The General's Wife Is Pretending to Be Weak Again

The heroine is either being victimized or on the way to being victimized. She is always being victimized by others. If she didn't have the halo of being a heroine, she would have disappeared long ago.

It feels like there aren't many emotional lines. Looking at it now, I don't feel that there are any sweet details between her and the general.

There is a common problem in time-travel novels. Before death, he was as stupid as a pig, but after death, he was reborn and was possessed by Zhuge Liang, leaving him speechless!

Death from poison... Even if you are wearing a vest, you still have to think like a normal person, right? Maybe the author wants to reflect the contrast between the heroine's internal and external aspects and the contrast between white and black, but if the vest is too facial-painted, it will appear that the supporting characters are all stragglers, which is very brainless... The writing style is acceptable. I have also written novels and know that writing novels is not easy, so I also want to make some suggestions, but there is no need to turn people into The characters are too facially written. The only two normal people I have seen in this article so far are the queen and the third lady. I thought about the reason. It may be that the author added less settings and descriptions to them, so they are not so inconsistent. Others feel like soulless puppets. The more characters there are, the stronger this feeling will be. A truly normal novel should allow the plot to enrich the character of the protagonist, instead of repeatedly describing something that highlights it. For example, the heroine's external "white" waistcoat should be a little tough in the weakness to make it less suspicious, and the inner ruthlessness can also be tinged with kindness, making the heroine's character richer. It is recommended that the author add more psychological descriptions and let the protagonists have normal human emotions. For example, when the male and female protagonists meet for the first time, the author writes about the male protagonist's psychological description of love at first sight. It will not be so inconsistent. Moreover, Leng Ao and social fear are not completely silent. If they are completely silent, that is neurotic. Illness, Leng Ao can be expressed in many ways. Few words, and different treatment of relatives and friends are just very basic techniques. The real Leng Ao comes from the heart. You can write that the male protagonist has many acquaintances, but he is lonely inside, and there are only a few people who can enter his heart and be favored by him. This can also make the male protagonist more humane. And being as mute as the male protagonist... Makes people feel too arrogant... The villain and the old lady are also too brainless... Their way of handling things makes me, a normal person, ashamed... And the biggest poisonous point of this book is actually the female protagonist. The female protagonist seems to know it every time and is prepared, but the author What kind of preparation did you make to write it? Otherwise, it will feel like the heroine knows it but is still waiting to die... Let's talk about the advantages of this book. The writing is smooth. The heroine's IQ has improved before and after the time travel, but it is not like the most brainless kind of novel. The main line is relatively clear. In short, I hope this book will get better and better.

The male protagonist is so busy. He is either a hero saving a beauty or a hero saving a beauty.

I only read the front part, and before the main part of the limited exemption text arrived, I felt a little nauseous and unhappy. The author's writing style is so good that if the heroine's family is set to a lower level, many plots can be explained. The dignified Duke's Mansion. Inside, the outer chamber can do whatever they want, and the nephew of the outer chamber can already make the old lady who comes to the palace at any time to beg the county master for the orphan girl so angry that she goes to heaven and attacks the heroine. Outside of the house, a scoundrel concubine from an in-law family can blatantly act against the headmistress who is the legitimate daughter of a dignified prince and is engaged to a favored prince. If it weren't for the halo of the heroine, it would probably have been spun off n times. In fact, if the heroine comes from an ordinary family with a little wealth, then the house only has three or two rooms in a small courtyard, and it is very possible for the outside room to break into the house, and the nephew of the outside room to catch the legitimate daughter and seduce her. In this way, a second-rate son of the Zhang family who has an old lady who is the princess can do such a thing without knowing it at home. How did the heroine get hooked up by a man with no sex in the grand palace and deep courtyard of the house, and they started to interact with each other? Don't say it was just a maid, the outer room was not in charge yet. As for the Zhang family, they knew that the bastard was misbehaving and did whatever he wanted. It is hard to imagine that they were just a bastard, and they were not extinct in the family, nor could they bring greater benefits than offending the Duke's palace and offending the royal family. What kind of ambition did the leopard dare to let the bastard in the family do this again and again, stepping on the royal family and boxing the Duke?

The introduction says that the concubine became a virtuous princess? Is it possible to have a hierarchical ancient world?

I'm just curious about how the general fell in love with her? ? ? ? ? ? Just because she's pretty and weak (on the surface)?

I feel that the author went too far in embodying the heroine's strategy of pretending to be weak. The key is to use softness to overcome toughness depending on the person. To deal with princesses and princes, you need to use softness to overcome toughness. Why do you do this to country neighbors who can't be beaten with eight poles? ? The ancient feudal society was very hierarchical. How could any neighbor or relative from the countryside be so awesome and dare to show off to the general's wife, the princess of the country, in person? Moreover, the one who lives there will not leave, and the heroine even agreed. If this logic is followed, then wouldn't every household in the capital have to raise a bunch of neighbors from the countryside? And they are neighbors in the countryside, not even relatives.

A mistress of a general's palace doesn't just have to pretend to be weak. She has to be well-rounded and benevolent and powerful at the same time. Only in this way can she be in charge of the central government. She can't be bullied by any random person, even if it's superficial bullying.

The ability of this reborn heroine is too weak. Apart from being hurt, there is no aura of rebirth. It's a bit confusing to not hire a girl who knows kung fu for herself.

Does this general's wife still need to pretend to be weak? Nothing works, I have to rely on help from others! Bai is reborn! So infuriating.

This heroine is too weak, she feels useless even after being reborn, she is a bit naive.

I really can't stand this writing style.

I feel that the writing is not very reasonable, it is straightforward and bad, and the bad guys are careless. Even though you are a queen, you can feel proud when others say a few nice words. I don't know why the general fell in love with the heroine. I don't know why Mr. Xu is so devoted to the woman. Alas, I can't figure it out anyway.

Super rubbish writing!

The writing is good. I would like to support the author. Come on💪

The ending was so sloppy, my God, it was a completely inexplicable move, my God, it was amazing.

It's wonderful, the plot constructed by the author is very rich, and it reads very smoothly. The description of the characters is just right, and the transition between the copy tasks of the article and the main tasks is natural. Book shortage, do you have any good book recommendations? In addition to this book, I am also following "The Monk Family" and read more than a thousand chapters in one go!

I feel like I'm running out of books. I clicked on a book but quit after a while. It's so boring. Is there anyone who is willing to help and recommend books? Thank you🙏🏻