The Fight Begins with Xiao Xuan

If it really doesn't work, I don't want to say anything. In the original work, Xiao Xuan is domineering, but what about you? The most important thing is that you appreciate Nalan Yanran, do you know Xiao Xuan? Just because he came to break off the engagement and insulted the Xiao family, if in the original work, he would have died long ago. In the original work, how much did he bear? How much did you pay? You are doing it for the Xiao family. He will never allow anything that is detrimental to the Xiao family.

I, Xiao Xuan, am invincible and dominate the world. I am said to be the protagonist of the world a thousand years ago. No one can object! But what do you, the younger generation, focus on? Xiao Xuan, did you have a wife before? Xiao Xuan, how many wives do you have? Xiao Xuan, do you still want a wife in the future? Please focus on how I can pacify the Dou Qi Continent...

Just one or two female protagonists is enough, too many will be boring, because most books are like this, very samey.

Let me give you a number, one million words in one hour. I will update it immediately. I hope the author will not be ignorant.

Your talent is too weak. It was perfect a thousand years ago. After you are resurrected, you write it like the return of the Dragon King. . . It feels like the Jade Emperor is being resurrected as a joke. .

Why do I feel that Yaochen in the author's works always feels like Douluo Yuxiaogang? It's not that Yao Chen's ability is comparable to that of Yu Xiaogang (it's incomparable) It's that in the author's writing, it's a bit like the master in Douluo Continent who claims to be the best in theory, but every time there are women who overpower him. Yao Chen feels the same way. The author has been sparing no effort to praise Xuan Yi, tearing Yao Chen's glamorous coat to pieces as the world's best alchemist. Yao Cheng is qualified to enter the Small Pill Pagoda anyway, and is on a par with Hou Laoguai of Nine Color Pill Thunder. If Xuan Yi is said to be unfathomable, is it because she clearly proved in the original text that she can refine ninth grade pills? In other words, have you firmly entered the Little Dan Pagoda?

What kind of heroine does an old man want?

Poison Xiao Xuan carried the hopes of the entire Xiao clan and ultimately failed! ! ! Do you think he will look like this after rebirth? The character is simply ruined!

It's said that you are ambiguous with someone but don't accept it. That's what Dou Po's original novel is like. You, a fan, still do this 😂

Daily Detoxification is indeed well-deserved

The protagonists from all over the world are gathering, you bring your Xiao Xun'er little doctor fairy Yun Yunmei Dusha Yafei, and he brings his Xiao Xun'er little doctor fairy Yun Yunmei Dusha Yafei to get together together.

I feel like the author might as well write about time travellers. When writing about Xiao Xuan, a person who is not mentioned much in the original work, it is difficult to write about his character.

Chapter 1425, Yaochen himself said that he could not refine the ninth-grade elixir.

Two women are enough, Medusa and Yun Yun

Have you ever read the original Dou Po fan? Xiao Xuan, although there is not much description in the original work, I still feel that he is also the most amazing person in an era, isn't it? . . When you write YY, you should also compare it with those geniuses in Zhetian who are about to become enlightened. . .

Xuan Yi is not as strong as you think. Yao Chen and Hou Laoguai are both at the same level as Nine-Color Dan Lei. Xuan Yi is not a ninth-grade alchemist either. Why suppress the original characters?

Brainless cool article, let's slip away first

What kind of heroine do you want? Women will only affect the speed at which you draw your sword! 😏😏

Every time I see fellow Doupo fans write that Yaochen is a ninth-grade alchemist, I feel very sad.

It's hard to do, it's hard to do, the protagonist has already maxed out his level from the beginning, and I have to go to the vast world if I continue like this. I have no place to stay in Dou Qi Continent. By the way, there is also the issue of the heroine. I am afraid that readers will have misunderstandings about fantasy immortality. They are all monks, and they are all beings who live as long as heaven and earth. There is no need for an old cow to eat young grass. The heroine is Yun Yun, which is good🌝👍👍

Some people are just sick. Don't take it for granted. I'm not talking about you.

The most important thing is that he doesn't feel guilty at all.

Invincible and refreshing article (Disadvantages\Advantages: It just doesn't accept girls for the sake of accepting girls like other fans, and it is not very friendly to readers who like to read and accept female protagonists)

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The subject matter is not bad, the plot is okay, the writing is "remarkable", and there is a lot of room for improvement.

Once promoted to Emperor Yan, can he summon a special fire and take it away directly? Like the Void Swallowing Flame has been refined by others, but as long as you become the Emperor of Flame, you can directly summon it and snatch it away? 😰

Mengxin seeks collection🥺🥺🥺