I Was Reborn as Soon as I Gained Wealth and Freedom.

Warning, boys, please don't read this. This is not the cool article we like to read. It's a pity that such a good writing style leads to a book that I don't like to read.

Come on, accept more women, update more, support

Well, let me put it here. As a newcomer, I will definitely step into many pitfalls in the early stage of single-player. If there are any poisonous points, please point them out, even if they are just sprays, I will try to modify them😶

I'm so heartbroken, I'm such a bad writer. I was originally posting for love, but someone actually reported it and blocked the chapter😭 Dear bosses, you can comment if you don't like it. I also want to comment, but can you be merciful🤕

Zhou Mengqi has too many and too heavy roles. Why should everything revolve around her? In order to protect her, she can ignore the feelings of the other heroines. Counting her previous life, she only dated the protagonist for about a year and then broke up with her. Is it really special? In this life, I just gained a little bit of a head start. Is it necessary to surpass Lin Yiwen, who was the hero's childhood sweetheart, first love, and even engaged? ! Although Lin has some problems, shouldn't the male protagonist who understands all this after rebirth have deeper feelings for Lin? ! This is very unreasonable. Your harem writing is too unbalanced and too doting on one person. It might as well be a single female protagonist! Even if you want to make Zhou Mengqi the main palace, there is no need to overdo it! It is recommended to look at other works with multiple female protagonists to balance the role of each female protagonist with the status in the heart of the male protagonist. {"NickName":"sodalkc","UserId":317518649} Please, the author, please reply to these questions after seeing it!

If you think the book is still readable, please read it again and turn to the end of the latest updated chapter. Please, please.

I really laughed to death after reading the comment section. A group of people said that Huang and Lin were disgusting. I saw more than a hundred pictures. Isn't the protagonist the most disgusting?

When I saw that the woman was also reborn, I felt like I couldn't stand it. It was on par with those bloody romantic dramas. It was a bit outrageous.

When I saw Huang, I found out that the male protagonist was kissing someone else outside, and I couldn't stand it anymore. Qiong Yao's plot, you will be caught if you cheat, author: This is a male video! ! ! Not a female channel! ! ! I am a 24K straight man who has no interest in the plot of Qiong Yao. Okay, I am just expressing my personal opinion. If you have different ideas and opinions, please don't send me messages. I will ignore them.

The first feeling I felt after reading Chapter 203 was that I was very angry! ! ! They both returned to their hometown. They were all faced with old classmates, and neither of them dared to admit that Lin was his girlfriend! What a dog! The harem is so open, it is seriously unbalanced, and there is no sense of responsibility for the heroine. Everything only revolves around Zhou Mengqi. This is really boring! How can you pamper one person so much? ! It's true that children who don't cry or fuss don't have candy, right? Why can't Zhou be wronged and hurt? It's totally acceptable to be tolerated, and it's totally okay to be abused. Please! Let's have less of Zhou Mengqi's scenes! Originally, harem stories only lived with one heroine, so it would be too much to spend most of the time with one person! Everyday is a week, and the author may be able to write it very smoothly, but it is more troublesome to write about other people. Since this is a harem story, please make the distribution of feelings more balanced. If you want to favor one person, to be honest, normal people should cherish Lin more. She was a fiancée in the previous life, pregnant with a child, and crazy about revenge for the protagonist. These things are not as good as the second girlfriend who only dated for less than a year in the previous life? ! Give other heroines more roles! Zhou already has too many scenes! The biggest drawback of this book is that the male protagonist cannot be exposed to rain and dew equally. Don't wait for the next book to correct it, start this book! {"NickName":"sodalkc","UserId":317518649}

Can you please stop making the other heroines look so humble? Only Zhou Mengqi can be put on the table, while the other girls can only suffer the injustice in secret. Everything is always centered on Zhou Mengqi. Are they afraid that Zhou Mengqi will be sad and hurt, so they don't consider the others at all? ? Then what kind of harem is there? ! Totally out of balance! {"NickName":"sodalkc","UserId":317518649}

Write according to your own outline. Don't change it and change it beyond recognition. If you don't come back, it will be unfinished or you will be forced to write a mindless novel.

I immediately gave up the book when I saw the double life of a man and a woman. As a male channel, I couldn't accept the rebirth of the heroine. It was so poisonous that she died.

My mother is gone, my father has a broken leg, and when I grow up, I work as a mistress, and my role card is that of a supporting actress. I am so full that I will starve to death.

Double travel back in time. . . . . . . Persuade to quit

This makes me really sick. I have been like this in my previous life and I still pursue something. The key is that there are two other female protagonists. I dumped them like this. I saw that they were sick. I was also worried about this and that. Forget about abandoning them. It is really poisonous.

It's well written and I will definitely support it in the next book.

Your book really made me feel aggrieved inexplicably, really aggrieved, and I don't know why.

I wanted to read this novel again, but it was uncomfortable to read, and I felt aggrieved. I always felt like there was a turbid air in my heart. Reading novels is really not about looking for sin. I really don't know what to say if a novel with multiple female protagonists can be written like this by you. This is almost as bad as my depression after reading Kobe Bryant's book.

The whole article is written about women, and they are all entangled with each other.

Let me not talk about other things. In my opinion, the role of Zhou Mengqi alone is of no use except to make the male protagonist physically happy. The character portrayal is so useless. It is not as good as Lu Xiangwan, who can run the company together, not to mention Lin Jingwen, who is also the heroine who has been reborn, and can help the protagonist too much. Could it be that after Zhou Du knew about the plot, things got ugly and they wanted to break up? Then the male protagonist had to coax her back with all kinds of difficulties?

After reading the comments, I have a general understanding of the author's situation. I'm looking forward to the next book. I won't be addicted to this one.

If there are 10 women, I will order them all, if not, I will order the latest chapter.

There are too many poisonous points to watch, and the protagonist is too holy father and too licking a dog.

It's okay

I would like to ask if the author of this book was poisoned? The heroine who has a virginity complex and can't stand it is someone else who slept with her

The first update to be ranked first, let's commemorate it😃

Is the one above the twin brother of this book?

The ending is pretty good, all the strength is taken away. It's just a bit fast at the end, maybe the author didn't have the heart to write because of poor grades. While it's not over yet, I'll add more extras. Write down the plot that you skipped in the ending or add something to talk about later.

It's a talent story. You make tens of millions as a private detective, and you work alone, but you fail. Can't you arrange another plot? I opened a studio and was killed by my enemies for revenge. At least I had some brains.