Starting from Winning the Food Competition

When I saw the opening, I had no desire to continue reading. I personally feel that the business model is not good. This is a problem of positioning. Also, the protagonist opened the restaurant a little early, and there are too few dishes. First of all, you have to figure out who goes to the restaurant to eat, and what their needs are. Most people who go to the restaurant to eat are for dinner parties, banquets, etc. Even if the food is good, I can't treat others to dinner, so just treat others to a fish-flavored shredded pork or mapo tofu set meal. This seems too low-grade. In other words, the price seems a bit high for ordinary individuals to eat, because most of the people who eat by themselves are office workers, and the price-performance ratio is so low compared to your salary. For the price of your set meal, I can eat very well in an ordinary restaurant. Not to mention how good the taste is, the price-performance ratio is there. In the final analysis, it is still a matter of positioning. Those who treat guests to dinner will not go to your place. The dishes are too few and not up to standard. It is too expensive for ordinary people to go there. It is not a problem to go there every once or twice. There is no problem. It is impossible to go there every day.

I came in by chance. After reading a few chapters, I have a few problems. Firstly, the character of the protagonist is not outstanding. Secondly, the direction is wrong. It should be more about how to cook instead of the system. It's okay for the system to enlighten the protagonist and learn from it, but your protagonist must also have something to work hard for. Thirdly, various descriptions are not in place. Food articles, to the end Don't make the readers hungry. The dishes are all different in color and flavor. When describing it, the aroma, sound, ingredients, and seasonings are all the focus. Also, the shock comes too quickly. I'm not saying there shouldn't be shocks, but your first competition is very cliche from the moment you sign up, and people have no desire to continue reading.

I thought you stopped writing because you were scolded. There were no comments.

The plug-in is too weak and difficult to become popular

The main reason is that the feedback from customers is too general, they will say it is too delicious without any description. Also, almost every customer said it was too expensive as soon as they entered the store, and then the protagonist explained and stayed to eat. Then it starts to taste so delicious, ends, and continues to the next wave of customers to try it again, and keep repeating.

The writing is not very good. The writing is written in a journal style, just like writing a diary. But this is a newbie problem. Write more and practice more