Daily Life That Started with Joy as a Child

It's well written. I personally think it's a pity that wives are confiscated. After all, Cao is a thief 😁

The writing is too dry. Every chapter is about the heroine. I feel like you, the author, are going to be eunuchs. Can you write about the career, company, etc. Of the protagonist? It would be too incompetent for such a big boss to film. The skill card of the protagonist is completely useless. A high school protagonist and the heroine have been messed up for so many chapters.

Write more about business, entertainment, animation, etc. Otherwise, it's easy to feel bored while watching it. Don't write so much about the heroine. It's easy to stop reading after watching it.

I really like this book. I hope the author can write more about the career and hobbies of the protagonist and less about the heroine.

Write more about the fusion of film and television urban dramas

Chen Jiajia

The golden finger is so wide open. If you don't learn how to darken the variety movies, you will be sorry for the golden finger.

Is this Lin Lei'er the moderator's version?😏😏😏😏😏

After looking at the character list, the author is not bold enough. Song Qian and Tong Wenjie are not included. The neighbors have already gone crazy.

Isn't Zhao Jinmai delicious?😏

I was just looking around, but I didn't expect to find a treasure. Book friends who are still reading "Blackened", hurry up and gather here! ! !

Qiao Yingzi

Qiao Jingjing

Without Tong Wenjie and Song Qian, bad review! 😒

Occasionally read daily articles, it has a different feeling o(＊＾▽＾＊)o♪

Wang Yidi is actually the female supporting role. In fact, among the girls Qiao Yingzi, Huang Zhitao, Wang Yidi is the most beautiful

It would be perfect if we can travel through each love step by step. It's all piled up together. It's too dramatic. Men look embarrassed and women scold...

A gathering place for complaints Writing a book is not easy, especially a first novel, so please be merciful. Please post all kinds of complaints and negative comments below this post, and try to ensure a peaceful atmosphere in the comment area.

Han Fei

There are too many missing girls, we agreed to take them all...

It's actually a bit disgusting. A greasy man of several decades traveled through time and space into a teenage boy, calling himself Lei'er. Oh my god, can you imagine a greasy uncle pretending to introduce himself as Lei'er? ? ?

"The Ideal Life of Love" Wen Xiaoyang (Zhao Jinmai), Qi Yue's soul mate, love without a man is king.

Too prison?

The author's taste is so strong that star fruit can be used as his mother.

I read a few of them and gave them up. It's not that the writing is not good, I don't like the feeling of being under someone else's roof.

It's already the finale, and you still faked the corpse. You see, the fake corpse is over. But it's okay, I'll give you a finale.

It's not easy to write more than one million words in this crappy book.

I've read Chapter 13 so far, and it's quite interesting, although usually people of this type just want to read it.

Comprehensive film and television? I thought they were worn one by one. So how do you deal with so many female protagonists? Scumbag?

It's very uncomfortable to travel through time and become Lin Lei'er. Isn't it better if you just create a character at random? It has to be like this.