This System Is a Bit Late

I read four or five of them, ugh It's really annoying to change the plot blindly again. At least the plot should be changed after you travel back in time. This feels comfortable. If you change it like this, Huang Rong was born a few years ago, and his father kept the Nine Yin Manual. He actually said that he kept it for a few years without the dignity of peeking. It was really funny. His wife died for the Nine Yin Manual. You can imagine how ridiculous it is. He even said that it would not affect the plot. Since it is not based on the original work, it is changed to death, and it is selfish to make Huang Yaoshi a villain, Wang Chongyang, and Ouyang Feng to say Daren and Daring are not following the original work.

I watched the Snow novella directly, and the part where Nangong Pushe picks up girls seemed a bit uncomfortable. First of all, it wasn't meant to be a joke. Normally, a woman is standing somewhere, and a man with unknown origins and unknown intentions comes next to her. He comes up to her and says, "I like you, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah," Nangong. Not to mention that Nangong is an extremely outstanding person with a distinctive personality. As the current customs tend to be ancient, it is estimated that modern people encounter such a man. You can even call the police. Besides, she is the most beautiful woman in the world. I don't know much about Nangong's previous experience. She seems to have conflicts with her father, and I can't easily trust a man. What's more, you said you know her so well. I feel it's good not to kill the protagonist. She followed Xu Fengnian to enter the building. I have a request. With him, why should I follow you? What is the plot of the author? In modern times, a woman is standing on the road. A man who doesn't know whether he is a human or a ghost comes and talks nonsense to her. He confesses his love to her, and then he knows where she comes from. He lets her sit in his BMW, gets in the car and starts to touch her, and then this woman There is no response yet, so he can move his hands or whatever. Are you familiar with this kind of woman? But is it Nangong? I am not opposed to having a harem and emotional drama, but it is really too embarrassing. It is just my own insignificant opinion. I don't mean to criticize. I hope the author can write better and better. I just want to make a suggestion.

The author's writing style is not suitable for writing novels, so go back to writing a diary.

After reading the featured reviews and reading a few chapters, it was really uncomfortable. The sentences are not fluent and logical; there are big problems with sentence segmentation. Things that should be connected are broken and things that should not be connected are put together; the punctuation marks are also flawed. There are some in Zhangzhang, obsessive-compulsive disorder can't stand it

This book has too many hints of crime. I hope the platform can review the content of the novel.

If you write novels, you can't even use double quotation marks. Why else do you write novels? Find a class!

It seems baffling. In Quanzhen, he is still a human being, but in the snow, he becomes a flower picker? ? ? Like a ten thousand-year-old single dog released from prison. . . .

Update quickly, everyone is waiting for Cao Mengde to dominate the world

Those who like to plucking birds are ruthless, and women just want a piece of scenery on the road. Once you've played it, forget it. When you get tired of it, just move on. When you are tired, stop and look at the scenery and admire the beauties. Kill some people who should be killed and those who should not be killed. Try more different lives, preferably one world and one identity. Gentlemen, villains, knights, counselors, emperors, playboys, etc.

Missing words and few sentences, unclear sentences, uncomfortable

Damn, you actually deleted the bad reviews. Is it possible that all the 5-star reviews on a book are fake reviews? I have reported it and I paid to comment, but you deleted it for me.

The Condor Shooting is okay, did someone change the writing in Xue Zhong?

How about this?

It's simply insulting the swordsmanship in the snow.

A mess of invincible white writing! No IQ!

I read a few chapters, but the writing is really not good. I have become picky after reading too many good books.

Find a job in a factory. Writing books is not suitable for you. The writing and plot are terrible, at the level of a junior high school student.

I just read the first volume and I can't tell who said the words. The words the character said are in the same quotation marks as the character.

A must see! Thank you all.

Looking forward to the snow, come on, author! ! ! !