . .

From my personal point of view, it is not a fairy tale (almost 8 years old), because I have read many novels of this type, and I may be a little tired of aesthetics, so I can only say that it is quite satisfactory. Of course, given the current starting point, this book is still worth reading. It does not have too many poisonous points, and it is okay if it is refreshing (I have read it to the latest)

It's really rubbish, it's a completely rubbish novel. I accepted it. I had nothing to do and I almost got poisoned when I read your novel.

Alas, this is written like this. It is clear that his own power outside has taken shape, and he has also recruited a powerful thug named Suan Ni. It is really uncomfortable to suddenly go to Wanjie City and become a younger brother again. If you want to position the protagonist as a lone ranger, don't write as much space as you did before about the forces. . . . . Now suddenly ran to Wanguo City. I also tried to watch a few of them, but they didn't feel interesting or engaging at all. (Bennon couldn't stand it anymore)

It's better to go away and write Ji Dao Ryu

Dear readers, please take a look. If it doesn't work, I will rub your shoulders and back. I will provide you with a one-stop service. I only want to pursue reading but not to keep reading.

What can I say, the author was very humble when he rubbed my shoulders and legs last night, but his update speed hardly arouses my sympathy

I hope the Lord of Peach Blossom Spring can withstand the protagonist's punch

The Crimson Tide Army leader is ranked in the top 20 of the Crimson Master list, while the Taohuawu leader is only over 50. Pig's Feet even said that he is about to catch up with the leader, and he will play tricks on a dock leader. The main character of Taohuawu is too invincible, so either she should be ranked very high, or she should not be beaten for a long time by a pig's trotter, which would not even count, and the experience would be very poor.

Everyone wants to see the protagonist use a big ax to kill people? I think it can be arranged.

In fact, the main line of family development is very good-looking. Joining the Crimson Tide Army is definitely a failure. The only thing left is to fight monsters and upgrade, which is not good-looking.

I feel like the writing is messy, and the current Qidian introduction is rubbish.

After reading a few chapters, I feel that there are some loopholes. For example, the protagonist has only traveled through time for half a year. The golden finger is the birthmark of the original body, but it is said that it was brought over by time travel. Is it still called a birthmark? Isn't your family surprised? Another example is that the original person was one of the three young masters. Even if he was at the bottom of the martial arts list, he couldn't just be pure Yuan Gong. The other martial arts written on the panel in the book were all just beginning, and it was written that he had just started practicing. Could it be that the martial arts were cleared at the beginning of the time travel? It is unclear. The logic of some details is a bit confusing.

How should I put it, the way the protagonist practices his strength makes people feel less domineering.

Protagonist: I want to cheat Author: You can't control it

I read a few four-character pictures... It's a mess

Think about it, the law of force requires the conservation of energy. If a corrupt warrior becomes stronger after death, then he doesn't need the conservation of energy?

This writing style is so embarrassing, it's not as good as a novice's writing

The author needs to practice more, as many sentences are not smooth and concise enough to read.

Very nice, thank you author! !

It's a good subject matter, and the writing is okay. But the description of the plot is not good at promoting the story. It's a bit toxic because of a lot of writing.

It's still a little too little. Can I add more now? If you can, tell me the rules.

I feel like the author has a good attitude. Come on author

Well written! ! ! Come on! ! !

The law of force of Good Trash Kua is brute force, which is completely useless against those weird methods.

Dear Shennong Tell me your feelings. I won't watch if there are more than six chapters that say poison 😐

There are ghosts and monsters in the world. In fact, if you visualize the sun and practice pure yang, you will not be invaded by any law. 🔥