Bandit Emperor of Red Mansion

I don't know how long the author has been conceiving the outline and how deeply he has read the original works. However, after briefly reading a few chapters, I found that the author is relatively weak in writing style and expression. He can try to reach the first level of writing, which means that he can avoid making sick words and use the basic methods of sick sentences. Style to express what you want to express. Another point is that after watching the plot, it is a very cliche, a process in which a beautiful woman inexplicably develops her own power. The writing style is not high in the description of the characters, mainly focusing on various stages of continuous improvement. The events in the plot give the viewer expectations. It is a very, very, very, very basic template for a cool article. This is basically the whole plot routine. It can be seen that the plot develops very quickly. It should be the author's writing practice. There are some illogical elements in it. There are really many problems, including unclear expressions and inconsistent responses. There are also many detailed issues and plot holes. To sum up, all that is left is to work hard. In this situation, we can accumulate experience where we made mistakes, expand more writing methods, and then write the next book.

If you want to see Jia's mother taken in, it's best to take in Grandma Liu at the same time, tow fly😍🙏

I found that all book friends comment in the middle of the night. I advise you not to stay up late. I am a living example. Now, although cholecystitis, polyps + stomach pain are not serious diseases, they are incurable and cannot be cured. Stay healthy and pay attention to your body. Ah By the way, you're welcome to scold me. I can accept a little more. If you're really embarrassed, you can praise me first and then scold me severely😆Won't this offset it? It makes you feel better and I got two book reviews🥰

I'm asking on behalf of my friend, do you want to accept Jia Mu and Grandma Liu?

The male protagonist snatched away the most beautiful Qin Keqing in the Red Mansion at the beginning. Will Lin Daiyu be unlucky enough to run into the male protagonist later when she returns to Yangzhou for a funeral? !

After entering this door, you will no longer be a worker, and you can no longer have any love in the factory floor! What do you want to say? Me: Once... Bah! Please tell me how many sheep can I feed myself in a year now? I'm serious😣

There are too many people with the same name as official historical figures. Two or three are enough. If you look at too many, it will be a bit dramatic.

Did the author realize that the way a group of rebel bandits used Red Mansion in the bandit den was weird?

The new operating officer's nickname is Zhou Mo, and his nickname is Sunday 😂 The number of codes from now on will all depend on him

Disadvantages: poor writing style and childish style. Sentences don't work. Advantages: Novel angle, good story, and good creativity. Taken together, I can get a passing score. This is probably the author's first time writing. The writing and paragraphs are dazzling, and many places are messed up. But the writing is very spiritual.

Thank you for your support, I will continue coding! Today I will give you a total of 20,000 words. If you have any like-minded readers, please spread the word about this book. I will never stop it from being finished! I won't be depressed or addicted. Life is dry and I just want to read and write about it happily!

Your writing is too rough, the sentences are not fluent, and the punctuation is not rigorous. In your book, wild boars eat fine bran, and even Qin Keqing ate it in his mouth. Do you want us book friends to eat coarse bran?

Try to remove the spoken language as much as possible. I have trouble reading. I hope it can be improved. I sincerely remind you.

I think you have the appearance of a great god. If you don't, then I'm wrong 😁

This is not the Red Mansion. This is the grand alliance of ancient and modern rebels.

Too little. I haven't tried it yet.

It's so good. Come on, the author, I hope to get another Wang Xifeng.

The writing is quite good. In fact, it is just a story about bandits fighting for supremacy in a red building shell. However, the writing of this shell is okay so far, and the story background is also very substantial. Don't write about the actual plot of the red building. Just write about people, not things. Anyway, that's what the cool story is about. It covers everything. You can't have too many young women and widows.

The author has been discontinued, and is probably gone.

The names of historical figures are pretty generic. Did the author not know how to name them or something? I also like the plot of Water Margin, and I really got into it. I came to watch the Red Mansion fandom, not to watch Ximen Qing tease Pan Jinlian or Li Kui fight Wu Song.

After all, he becomes a eunuch, an ending that a new author cannot avoid.

The latest chapter, updated to the free chapter in the first volume, I posted the wrong chapter yesterday＿|￣|○

There is a serious lack of punctuation, which makes it uncomfortable to look at. In this day and age, you have to segment your own sentences.

Oh my god, what did you write? (Qiao Yingzi's face collapsed)

Come on, learn slowly, I'm not in a hurry, just write a few million words, otherwise it will feel incomplete and not satisfying, it will be all right, come on!

What about the author? ? ? 😭😭😭😭

Father-in-law, haven't you been healed yet?

Wow! I'm an idiot. I looked at it myself and realized I posted the wrong one. No one reminded me. Now I can't delete it. What should I do?_|￣|○

A woman like Qin Keqing who doesn't even mind her father-in-law, isn't the protagonist afraid of green?