Ultraman Reina

As soon as I finished reading the second chapter, I knew that this book was absolutely terrible, and the plot was quite outrageous.

Brother, when you reached your peak, when Yun Daiha was at your peak, when did your sub-ling come out?

Your updates are also too slow, not even 30,000 words in more than two months. But you made great progress later, and I feel like you learned it after reading my article. However, mine is not very good. I suggest you click Finish and then take some time to think about the next book. Save 50,000 words before posting, ensuring that each chapter has 2,000 words.

This book is good, but there are a bit too many Ultraman. Two or three were fine at first, but later on, as more and more were added, it became a bit confusing. The plot was relatively good, but I didn't feel the resentment when Ultraman Nebi was born. Ultraman Reiner was so arrogant at the beginning that I wanted to hit him (just kidding).

The profession of killer is really not suitable for Ultraman, but it is not impossible to write. You can write that Reina is the child of a sinner. His parents were expelled from the Ultra Star together with him, and then were taken in by aliens. When he grew up, he attacked the Ultra Star, but under the influence of Ultra's father, he decided to change his past and rejoin the Kingdom of Light. The father of Ultra felt that he was a talent, so he sent him to the earth to experience. In addition, the word killer is suitable for the evil Ultraman. You can write him with a bottom line, and his evil is against the enemy.