My Ghost Castle

Just tell me your opinion, this is my first time posting a book review 1. The plot was a little too exciting until I met the human beings, or the plot was not ups and downs enough. If I hadn't read the author's previous book (Spiritual Warrior Princess) and liked it very much, I wouldn't have been able to stick with it 2 , the rhythm of the writing is too fast in some places, such as the part where the female mage reports to the lady, most of it is passed in one stroke, and it doesn't get better until the two people interact later Third, the male protagonist is a ghost lord, at least he has to put on some airs, like triple gold for books is not enough If you don't want to add this to the list, it will be too easy for people to look at you. Although there is no shortage of male protagonists, you can't give them to others too easily. Also, it is still too low-profile to interact with Orion with a higher attitude of equality Fourth, the male protagonist loves the ghost too much, just like in the comment area As an old man said, a maid is too quirky and easily offends people, and does not fit her status. She can be loved, but if she doesn't listen or say nothing, she will become annoying and doting 5. The author is not very aware of lightning protection. Maybe it has something to do with his writing habits? (This is my personal love for reading, and the author can ignore it) Sixth, the male protagonist is not very active at the moment. It would be great if he could do something, or would it be good for the maid to do something extraordinary? Anyway, they are all my own (bad smile) Seven, although the shortcomings I mentioned above are all, the book is still very good to read, (otherwise why would I write such a long book review╮( •́ω•̀ )╭), brothers who read this review can read it with confidence. The plot is good, the writing is decent, and the various small daily interactions with the maid always make people smile. Overall, it is worth reading Staying up late reading, my mind is unclear, a virgin book review, don't criticize if you don't like it, point out any mistakes, welcome to give me advice, read the long review, thank you brother

The author's writing style is a bit leisurely and a little watery, so I suggest you reduce this description. For details, please see my review of Chapter 85. Most of these explanations are mentioned in one sentence. It is similar to the author's chatting with other gods about the creatures in the lower world. It lacks a sense of substitution, and the setting explanation is not clear. The advantage is that the setting will be very loose, and you can modify and add it at will, but it is still not recommended to use it too much.

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The writing is quite good, but to be honest, since you are a maid, you should act like a maid. If it is too weird, it will make you feel disgusted.

Such a big castle. No decoration. Tower of Elements. Turret. Bed crossbow. Okay, these estimates are too high, Be prepared to throw stones and fire oil. Let's build another urn city and build some turrets. Hmm. Uh-huh

This protagonist is a bit confusing. As a ghost, he has been hanging out with the human race. We will know whether he wants it or not until the final result of Oreo comes out. However, the protagonist is from the monster camp and is still an undead, so he is naturally rejected by the order camp. As mentioned before, before life is before life, after death is after death. The two are completely different. The impact can only be a little favorability. As for cultivating power, The greatest advantage of the human race is that it has a large base, but the protagonist is not a human being. I mentioned before that if a ghost wants to enter the human society, he must first find himself a master. Needless to say, what does this mean? If his identity is exposed, he can only run away. Well, let's upgrade the home module, then build a park cemetery, and randomly refresh a ghost every day. It feels like the protagonist has to run away at any time.

His parents named their child Xia Wushang, and the name was also very important. Change your position and taste it carefully.

Let's get an iron golem! Otherwise, I would be very worried about those 107 maids and ladies. It would be easy for them to become unsafe. Well, I feel that there are too few attack methods.

Good guys, apart from the posts of a few trolls and trolls, if it's just a post, it needs to be more precise.

It's well written, but some details are a bit far-fetched. It's not too much to make a Kaijia and put it on before leaving the cave I had a good impression of the beautiful ghost, and I didn't feel wary at all. I thought I hadn't seen enough, and the protagonist had mental problems Putting the storage in without absolute advantage or trust Showing ability to a noble, I can only say that based on the current background description, this is equivalent to telling all the nobles, it is impossible to hide it. In order to be able to take advantage of it, whether they are greedy or worried, they will definitely find at least one person to discuss and study (Although I think the protagonist has a blind trust in others like a fool at the beginning, I guess he doesn't care)

Don't give in to the female lord too much, otherwise it will be disgusting.

It's been a week since I stopped updating. Is this a eunuch?

Suddenly I remembered Zi Mama, let me put on some incense.

Oh, there are still people here. Let's salute a roasted pig.

The best way for maids to maximize their combat power is to control foreign objects, such as two maids and a tank, or a steam roller. Don't use humanoid gadgets. The price/performance ratio is too low.

Why not make iron golems? Iron golem, iron golem, we need iron golem! ! !

The writing is good, the castle, the lord, and the 107 maids are quite interesting. The emotions and details are also well described. The only thing that is a little vague is the setting of the protagonist. It may be because of the new book. I look forward to the follow-up. Good luck to the author.

Before I get into the trap, let me ask you, is this purple eunuch again?

No, why did Zi Ma, an old pigeon, buy another book?

Suddenly I remembered Zima's ship girl, come and burn some incense

Since the author hasn't updated it yet, let me make a complaint Is it really good for the protagonist's ability to compress items to be displayed in front of outsiders unscrupulously? If a noble or king with some brains knows about it, they will definitely covet it. After all, this ability is directly invincible in marching and fighting. At present, the protagonist cannot have the ability to deal with the army. If this conflict is not the main line set by the author or has not been considered at all, it will be a big disaster

If the protagonist accepts Aurelia, I will abandon the book immediately, and people will be very angry after reading it.

Shock! Zima has opened a new trap!

When I was writing music this morning, I suddenly discovered that the maid in this picture looks a bit like

There are a few lord stories you can read in Seedlings, very good. Come on, author

No one took pictures? I'll come first

I'd better keep it for now, this plot is too long.

If you save 100, let me give you a reward.

La la la la(◎｀ω´)(´ω｀*)

Don't stop updating, I can no longer stand the torture of the eunuchs (you know what I'm referring to). I am still a student, and I must hand in my mobile phone when school starts. But when I get the mobile phone, I will definitely come back and subscribe to Cut Leeks, so don't stop updating! ! ! Qiuli paste🥺🥺🥺