Start from the Fishing World

It's really funny. With such a strong charade, you still care about the dark turmoil and a group of crippled supreme beings. If Ye Fan had the charade of the protagonist, he would be the first to achieve enlightenment in a different way. The supreme being in the restricted area would slap each one. Ye Fan, who has only achieved Holy Body Dharma and has not yet become enlightened in an alternative way, can compete with the supreme being in the restricted area. You It's ridiculous for a protagonist who integrates so many legal principles of the world to fight a crippled Supreme in a turn-based manner Look at "Lin Yang" and "Meng Chuan" next door, there is no harm without comparison Fighting in the sky and on the ground at every turn, wearing a blanket to cover the sky and do as the locals do? The most fundamental reason for covering the sky is lack of resources and the future is cut off. If you have resources and a future, you still fight with others. Isn't this the second generation of rich people who are free to fight for their jobs with beggars? If you have this time to fight, why not improve your cultivation level as soon as possible? Do you have to fight to the death with fellow monks of the same generation and in the same realm?

Can you please stop writing the protagonist in such a vulgar way that he can't walk when he sees a woman? I'm speechless. All Zhetian fan fiction. The protagonist must be a stallion. An Miaoyi, the saint of Yaochi. Qin Yao. Yan Ruyu... Must be accepted. Can you please stop being so low? Let's write something different. Originally this book was very innovative. It is a novel about emperors and children. The status of the emperor's son is noble. In this book, he becomes a pervert who sees a woman unable to move her legs. The pattern immediately dropped by three levels. Either have a single female protagonist or choose some strong female protagonists. None of the heroines chosen by the author broke through to the quasi-emperor level in the end. Such strength must always rely on the help of the protagonist. What's the point? There is no equal match, and there is no potential talent. Take a look at that book "Enlightenment Begins from Covering the Sky". The protagonist is devoted to practice, and the practice in it makes people excited. Your hang-ups are so big that you don't have much in the way of the most critical practice. It's all due to chance or female lust. Please change the routine and write more about hard work and practice. There are so many inner dramas for an emperor's son, and he becomes lustful when he sees a beautiful woman. Not decent at all

The character of this protagonist is just like a child. He has lived in vain for five thousand years. He is still a super emperor. He is funny, not very strong, but he also likes to be promiscuous, and likes to seek death. If he starts like Liu Yunzhi, can he just kill him? Is it necessary to let him dance in front of you? Don't tell me why you are afraid of changing the plot. Liu Yunzhi is not an important figure. His death will be in vain. Ye Fan, who covers the sky, is the big trend. Don't try to kill Ye Fan. The others are just minor trends. You can change it however you want. Anyway, no matter how you change it, Ye Fan will eventually reach the point of cultivating sacrifices.

I've been really procrastinating lately. If I keep going like this, no matter how good my book is, it's going to get boring.

When will the dream end? I'm just waiting for you to slap me in the face with the Void Mirror to show off. Who knew I'd been dreaming for so many days?

You are a mature author, you should learn to update yourself! Come on, come on, send me a hundred thousand words first and let me taste it.

Comparison of combat power between Zhetian and the Supreme Being: Quasi-Emperor=Human Immortal, Great Emperor=Earth Immortal, True Immortal=Heavenly Immortal, Immortal King=Legend, Quasi-Immortal Emperor=Creation, Immortal Emperor=The Other Side, It's just equality in combat power, But the Other Side has a permanent certificate, a permanent gain, and the ability to control time and space, which has the characteristics of Da Luo... The Immortal Emperor is too weak to fight, it's not the same level.

Ji Ziyue is the heroine. Isn't she really afraid of Ye Fan who will be on the altar in the future and fight for his life across time and space? The hatred of seizing his wife is not the hatred of milk cans, just give him a beating!

How come so many people have been looking for so many high-sounding reasons for accepting Ji Ziyue? There is a precedent for intermarriage between close relatives, and it doesn't matter much after so many generations of blood dilution. Please, is this why most people are so opposed to Ji Ziyue being the heroine? But in this world, there are so many outstanding women, and Ji Ziyue is not the only one left, okay? How hungry and unscrupulous would it be to attack a junior? Moreover, Ji Ziyue is still Ye Fan's official wife, should I accept it? There are countless people who are more talented than Ji Ziyue, and there are tens of thousands of people who are better than Ji Ziyue in appearance. The protagonist is not in love with Ji Ziyue desperately, and neither of them has experienced the love of life and death, so why bother? After receiving it, it still got a lot of attention. To be honest, I really don't see Ji Ziyue's merits. The reason why she was able to become the heroine in the original work is that she and Ye Fan went through a lot when he was weak. Moreover, she provided Ye Fan with the Void Sutra and followed him through life and death. Her own background is not weak, so she became the main palace just like picking up a leak. The above are all her shining points, and there is nothing else. Are the shining points above useful to the protagonist? Does it emanate to the protagonist? The Ji family—the protagonist's. Strength - the protagonist can defeat ten Ji Ziyue alone. When he is with the protagonist, he will not be involved in life and death, and he can only be a dragster. Moreover, Ji Ziyue doesn't have anything, but wants everything. In the original work, she asked Ye Fan for the Secret of All Words and the Qi Cauldron of the Mother of All Things, but here she asked the protagonist for the opportunity in the secret realm. Look at how useless she is, her luck, opportunity, and strength are both better than worse. For the same experience, she can only ask others for it. Of course, I am belittling Ji Ziyue a little too much here. After all, she is also a beautiful girl of the generation, and she is not weak compared with others. But these advantages of hers are not worth her disadvantages. If a woman with these advantages becomes the heroine, I guess everyone wouldn't object to it, but she just has a few points that make her uncomfortable. If she is not the heroine, then she is a great protagonist and a junior.

Classic Zhutianliu comment section, I have a sense of superiority to the Immortal Emperor on the other side😅, the classic other side is a permanent certificate, the only one in the past and future😅, can the cloud readers carefully read the two novels, the other side is full of troubles all day long, right? ———————————————— —— That's nice to say, one certificate will last forever 😅, the basic setting of the end of the road, the eternal time and space is just a picture scroll to the Immortal Emperor, a single thought reverses the past and present, reverses the years, reverses the cause and effect, independent of the sea of time, the long river of time is just an illusion, only its own eternity is the only one, All paths become empty, and one's own winning path is superior to the setting? The other shore is half beyond the long river of time?

It's too poisonous to have a clone take in a daughter. It's like you wrote several protagonists, they are not one person anymore. The clone should only serve the main character, right? Otherwise, why would you have a clone to train a teammate? Also equipped with women, I saw the incarnation of Qing Emperor having sex with Yan Ruyu and was poisoned to death

Arrogant, greedy, irresponsible, those who resist will die. Being weak is your fault and it's none of my business. All good things must be mine. You are not suitable for Xie's meaningful novels. Instead, write white novels. You are only suitable for Xie's kind.

Most people cannot accept the heroine Ji Ziyue. The protagonist is the grandson of Emperor Yan and the biological son of Emperor Huang. You can accept her as the daughter of an ancient emperor, but if you have the same surname and the same clan, it will challenge your ethics a bit. It may be exciting and novel for some people, but when you write a book, you have to consider the readers' three views. You are already regarded as an ancestor. It is not clear how Xuanyuan Dapan died. For the protagonist, I will accept it if Ji Haoyue endures the humiliation one day, cuts off the body of the god king, lives another life, and invites the emperor's son to die 😁

The protagonist is severely suppressed, and he is fighting at home in the Nine Heavens and Ten Earths, in charge of heavenly punishment, and there are other immortal kings just watching? There are also a bunch of secret techniques that surpass the Immortal Emperor, and he himself is also an Immortal King giant (the combat power is at least as good as the Emperor Light Immortal King. In the later period of Perfect World, Shi Yi became an Immortal King giant, killing other Dark Immortal Kings in one glance, although it was also very expensive, I clearly remember this part). As a result, the protagonist was beaten and couldn't replace a few Immortal Kings. I'm speechless, so I can't be stupid!

It's a big taboo for a brother to have a conscious doppelgänger with a woman! ! ! ! Easy eunuch! ! ! !

Little Moon was so criticized that she no longer even became the heroine. It was a bit weird to watch it well before and now look back at it. Besides, there are a lot of sister-brother relationships, brother-sister relationships, etc., Which are not absent in reality, and the protagonist and Little Moon are countless generations apart. In reality, let alone five servers, there are hundreds of servers. Besides, who is not a descendant of Yan and Huang nowadays? If you can, don't fall in love, get married and have children

It's so disgusting to watch. At the beginning, a Taoist monk said that he had a trump card and wanted to fight Crocodile Ancestor. Why don't you write a fanfic without reading the original work? There are so many holy places in Zhetian Quanshu with imperial soldiers, who dares to touch the saints? Which late-stage master doesn't come out, which holy land doesn't enshrine a saint, and what kind of trump card is more powerful than the emperor's soldiers? It's really disgusting. I've read too many novels about Ancient Times. Why don't you write about Ancient Times? You can't just pick up a magic weapon and be so awesome that you don't write about it. Instead, you write about this disgusting person who is the same as Zhetian who is born as a human being. In Zhetian Perfect Holy Ruins, which word mentions that a Taoist monk dared to touch a saint while holding an imperial weapon or something like that? Mr. Chen Dong should put all of you disgusting people in jail.

The first chapter left me speechless. The protagonist was eleven or twelve years old. Ye Fan invited him to a class reunion after chatting for a few words? ? ? Who would invite an unknown elementary school student to their class reunion? Even if this is a mindless cool article, don't be so mindless 😅

The incarnation of consciousness is having sex with women, which is a bit unacceptable 😒

I'm speechless. The configuration of this protagonist is so high. It takes several moves to reach the supreme level after enlightenment. Take a good look at what the protagonist is like in the Lord of Tribulation. Look at your trash protagonist. You are really speechless. You shouldn't be able to beat the supreme being to death just by being a high-level quasi-emperor. After attaining enlightenment, you can kill a lot of supreme beings with one hand. It's like driving high and going low. The protagonist is a waste. If you play such a big trick, the result will be a waste. Abandon it. It is poisonous.

Extremely poisonous! Extremely poisonous! Extremely poisonous! Be careful! 1. The avatar acquires the girl, and a Qing Emperor avatar is created to have sex with Yan Ruyu, and the avatar cuckolds the protagonist, which is very disgusting 2. The girl is given a poison. In the early stage, hundreds of chapters were prepared for the ambiguous plot with Ji Ziyue, and then it was directly given to Ye Fan. It was so disgusting.

The clone actually cheated the protagonist. Hahahahahaha, I was laughing so hard, it's okay to just write a clone flow, it's because I can give the protagonist the green light. Qingdi's clone made love with Yan Ruyu. Hahaha, who is the protagonist? If you don't want to write it, just don't write it, just be a eunuch.

I've read more than 10 chapters, and I'm still confused. Not to mention the minor points, Is it a certain death situation in the original timeline of the trip to Mars? You killed a large number of small crocodiles in a Taoist palace, and then used the source to replenish energy without starting it? They also used quasi-emperor soldiers and crocodiles as the main attack, and finally sacrificed blood to the quasi-emperor soldiers, even if they didn't kill them, they didn't get any benefits. In the end, Yan Emperor and Huang Emperor gave the protagonist some instructions, but the protagonist finally said that coming out to fool around was because of the background. ? ? ? ? ?

Defying the Heaven and Transforming the Dragon into the Divine Forbidden, don't you know what the Divine Forbidden is essentially about? 😥

Disgusting, disgusting, disgusting, the most disgusting Zhetian fan I have ever seen

It's poisonous, and the fragments of the other side's divine weapon are also from the other side. The protagonist is just like sB.

The protagonist is an intellectually disabled child

He talks about ruthless people every day, and even says that Ye Fan's trip to Beidou is all a joke arranged by ruthless people. You don't even read the original work, but you are just trying to obsess over it, right? The ruthless people in the original novel didn't even know that Ye Fan had come to Beidou. They only found out later. What do you say every day that ruthless people arrange ruthless people's arrangements? Ill?

What a great novel, Disgusting on Women, Goodbye

With a god-level brain circuit, if you don't go to Kunlun, you'll just wait for the coffin to be lifted!