Douluo: Immortal, I Am Invincible

How should I put it? After the second awakening, Wuhun Palace cannot let go. If there are still plug-ins you can get, just get them. If you can't, it's just killing the rabbit and it's nothing.

The author has to make the first post, which is so embarrassing.

The writing is okay, but you write about a native and then give it to Douluo Dalu. I can't understand it. If it's just for novelty, it's not novel at all. Moreover, you have to create a system, martial arts have evolved, and you have twins. To be honest, it's better to just travel through time and go to the invincible flow. If you still write this book, you have to think about it carefully. There are several paths for the subsequent plot. Join the Tiandou Royal Academy, add the Seven Treasures Glazed Sect, and the Wuhun Palace to build your own power. However, it is not recommended to build your own power. It is easy to write about the big forces around the main line. If you create your own power, it is difficult to write and it will collapse easily. But going to the Tiandou Royal Academy is not a noble. With Zhu Zhuqing's nobility It is absolutely impossible to have a clan identity. After all, Zhu Zhuqing belongs to Xingluo. He can only rely on his talent to go to Heaven Dou. It is much easier to get into Wuhun Palace. As for Qibao Glazed Sect, it is unrealistic to not be able to match Ning Rongrong. After all, the original Bone Douluo wanted to get Tang San because of Tang San's talent. I hope these can give you some guidance and seek new ideas. If it's strange, don't be too limited. The pattern is open. Join Star Luo, or even undercover Star Luo. You can try out any force in the original book in the early stage, such as the four elemental schools and the four single-attribute sects. As long as you handle it properly and your writing is extremely good, you can go directly to Poseidon Island now. Remember, the pattern is open.