Taoist Liyue of the Original God

There is something wrong with the timeline of this book. The original author mistakenly entered the book and I withdrew it.

Reading this novel made me truly feel the evil nature of class society. The protagonist is a good person, and only a good person. He cannot betray his own class, and he has never thought about betrayal. He is indeed a capital. He is like Batman, who is the most ideal capitalist in the West. They work hard to make money and donate money, but Gotham City becomes more and more sinful and a backwater. Because in the process of making money and donating money, his strength is actually growing, which causes other people's capital to be constantly plundered by him. Although the protagonist dreams of making a big cake, he has political power above capital, which results in inevitable accumulation of capital. Whether explicit or implicit. As a Tianshu star, the protagonist does not distinguish between public and private affairs. He binds the Gui family to Liyue's education industry and draws the immortal into the same class as him. This is using his own power to slowly erode the power of Qixing. In the same way, this is how the current shell of the Amarica government came to be. At the very least, in the original Teyvat, Qixing made a clear distinction between public and private affairs, and had no delusions about using power to accumulate more capital for its own family. Even Ningguang doesn't have a family. The Feiyun Chamber of Commerce, the largest chamber of commerce in Liyue, has nothing to do with Qixing. Keqing just happens to be born as a eldest lady, and her seven stars are not hereditary, but are real abilities. In short, this book's description of the capitalist class is very uncomfortable, and I can't stand it anymore.

The author is thinking about character cards, meow. I have a picture of the heroine Zhang Shenhe. The author must not be ignorant, meow

I haven't finished reading it, but there are a few minor points. 1. As for the settings of Teyvat High Dimension, the world of trees and seas is just a transmission. This can already be said to be a game setting, but you just made a second creation. After all, that part is really outrageous, and his power setting is really exaggerated. Second, the setting of Liyue is also very mysterious. The staff can't do anything, and Xuanmen is hopeless. The protagonist seems to have done a lot of things after becoming the Seven Stars, but almost nothing is reflected. The biggest impression is that he has a bad temper. Without the Linzi Jue, which is the Qingxin Curse, he can't control his temper. Who can be stupid enough to scold his own gua, and a gua with no intelligence offends you? Did it allow you to travel through time? There is no intuitive manifestation of the reform of the military, and there is no intuitive manifestation of the establishment of schools. It is like Schrödinger's cat. You create it but not create it. Education, a century-old plan, should be slower, but not at a crawl. Third, character setting. As we all know, MiHoYo is all about character setting in addition to the plot. Ningguang's bottom line is also very strange. A person who can smash the Qunyu Pavilion twice is cold-blooded. He regards the lives of good people as expendable interests. Are you sure you want to write a supreme leader who symbolizes ZG like this? MiHoYo has gone to strengthen Zhongli! Fourth, the emotional line, not many authors can write it in a year anyway, so I'm used to it.

It's boring. There's something really wrong with Chapter 51. Where did the protagonist's brain go? Even if you are seeking revenge, you can't just come and knock him down physically. How serious a diplomatic incident is this? In Liyue City, a bank was robbed out of personal vendetta. Liyue has laws. To rob a foreign bank, it would not be too much to arrest and behead the protagonist. I have never seen such mindless operation! The protagonist is not from Liyue who traveled through time. At least he has some brains, so he wouldn't be like this because of some inheritance. It's boring. It looked good at first, but it turns out that the author still likes to follow the old routine of rushing forward without thinking, so I can only run away. Since you, the author, have decided not to read the comments and follow your heart, just write it yourself for fun. I'll run away.

Wife

From what I saw here, it is actually very good, the plot is very reasonable, and the characters are all standing up. But one thing I don't understand is why Xue Lian said the words of sacrificing her children so easily. How could a Liyue mother (set in China) say such words of sacrificing her own children in just half a year? In such a long history, I have seen sacrifices for interests, sacrifices for living lovers, and never seen sacrifices for dead lovers. Obviously, in the previous article, the image of a mother who loves her son was created, but in the end, there was a line about sacrificing the child. It is not incomprehensible to join the fools, but I really can't understand the change in this aspect. What I wrote before was very good, but now I really can't accept it. Express your feelings and regrets. After all, it's not easy to have fan fiction that you can read these days. Cherish it.

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Nothing is gone, Shenzi Zhuanwu is crooked, the character has a guaranteed minimum draw of more than 80, do you know how I got here

What is the plot around Chapter 50? The style is just like jumping from National Geographic to Qiong Yao drama. I am speechless.

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Thank you all for taking the time to read this book. When I got home today, I looked through the data and roughly compared it with other similar works. I found that I should just write the book with peace of mind. I have seen everyone's comments. I originally wanted to post a single chapter, but I was afraid of affecting everyone's reading experience, so I posted it here. I beg you readers not to praise me like that. Although I do write very carefully, I feel my own shortcomings. Your praise makes me a little inflated, which is not good. I am also flattered that a big boss will reward me, thank you! But please act within your ability. Thanks again! Finally, I would like to ask those who keep books to help me increase my follow-up reading. The new book period is the most important. Thank you again for your support, I am working hard to write a book. I wish you all to get stronger and stronger! Full of European spirit!

The first 100 chapters are perfect, both the plot arrangement and the characters are all solid. Except for the last big scene, which was not written well and the emotions were not uplifted, it is really great. The latter part is so annoying... It feels like the author has carefully written the outline of the first volume -.

The more I read, the more rubbish it becomes. After 100 chapters, it's just self-pleasure and boring.

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The pace is too slow. Whether it's Taoist pretentiousness or politics, the author seems to have picked two points that he is not good at and written them together.

The original god should pay attention to the problem of the power system. All the power now is given by the seven rulers (or heavenly principles) in the world. It can be said that it is power given in vain. They do not know the principle of power and do not have the spirit of studying things to know. Kanria's alchemy technology, as well as Shar Fendenir, who was destroyed by the Nail of Cold Sky, everyone's spirit of victory over the sky was destroyed. So when writing the power system, these things must be taken into consideration. However, the current worldview of Genshin Impact is really frustrating. Everyone is like a beast being kept in captivity by the laws of nature. The foreshadowing is there, we just have to see how it comes to fruition, why Tianli doesn't take action to annihilate the Abyss Cult, and why he just sits back and watches the Ice God gather his strength. I think it would be better to write more about daily life without rushing into the plot, just like hoeing the earth during the growing season. You can even make a cameo with the ability to travel to other planes. Anyway, Brother Cheng will always be a god.

The protagonist has repaid his debt to your family. There is no need to run around as a dog for your family now. That little brat has also arranged a path for him. Really, don't be so tired.

I calmed down and continued watching, but when I saw that the protagonist robbed the bank and the main character was not caught, he also took revenge and made Liyue angry. Zhidong also took the opportunity to strengthen his penetration into Liyue, and my blood pressure went up again... This wave is a win-win. Zhidong won twice, which is a huge win! If Liyue hadn't also found Yu Renzhong's factory and had a handle on the opposite side, Liyue would have been forced to cede territory and pay compensation this time. There is another question. Based on the intelligence network of the fools, is it really impossible to find out that the protagonist is the person who robbed the bank? Even with the protection of Seven Stars, can the weak noble family really be able to withstand the oppression of the fools if the Liyue official or the old man does not personally take action? If the official or the old man protects him, how can the protagonist repay the favor he owes? Harm, the bank case is really a big poisonous point in logic, and it is not easy to get around it.

This book reminds me of the hard-working middle-aged man The biggest factor that restrains people is not the outside world, but the human heart, so through this mentality, everyone understands This book is a good book, I felt tired and panicked while reading it

Since Gan Yu trusts the emperor more and denies the protagonist's reform, then just let her leave. She is also a half-immortal anyway, so it doesn't matter if she hides from the world from now on. Don't write anything. The protagonist gave a reason to let Gan Yu stay. The protagonist is a demon, so show some face.

Since it is used to practice writing, there is not much to say. The author is not suitable for writing fan fiction. Abandoned.

Metal, wood, water, fire, earth, ice, wind and thunder, time and space These are the attributes of the world in most novels. In fact, this theory is also used in Genshin Impact. Rock, grass, water and fire, ice, wind and thunder, imaginary numbers, ether Is this rock the fusion attribute of metal and earth? Because it is a fused attribute, it becomes an orphan attribute and cannot resonate with other attributes? This also explains why the Rock King Emperor is so strong. It is naturally twice as powerful as other people. Maybe there is some secret to this rock attribute, right?

The wind god Barbatos was originally a wind elf, and the rock god Morax was a dragon. So what is the original person of the thunder god Balzebul? There is also a grass god. Solve

It was a super bad ending. The more I wrote, the more I became obsessed with it. From the moment the protagonist was carried to Qixing and Liyue and tied to death, the book became hopeless.

Aren't you going to give me some sperm?

The author should update soon, otherwise it will be the author's fault<(｀^´)>

I booked it all in two days and one night!

What I want to know is, is the protagonist strong? If you don't have relatively strong strength, how can you develop a huge force in such a world? (Purely personal doubts)

I personally feel that Liyue is a feudal society but it contains the sprouts of capitalism, and it is also a theocratic society. What the protagonist does is to promote the sprouts of capitalism into a zbzy society. During this period, there will be some adhesion and contradictions between the two in the transition. I feel that the author described some places well, but some are skipped, and some are too subtle. As the protagonist and a representative of progressive ideas, the protagonist has no ambitions, but his inner sense of responsibility drives him to spread advanced ideas. The author may have thought so too, but I don't think it was handled well. You should first form a small team of your own, and then carry out gradual or radical reforms, but after more than 500 chapters, I still haven't seen the author name out the capable team members. It is more about the protagonist using force and financial resources to force the old forces to reform and reform. Some people are beginning to notice it, but they are still subconsciously obstructing the protagonist's behavior. It seems that the protagonist has always been alone in the political path, without much support. Another reason for this feeling is that there are more original characters in the protagonist camp and fewer original characters in Genshin Impact, resulting in a strange sense of fragmentation. And hurry up and marry Shen He's wife back home. If it's a big deal, don't stick to trivial matters. If marriage doesn't work, get engaged first. Can't you formally get married after Chuan Yu gets married? 😡