My Wife Is a Top Diva

After reading about a hundred chapters, let's talk about some of my shortcomings. Why do all entertainment nowadays like to create some kind of vest? Even if it's a vest, the protagonist is good at everything. Does it have to be an all-rounder? Singer, songwriter, novelist, poet, entrepreneur, calligrapher, cartoonist, all kinds of messy things have to be done, right? Isn't it really embarrassing that you can't focus on writing one or two items? Singer and songwriter, director and screenwriter or actor, you are a person in the entertainment industry and you want to be a calligrapher or painter. The most unbearable thing about this book is that this is modern society (although the author may be writing about a modern fictional world), but you copy ancient poems and use them in a modern society that is almost equally civilized. I have also read a lot of entertainment novels. I would like to recommend some good ones. "This Star Comes from the Earth" by Guan Wuwu and "The King of the Future" by Ci Miao are the two best entertainment novels in my opinion. The one by Guan Wu Crow is also entertainment with some love elements. I think it is a god. It beats other messy novice entertainment novels. Needless to say, Ci Miao? All of them are considered high-quality. There are also a few acceptable ones such as "My Wife is a Big Star" with undercooked corn.

I can't stand it anymore, there are too many poisonous points, and the plot is also very awkward. A good entertainment article must be full of ancient poems. You can forget it and still don't understand it. If you don't understand it, you still have to teach public classes to college students. Don't you think it's very embarrassing? There is also an idiom that can shock this boss and that boss with just one word. I don't understand what kind of society this is, so I have to give it to you! If you weren't shocked, you wouldn't be able to write it. Also, when writing songs, at least you shouldn't sing the kind of songs a man sings to a woman. At least the artistic conception should be there, messy and confusing!

Just a brief comment, I have seen 245 chapters so far. Let's talk about the advantages first: the advantages are not obvious for the time being. Then there are the shortcomings. 1: There are many poisonous points. First of all, when I read entertainment articles, I first have to resonate with the copied works. The author paid no attention to these when copying the lyrics, and there was no way to listen to the song and read the book at the same time. The same is true for copied books. The original text is not copied at all, and it is all up to the readers' own imagination. As an entertainment piece, this fails. 2: The second poisonous point is the illogical logic. Originally, when I read entertainment articles, I had already relaxed the logic requirements, but there was no way, and it completely poisoned me. Take the contract signed by Zhang Xiaoxiao in Chapter 245 as an example. A has-been singer, who is powerful but not popular, signed a contract with high profit sharing and low binding force. I mean, at the very least, as a shareholder of a company, you can't engage in charity like this. Wouldn't the company make money if you give high dividends? Since the binding force is low, are you afraid that people will run away if they become popular? No artist contract is less binding. 3: I have read Chapter 245 so far, and I haven't read the rest of it yet, but judging from the previous content, this is a love story disguised as entertainment. The protagonist only knows one name of the book he copied, and the content is completely unclear. The song he copied only has a few lyrics, and there are various external factors interspersed in it, without any resonance. The summary is: it is a pity to throw away food if it is tasteless. Read it as a love story, Yan Tian Now that I have read Chapter 340, I jumped to read it. I won't say how good other entertainment books are, but at least I can read them. But I found that I couldn't stand this one because it was too ink-filled. As I looked at it, I realized that I had seen this paragraph before, so I turned back to the previous page, and I had indeed read it. I wrote the same meaning twice. There was a flaw in the writing. I wanted to persevere, but I really couldn't. It was too ink-stained, too many nonsense, and the writing was too messy. The biggest advantage of this book is the setting of the protagonist. The male protagonist writes and the female protagonist sings. It's a pity for the author's ability. If I were to write this setting, it would probably be another masterpiece.

What can I say? The plot of this novel is like "My Wife is a Legendary Queen". I hope the author can write it with a different feeling.

1 Point There is absolutely no such thing as time. The Chinese New Year has not yet passed by Chapter 1080. The plot is looping. The plot is very poisonous. There are too many bad things. I say I won't write to others again, and then repeat it to others after a few chapters. Then the supporting characters are still boasting without any sense. There is no opponent in the plot. The protagonist is always invincible, licks everyone, and it is a cycle of pretentiousness.

The plot is boring. Even the mentally retarded like Poisonous Weed. What's the plot behind it?

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The ex-girlfriend's dream is to become a star. The male protagonist obviously has the ability but doesn't show it. The childhood sweetheart of more than ten years has the ability to become famous but looks on coldly and waits to break up. There should be friendship even if there is no love, but there is no such thing. The situation after the previous girlfriend left makes the hero noble.

Everything else is fine. One person writes books, another writes songs, another acts as a netizen, and one writes poems under his real name. It makes my head hurt! ! Isn't it good to be honest? Do you have to forcefully show off in the end?

Why do you think that martial arts novels will become popular in the Internet era? Especially Xiao Li's flying knife? I need to admit that Xiao Li Feidao wrote very well, but I didn't read it.

I just read the first 3 chapters and couldn't stand it anymore. You are a well-known writer and hold many well-known IPs, but you hide it from your girlfriend. She has to break up for the sake of her future. Which one of you two has the other in your heart?

The characteristic of this type of book is that labor and management are waiting to break up anyway. Your life and death have nothing to do with labor and management, but labor and management love you. If you want to break up, it will be a huge sin. After the breakup, labor and management will immediately stop pretending and have a showdown.

It's good to copy songs and books, but it's not like copying poems in ancient times to show off and look awkward.

The plot is very well written, but some of the details are really embarrassing. The protagonist is a copywriter, and can he just post the title of his new book "The Legend of Chu Liuxiang" and get it into the top three searches? Don't you have any brains at all? It's not that exaggerated for Gu Long and Jin Yong to release a new book together, not to mention that the protagonist is just an occasional copycat and is not a big shot.

Hey, I almost thought it was a tomato. . . . The quality of this book is only about 8 points on Tomato. Let's put it as a starting point, below 6 points. It needs logic but not logic, it needs IQ but not IQ, it's fun but also very uninteresting

It is highly toxic, not recommended to watch, the male protagonist has extremely low IQ and EQ. If the male protagonist wants to live a normal life, he should not find this kind of girlfriend. As long as we know that she is such a person, it is not suitable to break up with her. How about showing off her talent and letting the heroine stop being an idol and follow the path of a pure singer. Instead of acting like a fool, doing things that touch you and hoping that "she will give up chasing her dreams for me." Then I got dumped, got drunk and acted like a fool on the roadside, this kind of brainless routine, it was clearly my own problem but I wrote it as if it was someone else's fault.

No, the latest chapter... Feels toxic. Then why did Li Xue X act like that and actually forgive him with a smile? ! Imagine in reality, A grabs B's partner, and A and B just laugh and pretend it's nothing? Let go of grudges with a smile? So generous? Oh my god... Although the men are very happy, the women... Ugh

I really like it. If you have a single heroine, don't write about other women. If you have multiple heroines, just let it go. Don't end up with a story where you don't know what to do.

My wife is going bald. Is there any hope...

I didn't understand the beginning. First of all, a ten-year netizen? Does that prove that you have traveled through time for at least ten years? Brother, what have you been doing since you traveled through ten years? So miserable? It's been ten years since I traveled back in time. How much of my past life memory can I still remember? Also, even if you have just traveled back ten years and you were twenty-five years old in your previous life, you have lived for at least thirty-five years. You obviously feel that a woman wants fame and wealth but not you, so you still run to her like a dog? I was still sad and drank too much... The mentality of writing time travel and rebirth articles is very important. People who have experienced the beatings of life and the mentality of time traveling in the past are very important. What you write must be in line with the public mentality. If a normal person travels through time and discovers that he has a lot of resources that others do not have, will he either drift away or be underdeveloped? How can he live an honest life for more than ten years? How much memory of the past life will be left after more than ten years...

Cheap pretense and slaps in the face, all kinds of vests and all kinds of poems copied. I still don't understand the key point

After reading your book, what impressed me most was the fandom culture, the most extreme fandom culture

He's hiding his identity again, he's more or less seriously ill.

My girlfriend debuted, fell out of love, and then there was a female netizen of ten years waiting for her... Mental cheating? ?

Wearing a vest, suppressing the plot, pretending to be a slap in the face, How many years ago was this plot? The author is still using it now? After reading about ten chapters, I gave up. It may be tiring to follow this book in the future.

The writing is actually quite good. I wanted to give up on the clichés of wearing a waistcoat and being low-key, but I didn't expect to finish reading it. There is a question. The author was so excited about the writing that even the characters spoke in an ancient style. The most impressive sentence, "Hurry up and respond on Weibo" almost sent me away. ... After watching it again, I found that there were many problems with the plot and the writing was also very immature. But you can still watch it if you want.

It's a bit awkward at the beginning. What were you doing while Qingmei was working hard? You obviously have other memories, but you don't know how to make a fortune? Do you have to wait until you are broken up to have a big outburst?

I really can't stand it when I see 132 . There are too many poisonous points. I suggest the author learn more about it and discard it in a mess.

The latter part is too embarrassing. I won't tell you whether the ancient prose you copied is suitable or not. But you took it to a university to give lectures and talked about great principles with university teachers and students. I was speechless. If the principles you teach are insightful and in-depth, then it's okay. You take the principles that a junior high school student can talk about and lecture them in a university, and everyone should be enlightened and swayed with admiration! It's almost embarrassing at my grandma's house. I don't have deep thoughts and write a short book to make some money. It's nice for readers to read the story and enjoy it. But I want to make sense and write it in a long way. Are you afraid that readers won't know that it's superficial?

The first eight chapters perfectly hit every point of the entertainment heroine and character creation. I don't think this book can be written by ordinary people.