Versatile Mage: the Sun Angel of the End

I still haven't finished it. After reading chapters 300 and 400, I realized that I have just reached a high level. I knew it was going to be unfinished before the end of 700. However, the author's writing is still very good. The early stage strength is no different from the original book. This book can slowly progress from intermediate to advanced levels, and the plot, 1500-2000 chapters, is perfect. Moreover, the initial cost is too exaggerated, the price of breaking through the hospital is reasonable, and the auxiliary resources can cost billions. Jiang is more powerful than the protagonist. Generally speaking, I understand the book well, it is invincible in the early stage, and the writing is also very delicate. Nowadays, brainless invincible articles are popular, and this kind of powerful ones are not popular. Please comment and support it.

After reading so many all-fa fanfics, only the Summoner one is well written. The author's book is also quite good. It is not stuck to the original work and is not restricted by the framework of the original work. Personally, I feel that it is at least the top three among all the all-fa fanfics. It is also about the light system. I think the author's writing style is much better than Zhuoyao's, and everyone Everyone has their own mage journey. No matter how strong Mo Fan is, he is still a mage. Uncle Luan only provides us with a world view of the magic plane, and Mo Fan is just the more prominent one among many mages. I hope the author will not be a eunuch and continue the magic plane. It is best to fill the big hole left by Uncle Luan. Hope to accept Yali!

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How can I put it, I can't stand it, I'm off the mark, and now I'm reading the chapter about Yali trying to keep Mu Ningxue in Chapter 98, and the result is more and more silent. In summary, apart from whether the protagonist is a human or a ghost, the original characters are exaggerated, which is fine in normal novels, but in fan fiction, the original characters are too showy, and their combat power is completely different from the original. It's more than a little bit too exaggerated. The original character is so tricky, and being too popular not only doesn't bring out the excitement, but makes the protagonist seem too ordinary. The most important thing is that the protagonist feels very ordinary except for his talent, as if he has no opinions of his own and is shrouded in the will of all parties. For example, Han Ji took Xinxia as his disciple before, and had no plans for being divided up by the boss or even planning for the future. It's nothing to do with the slow popularity of fan fiction, but this feeling is that apart from being shown off for several rounds, there is no sense that the protagonist has any highlights. Of course, it's not that the author's writing is not good. To be honest, the writing of the protagonist is quite good. Except for the big pitfall of a bunch of original characters, I'm not sure about it. So, has anyone who has seen the latest chapter replied and consoled me, did the protagonist pick it up in the later period? Don't let the original characters show off one after another. In the end, the protagonist is led by the nose like a cute new character. At least he should be handsome once. After all, readers basically assume the perspective of the protagonist, but now, with a bunch of original characters showing off, the protagonist doesn't even have the feeling of being powerful, not to mention the elusive mystery. Anyway, come on, by the way, come here and see the latest boss's reply, have you caught it?

Let me sum it up. I haven't seen much of it. To be honest, the writing is okay, the plot arrangement is too stiff, and there are real problems with talents. Let me tell you, is it serious about the protagonist's arrangement of ordinary talents? Oh, it seems a little bit higher, but it's the light system. Moreover, one thing to pay attention to when writing a novel is to give readers the desire to continue reading in the early stage, which is like hiding the second series full-time. This book is enjoyable, but there is too little. If you want more people to want to read it, you have to arrange some enjoyable ones. There is also the strength of the protagonist. His talent is mediocre to begin with, but he has been working hard until now, and then arranges a big wave for him in the early stage? To be honest, it's too literary, and the protagonist has no sense of existence at all, which makes people feel very useless. I was persuaded to quit here. The arrangement of this event is too rigid, especially the story of the Queen in White. Are you really serious? This is an enemy, the kind that almost kills you. Your book was very frustrating to read in the early stages, and I didn't feel as happy at the end. In the early stage, I only wrote about frustration, frustration, frustration. I know what you want to write, but holding it back like this will only make readers uncomfortable to be honest.

Before watching: A new female game character is created After watching: Get out of here, whatever Xinxia is, I only want Jiang Yali. It's really hard not to love this sweet and royal little rich woman!

I can see that in the world of full-time mage, you can upgrade if you have money Beginner level will cost several million Intermediate level will cost tens of millions High level will cost several hundred million Super level will cost several billions No wonder everyone can't afford to upgrade So talent is the return on investment The higher the return on investment, the better. The more talent you have, the better No wonder the Dongfang family's fire element has such a high rating Mo Fan is born with two elements, which looks bluffing In fact, the return on investment is still negative If you invest twice the resources, you will not be able to be two normal high-level envoys if you are a high-level six-series user. In other words, Mo Fan has much more cheating resources than others to upgrade.

Who doesn't like this kind of quirky girl? So, why? Why not the heroine? If a girl is so nice to you, why don't you just accept her as soon as possible?

Woohoo, I'm extremely sorry. The new author suddenly fell ill. Stop scolding. Stop scolding. Woohoo orz

After reading the first six chapters, I have no desire to read anymore. What did the author write in the golden three pieces? Moreover, the protagonist does not have as many supporting roles. Teacher Lin is really good at jumping and pretending. The most important thing that makes me dislike it is that the talent of the protagonist is written so poorly by the author. The protagonist is not as fast as his classmates in training, which makes it boring to watch (my own opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it) 🌝

I take back my disparagement of the first volume. I read a little bit of the second volume and felt better. I put it on the bookshelf first. After finishing all four volumes, I will finish them and finish them. This is the best full-time fanfic I have ever read, even better than the Summoner book. The author should not be bad! ! !

I have read novels for so many years, and I have some thoughts on the author's current situation of poor performance in this book. First of all, the author must have put a lot of thought into this novel. The characters are OK, the original plot is OK, and the quality is one of the best among all the French fans in Qidian. I think there are several reasons why it is not popular 1: The general trend of online articles now is dense and large number of cool points. However, this book is less exciting in the early stages and is not attractive enough to some readers. In the final analysis, online novels are a form of entertainment and a kind of reading that takes advantage of fragmented time. Therefore, it is necessary to look at the intensive exciting points or suspenseful and terrifying storylines based on the update time. It cannot be said that you only have one climax after updating for a month. It is easy to lose track of long and dull chapters. Follow-up reading is very important for online novels. 2 It is precisely because of the mediocre nature of this book in the early period that the new book is rarely read and recommended, and fewer and fewer people read it, creating a vicious cycle. Before reading it, I personally judge whether a novel is well-written mainly by looking at the number of posts in its comment area. From what I can see, this book is unlikely to add many new readers, and the author must have the intention to continue but earn a meager income. 3: Secondly, there are some points that the author did not handle well, but you can notice the author's growth by watching it, and he will definitely achieve something in time. This book is mainly due to some problems in the early stage that led to unsatisfactory results later on, but the quality of the book is still very good. I hope the author can continue his efforts and bravely pursue his dreams when the pressure of life allows.

Is this a fanfic about a full-time mage? I've read forty or fifty chapters and there's not even a single original character. Oh, there is Ren Xinxia. Sun Angel, you are completely poisonous. I have read nearly a thousand books, but I have never seen an angel use poison.

I can't hold on to the paid chapters anymore. After the first 40 or 50 chapters, I am still an ordinary person, with nothing outstanding. What do you read in fanfics? They just know the plot and then feel happy through the plot. As a result, after dozens of chapters, it is not as satisfying as the original book. This is boring. There is also that Liya who said that her mother is very awesome. Reading the comments, she said that her mother is a forbidden curse. Let's just say that a forbidden curse can be tricked by a white-clothed queen and a garbage teacher and she still doesn't say a word? What is that trash teacher talking about? The heroine obviously knows something is wrong with her and can't she just call her mother? Just sit and wait to die? If you say that the heroine has no background, that's it. I really don't understand what the author wants to express. In fact, it can be seen that the author has writing skills. You can completely create an original book. If the book is original and not fan fiction, then it is okay. The book is okay but it does not meet my interest in reading fan fiction. Bye, I am not complaining, I just point out the unreasonable parts.

When I saw the Sun Angel, I thought it would be the light system, the fire system, the psychic system, and the space system. Look like this, but when I read the comments, it turned out to be the light system, the poison system, the chaos system, emm. I thought the poison system was a bit weird.

This book is slow to pick up, and it is indeed a bit dull in the early stages. Overall, it is well written, with novel themes and not following the main character. Congratulations on its release.

I'm really convinced. I had known I wouldn't have kept it. More than 200 free chapters are gone 😭

Needless to say, as long as you can survive the weak period in the early stage, you will definitely fall in love with this book (there are just a few important characters in the early stage, otherwise it would be better to just skip it)

Suddenly I want to see him traveling across France with the power of Kyle, awakening the light and fire elements at the beginning, and bringing a sword. When he upgrades, he does not awaken the new elements but becomes a god. At the middle level, he starts to grow wings, and at the first level, he has an extra pair of wings It is best to shout the angelic lines louder and more powerful 😌 Think about it, Say this when fighting I am here to answer the call Witness the supreme fire The sorrowful are inflamed, the fallen are unforgivable The eternally burning wings take me away from the perdition of the mortal world The sharpness of thousands of blades and the fury of tens of thousands of flames are drumming in my heart Dang The thirst for justice soars into the sky Saved in the light It's not hot at all I can't help but think about it again. Three pairs of wings grow from mid-level to super-level, which just corresponds to Kyle's three ascensions in the game. The protagonist should be born. In a family whose parents are judges, influenced by Kyle, he has an extreme thirst for justice and believes in absolute justice. From the third pair of super-awakened wings, he inherited the power from Morgana and began to gradually restore his humanity. The forbidden curse began to inherit the power of the righteous star spirit to push across the entire law and destroy the Holy City. 😌 Kyle is the extreme and absolute justice, which is trembling, while Morgana is the opposite, the embodiment of absolute humanity. The combination of the two is the power of the righteous star spirit, and its force is definitely enough to level the entire law.

I couldn't stand it after reading a few chapters. It was impossible to come into contact with a slave-level monster just a few days after awakening, and the teacher was just an ordinary mid-level person who could just kill a slave. Can you beat a cute little one and a big cute one? Just tell me

After reading so many Quanfa fanfics, I feel that the author's writing is okay, but the progress is a bit slow (whisper bb). Some of them wrote as fast as one million words, and they might have started the national government earlier. It means that the author can skip some unnecessary time. For example, the interval between major events can be appropriately shortened. In short, the author should follow his own ideas, keep up the good work

I've seen more than half of it. Should the protagonist join the school?

I have read dozens of chapters and it is really well written. I feel that the protagonist's character is the biggest treasure.

I've watched basically all the French fandoms that have over 2 million, and I've watched all of them that have over 1.9 Million. This is pretty good for you, it's pretty good so far.

This book can be said to be the original work of the full-time mage. It basically has no plot. I think it is very interesting. I can't stop it these days. It is very attractive. I give the author a thumbs up. I hope you don't become a eunuch.

In the latest chapter, does Ren Xiu want to purify the Red Devil Lu Kun? Is a mere puppet of the Evil Saint Throne so awesome? At that time, why did Mo Fan willingly let Lu Kun give up his position in Shuangshou Pavilion? It was indeed written in random words, and the logic did not make sense?

I just watched it and asked if it has a single heroine or multiple heroines.

I can only say that I accepted it, but I didn't accept it. O

The writing of full-time fanfics is also too slow. I only cheat after 130 chapters. It's hard to stand up, but it's smooth 😅

I have read a third of the novel. Overall, this book by the author is quite good compared to other all-French fics. However, there is one point that makes me a little uncomfortable. That is, the protagonist has not traveled through time. Why does he never know Ling Xi and Fang Shaoli? They even study violent potions together. I don't understand.