
The Divine Phoenix That Covers the Sky Is Immortal
遮天之神凰不死
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The ruthless emperor
Let me talk about my views on making friends with Ye Fan. I have read a lot of "Zhetian" novels recently. As soon as the author writes about Ye Fan, no matter how he writes, a large number of people will immediately say "I love you", and I am speechless After reading novels for several years, Ye Fan is my favorite male protagonist, at least in Among the fantasy novels about the jungle of the jungle, it is considered to have a relatively high moral value. Throughout the whole text, although Ye Fan adheres to the tradition of fighting all the way to Zhetian, almost all the battles are not initiated by him. Of course, when I read it, I actually wanted to complain about this super sarcastic face. From a personal character point of view, first of all, Ye Fan is absolutely loyal to his friends and elders. He has not completely forgotten his former friends when he became stronger and changed the map. In the end, how many people did he bring with him to teach him to ascend? Of course, as good as he is to his friends, he will be as evil as he is to his enemies. However, the protagonist of fantasy novels personally feels that this is also an advantage. The red-haired protagonist on the righteous side has always been so good that readers are surprised. The only person Ye Fan has ever been sorry for in his life is probably Ziyue, and I really don't like An Miaoyi. Personally, I think that even if traveling through Zhetian is purely based on profit, Ye Fan is still worth making friends with. Think about it, if the time traveler is an ordinary monk and not a genius, befriending Ye Fan will at least buy you a ticket to the fairy world for free, and it does not require much cost in the early stage. I don't know how much profit I will make. The supreme master of the restricted area will almost cry with envy If the time traveler is a wall-hanger who can compete with Ye Fan, then he will definitely be able to live to the era of fighting weirdos in the future. Ye Fan is also a good teammate, so it doesn't hurt to brush up his favor in advance What's even better is that although Ye Fan doesn't know it, there is Dacheng Holy Body and Ruthless Man behind him, so there is no need to worry about the butterfly effect affecting Ye Fan.
At the end of the Holy Ruins, I really felt that I was tired of being the enemy of the three protagonists after traveling through time!
Because according to the descriptions in the Holy Ruins, the story lines of Perfection and Zhetian are two weeks old. The heavens and heaven have been destroyed long ago and were reshaped by No. 10 Through eternity. The Black Emperor also said in the end that Ye Hei was actually invincible for a long time. Many eras ago, he received the gift from Ye Fan from the river of time. The Sacrifice Dao can interfere with the past and future at will. The Sacrifice Dao can be said to be a transcendent being that transcends everything. It is similar to the Dao Fruit in one life. You can't even imagine how powerful it is!
This book's performance is a bit poor. I hope the author doesn't want to be a eunuch.
After watching so many Zhetian fics, some people always think that Ye Fan is not good and it's all because of his sister. Recently, I rewatched Zhetian and found that Ye Fan is actually super strong In terms of performance, Ye Fan has fought from Beidou to Starry Sky Ancient Road, and has fought against all the geniuses of the golden age. In most cases, the following are the best hits, or the smaller ones hit the larger ones, and they are still invincible all the way. The emperor has killed a lot of people. Before enlightenment, he killed several dark supremes, and even defeated the current emperor. This has never happened in ancient times. After enlightenment, killing supreme beings is like killing dogs. Emperor Ji, it's okay to say that the combat power is comparable to Wu Shi In terms of stunning level, Ye Fan simultaneously broke the curse of the Holy Body's inability to attain enlightenment and the unique emperor. After embarking on the immortal path of the mortal world, his nine generations of transformation are at their peak. Personally, I think it is no less stunning. Ruthless Man In terms of achievements, although the emperors of the past have weakened him, he was able to level six forbidden areas in a row. This kind of achievement is unique only in the book Zhetian. Putting aside emotional factors, his achievements far exceed that of any great emperor, including Void Wushi Ruthless Man.
In fact, I'm quite curious as to why so many people criticize the author and write about the human race in such a heinous way. In my opinion, there are not many truly evil human beings written about by the author in this book. It's just that different races have different perspectives on the problem. People who are not my race will have different minds. This is common to every race. It's just that the writing is more realistic, not so Mary Sue's fairy tale. Each race stands on its own side, and if it has the ability, it will definitely get rid of the geniuses of other races. Maybe I don't love the protagonist of Zhe Tian deeply enough? So it's easy to accept the Holy Spirit as the protagonist? But I think the author's article is really good, and I really don't want the author to be criticized and abandon the article one day.
The road to immortality in this life is a joke in the original work. Many geniuses are sealed in this life to fight for the throne and walk on the road to immortality. As a result, when the Road to Immortality opened, so many geniuses had not grown up at all, and were not even qualified to walk on the Road to Immortality! How could it be that all their parents were so stupid that even the calculation of the time of becoming immortal was wrong, so no one allowed their genius to be born even hundreds of years earlier? The fight for the throne ended up being passed over by an older generation, the Golden Crow Emperor, and the other geniuses had not yet grown up! This was a big plot bug in the original work, and it made him lonely in the golden age. Can the author correct this big bug in the article?
Top Ten Famous Scenes of Covering the Sky: ①Level 4, transforming into a dragon and attacking the Tomb of the Qing Emperor; ②The Taoist Palace Ancestor breaks into the ancient forbidden land in anger ③The second level of the Nangong Dagong Immortal wants to fight for a lifetime of immortality in the sky ④Emperor Hengyu is forced to leave Zhongzhou and return Not coming ⑤The fourth level Ji Haoyue wants to seize the Qing Emperor's soldiers ⑥Zhaotian passers-by know everything and everything ⑦Nangong Dangneng breaks into the Bronze Immortal Palace alone and carries the ruthless emperor's corpse on his back I only remember so much, what else? 😏😏😏
Now that the world is invincible and cannot hide the owner of the restricted area, what is the use of hiding it from all sentient beings? Why would Ye Fan be sealed to the same generation so that he could win if he was afraid of not being able to win on the way to becoming an immortal? If you are afraid of death, why don't you imitate the master of the restricted area and kill yourself when he is at his peak? Dark turmoil comes to hide your identity and you can drag down a supreme being without using all your strength. After Ye Fan becomes enlightened, he won't do anything to you and will help you survive, so why are you afraid of Ye Fan again? If you are afraid of being weird, why don't you follow the example of the emperor of Shencanling and go to the holy ruins? If you are an immortal phoenix, can you still be the emperor of the gods? When the duel is strange, there will be more of you, but not too much, of you. If Ye Fan wins, you can continue to live. If he loses, you can't hide. In Zhetianli, he can either push forward and reach the peak or die gloriously and gloriously, or he can either reach the end or remain ordinary.
This book is on sale for a limited time. I read it and thought it was okay. The protagonist of this book is the Holy Spirit, and he will kill anyone who is not of my race. It is normal, right? Many people search for Ye Fan, Wu Shi, Rueren on Baidu, and they feel that those who are against this trio are all bad people. Then I will compare it to an immortal emperor who is a good person in my opinion. Do you believe it? Let me tell you one fact: The Immortal Emperor, what is his mortal world? After bathing in the blood of the emperor, he transformed into a worldly immortal. Well, he specializes in sneak attacks on the Supreme Being in the restricted area in his later years. Without the Immortal Emperor, wouldn't it be twice as much to sneak attack on the Supreme Being in the restricted area? Who will fight the dark turmoil? Isn't this a good thing? The point is not that he died after provoking the Heiye trio. Who told the Heiye trio to be the protagonists under Chen Dong? So if you hate that and hate this, you just like the threesome, right? Just ask the vast number of Zhetian fans, are they right? Everyone's characters in "Zhe Tian" are very classic. Chen Dong first wrote "Zhe Tian", then "Perfect", and then "Khenxu". Among his trilogy, the best achievement was the "Zhe Tian" novel in which he wrote the second "Perfect World". It was far worse than "Zhe Tian", not to mention "Kinxu". The next chapter was all unfinished. Even worse, the author of the fan novel about "Zhe Tian" couldn't even eat enough. It is conceivable that
I hope the author changes the character of the protagonist. Don't be so childish. It's very lovable to write the supporting characters like this, but the main character is very annoying.
Gouwen is very popular in Qidian now! But Zhe Tian is not a Gou Wen! "Zhetian" is a passionate novel. If you are lazy, your book will be useless. A ruthless person doesn't suffer any harm, it's just that too many people praise her and her popularity is too high. In Perfection, the Immortal Emperor is a cripple, and the Black Emperor of the Holy Ruins can become an Immortal Emperor. The popularity level here is infinitely close to 100%.
The horse was persuaded to retreat by the dragon. It's so disgusting. The protagonist is really just a relative and allows the protagonist to be bullied? The word humiliation is absolutely correct. The protagonist is Tianzunzi. His father has lived four lives and followed the path of the mortal immortal. His brother is also an enlightened person who has lived two lives. I am your uncle when you are beaten by dragons and horses. Isn't it disgusting? No temper? You still talk about letting the protagonist be your mount. Is this too much of a B-face? The protagonist has the missing quasi-emperor protector, the ultimate imperial weapon, the immortal weapon, and the 4.0 Version of the Emperor Sutra which is equivalent to the Immortal Sutra. Why can't you, Ryoma, not see your identity and strength? We have only known each other for less than a day. Do we have a good relationship? Very familiar? The protagonist really lacks such a follower? According to Ye Hei's perspective in the original novel, it's okay to have Black and Yellow and Longma around you. You're not Ye Hei, so what's wrong with him? You are the Holy Son of Heaven, and you have not cultivated your three views by living under the red flag. Do you really have no class mentality? Did the Mythology Heaven speak to you like this? It's really disgusting.
Many people say that the Ye Fan written by the author does not look like Ye Fan. They feel that the lower limit is much lower and they did not control the original character well. They wrote Ye Fan as a kind of person like Tang San. But I want to say one thing, won't the character change? Analysis, in the original work, Ye Fan had ups and downs during his rise, but in the end he survived quite smoothly. In summary, the real fatal threats he faced were not too many, and there were ways to resolve them. Taken together, these difficulties finally became the materials for Ye Fan to strengthen his Taoist heart and increase his strength, and finally cultivated a generation of invincible emperors. However, such a growth process is actually unlikely to occur in the real world, because things like big thunder and small raindrops really only appear in novels. Ye Fan was so promiscuous in the early stage, breaking into the Immortal Mountain and entering the ancient mines of Taichu. If it had been someone else, he would have died a hundred times. But every time it was passed without any danger, and because Chen Dong's early outline was unclear, Ye Fan held many treasures, and the result was still so wild, as if the eyes of those high-level monks were blind, watching Ye Fan dance. Is this possible in the world that the author set up to cover the sky? The result is obvious. After coming to Beidou, Ye Fan lived an extremely hard life. He was either being hunted or on the way to be hunted all day long. In fact, Ye Fan was able to survive and obtain the protection of the old madman and the Supreme Artifact of the Dacheng Holy Body. This is great luck in itself. In other words, the aura of the protagonist of Ye Fan as written by the author is still Exist, but this also gave Ye Fan a deep understanding of the cruelty of the spiritual world. Only ruthless and evil people can survive and live better. Although these thoughts have never shaken Ye Fan's original intention, they have subtly changed Ye Fan's thinking mode. It can be said that from the beginning, this Ye Fan is not the Ye Fan we know. Then Ye Fan met Tai Sui, realized Tai Sui's cruel methods, and began to complain about the innocent monks, because he is a typical idealist, and he hopes to create a world where good people are in charge. I asked if I had offended that person, but suffered countless losses. No one cared, and he was ignored, which naturally produced strong unfairness and resentment. Later, he was written by the author like a fool, touching the protagonist's brow again and again, just because of this resentment. It can be said that from here on, Ye Fan's Taoist heart began to twist, and he faintly lost his mind. It was in sharp contrast to the Ye Fan in the original work, and was even commented as "too far behind Jiang Ming." In the later Feixian battlefield, Ye Fan was really fighting, fighting for the victory of his ancestors, and risking his life. He still dared to enter the game even though he knew that the Kunlun Immortal Clan was not easy to mess with. It can be said that he really carried forward the spirit of the original Ye Fan, but he saw the cruel truth. The Feng Family of the Imperial Family and the Shangqing Sect abandoned the remaining Qi Practitioners and fled. It was a huge blow to Ye Fan, and even the belief he held on was shaken. Ye Fan's Taoist Heart began to The collapse, the subsequent slaughter of the ancient stars, and the removal of the Kunlun Fairy Mountain made Ye Fan almost desperate, because he found that he could not change anything after all, and his family became the last warmth in his heart, and then he was abducted the next second , the final hope was shattered, leaving only hatred and sorrow, the Taoist heart was broken into dregs. It can be said that it has embarked on a path similar to the ancient times, and is in an extreme collapse. It can be said that at this time, the shadow of Emperor Ye in the original work is also gradually dissipating. Did the author belittle Ye Fan and say that he is the same trash as Ji Haoyue? No, no, the broken Taoist heart was reunited by him. After the great ups and downs, he walked on the old path of the original work and regained his faith. He did what he could only do in ancient times, and even had the hope of becoming a Taoist. He returned to his original intention, became himself, and really wanted to take the road of invincibility. He wanted to establish the ancestral court of the human race and create the world of his dreams. Based on this alone, Ye Fan has not been weakened! Even after breaking up, this Ye Fan will only be stronger! However, everything he has experienced must have determined that he is not the Ye Fan in the original work. This Ye Fan, affected by his life experience, is more ruthless and terrifying. Then Ye Fan made trouble and killed a great sage-level stone dragon, which completely angered the Holy Spirit lineage. The protagonist also specially asked people to capture Ye Fan's wife Xu Qiong and kill her, which made Ye Fan finally shape her. The heart of invincibility began to collapse again, and everyone knew the next plot. The Ancestral Court and the Holy Spirit lineage started a war. The Kunlun Clan, Ba Ti, and Divine Phoenix Clan all paid the price. Even Ye Fan, who had a completely distorted mentality, still used the Supreme Artifact to do what was not in the original work. The Death Emperor's specialty - sneak attack, the one who attacked was Tai Sui's girlfriend. As a result, the Holy Body line was surrounded and suppressed. Ye Fan's parents were killed in front of Ye Fan, which made Ye Fan's heart broken again. Finally, he fell behind Lu Li in realm. , He was killed, that is, he fell into the same state as the Emperor in the original work. He was indeed much stronger than the Emperor in the original work, but in the end he was defeated. He lost, just like the Emperor in the original work, it was a joke. To sum up, I am not surprised that Ye Fan will lose. A person with a broken heart can fight to that point with an emperor-level genius whose realm is higher than his own. It is already a record that defies heaven. The emperor in the original book cannot do this. It can be seen that the author has never weakened Ye Fan. As for why this description of Ye Fan is not like that of Ye Fan in the original work, it can only be attributed to the author giving him a hellish start and a completely different life experience. He is still the same person, but the inside has changed.
The complete system within the Imperial Clan (the setting of this book)
First, the talent training system, like the Ji family, has classifications of ordinary children and children of core elites. It is a very complicated thing. Different levels are exposed to completely different things. When you become a seed (core) person of the imperial family, you will be exposed to the imperial scriptures. To practice Taboo Chapter, use the best and highest quality resources, such as divine sources, and powerful protectors. This depends on the status and connections. For example, the Emperor of the Void, Ji Zi, the protector is at the level of a great saint, and those with a rich history like the Divine Phoenix Clan can even draw out quasi-emperors to protect the protagonist. , In addition, there are various life-saving things, such as imitations of the ancient emperor's talismans, saint-level, and even emperor-level forbidden weapons, which can be given, and everything depends on the value. This type is family-based. In addition, there are sects like Yaochi. They do not need to find talents personally. Their affiliated Holy Land will select potential and talented disciples from the mortals recruited by their affiliated Cave Heaven. For example, Weiwei in the original book enters the Shaking Light Holy Land from Lingxu Cave Heaven. The subsequent process is similar to that of other imperial clans. Many, there are also divisions between ordinary disciples and elite disciples, and they will be exposed to different things at different levels. Generally speaking, the most different thing between them and the family-based imperial clan is that the most elite geniuses of their generation will be canonized as saint sons and saints. The saints and saints will usually be combined, and the descendants will stay in the holy land to inject fresh and powerful blood into the holy land. Second, the resource extraction system. It is impossible for the children of the Imperial Clan to mine and find sources on their own. They all grab mortals and weak monks to work for them. They have their own source veins, generally not too many, but they are definitely the best and most high-quality. This is obvious. At the same time, they will squeeze some weak sects, and they will definitely There are even some shady ones, such as rogue bandits. To some extent, a considerable number of them are the dogs of the Imperial Clan and those Holy Land aristocratic families. They do evil there, and finally gather a considerable amount of resources to use as trading currency and cultivation resources to supply the powerful machine of the Imperial Clan. This is just the Beidou Ancient Star. The Imperial Clan also has its own dogs in other life star regions, such as the Eternal Ancient Star. There are a small number of powerful families with many people related to the Imperial Clan. It is their anchor point on this ancient star and will supply the Imperial Clan's Prodigy Evolutionary Fluid or the raw materials and components of the evolutionary fluid, such as Gou Chen, Feathering... It is inevitable that all major star regions have such forces, and they are also a member of the Imperial Clan's resource system. Third, the star branch system. Generally speaking, each major imperial clan will have its own ancestral star, and they are the absolute rear of the imperial clan. When the emperor comes out from here, he will often leave their back-up here to protect his descendants. There is a real heritage of the imperial clan. Saints, great saints, and even quasi-emperors may be sealed here, including the emperor's wife, generals and the like. Of course, people like the Ji family are likely to die. After all, they are in the restricted area. At the same time, there are branches deep in the starry sky, such as when the Yaochi was destroyed, the Gouchen branch, the feathered branch, the branch on the edge of the universe... Are much older. These branches more or less have the presence of saints to ensure their status in the starry sky. One is to ensure the probability of survival in the dark turmoil, and the other is to better squeeze resources. For example, some specialties are only available in the starry sky and cannot be found in ordinary places. Fourth, the controller system. In general fantasy systems, the strong are in power, but in the Imperial Clan, the top leader is not necessarily the most powerful person. The person in power of the Imperial Clan is the Holy Lord. Such people usually stay in the Beidou Ancient Star Territory, so their cultivation is generally not very high. For example, in the original work, the leaders of the Imperial Clan are all Immortals. As a holy master, cultivation is not a necessity. Even if you are a great saint, if you have a simple mind after taking power and act whenever you disagree, then the imperial clan will be wiped out in less than three years. However, even if you are a weak person in the Immortal Stage, you can maintain your sense and be able to deal with the situation. Issue the most correct orders at the right time and strive for the greatest benefit for your tribe. That is a qualified holy master. The cultivation level can be low, but the brain must be good. If the cultivation level is talented, you can go up, but the brain... For example, how good can the brain of Douzhan Saint Emperor be? So this thing really depends on the person, and is more valuable than strong cultivation. However, generally becoming a Holy Lord requires a lot of sacrifice. In the era of unsealing the Great Dao, or in a place with a good environment, you can perfectly tap your potential. But if you stay in a ghost place like Beidou, you can only ask for blessings. Like the Holy Lord of the Ji family, he can use the imperial soldiers to go to other ancient stars, practice for eighteen hundred years, and become a saint, but , he left, and the operation of the Ji family came to a standstill. For the sake of the clan, he had to stay, give up his strong future, and could only be a second Immortal. This was undoubtedly very sad, but the Holy Lord was a necessary and key figure. The Imperial Formation was first, the Imperial Soldiers were second, the Emperor's background was third, and the qualified Holy Lord was the fourth. Everything else could be missing, but these four were indispensable. Fifth, the foundation system, first of all, the imperial soldiers and the imperial formation, are the ultimate backup left by the emperor for future generations, and secondly, the former followers of the emperor. Those people's realms include great saints and quasi-emperors. The protagonist's guardian Tai Yao is the follower of the former Nirvana Heavenly Lord, and then They are some old masters of their own, with self-proclaimed background. Among these people are great saints, and maybe even quasi-emperors. In addition, there are also hundreds of thousands of years of looting from the great emperor and his descendants, such as powerful weapon training materials, big and small medicine kings and other divine objects that can extend life. They are all very precious. Finally, there is the seal. The ancient geniuses who have been sealed, starting from the emperor's son, have seven and eight forbidden seals, and will appear when necessary. Generally speaking, their seals have the emperor's instructions or external factors in them, which are very complicated. When the imperial clan generally needs them to play the leading role (the younger generation of masters is seriously lacking, such as this In the first generation of the Ji family, Ji Haoyue was a waste, Ji Ziyue's child was too serious-minded, and the rest were all dead, so the Ji family sent an ancient genius to assist Ji Zi). These people are often the last hope of an imperial family, and they are all smashed. If they don't succeed, they will be benevolent. It is a huge bet.
To be honest, the author's malice towards the Black Emperor and the Ji family can be seen through the screen. I hope this will not happen again in the future. The author's position has become biased (I seriously suspect that the author is seeking personal revenge)
Remember to torture Ye Fan more. This person is very annoying. Let's not talk about the double standards. He is an enemy after all. It's okay to go too far. The human and imperial clan who attacked him actually let him go. Anyway, I despise this guy.
Afraid of this or that, the author would just go back and find a job in a factory.
Let me ask you, do you think you want a female protagonist? Recommend if you want
I want to know why the protagonist has such natural hostile behavior towards Ye Fan? Fighting for the throne? That's completely unnecessary. In the original work, Ye Fan originally achieved enlightenment against heaven when there was the Golden Crow Emperor in the world. Therefore, it doesn't matter to Ye Fan whether there is someone who proves the emperor, as long as he attains enlightenment before Ye Fan becomes enlightenment against heaven. After the Great Emperor is seeking his own transformation, there is no need to be hostile. Besides, knowing that Ye Fan's future achievements include the Immortal Realm and the strange ethnic group, are you still hostile? And you said the protagonist is afraid of death? Are you afraid of death and still don't have a good relationship with Mark? Are you still trying to steal other people's opportunities? I can't understand. And as a character from the Mythical Age, the Nine Secrets are not lacking, right? They also have imperial weapons, emperor scriptures, and talents, so they are so good?
Ryoma was too dissatisfied. Every time I saw Ryoma's part, the protagonist was as lowly as a dog. He was scolded, kicked and kicked. It felt too lowly and unbearable. The unity of the Holy Spirit Clan was not like this. Ryoma could be said to have insulted the Emperor and the Emperor in disguise. As a result, future generations watched like this, in front of their children. You scolded me, the protagonist is just like a normal person, he is too cheap, at least teach him a lesson, and in the end, he is still an ancestor, and it is said to be the unity of the Holy Spirit. In the original book, Ye Fan killed so many Holy Spirits, I remember that this dragon horse is Ye Fan's henchman, isn't this just a 25-year-old boy, if he doesn't kill him directly, he won't lick it either
You are not as good as those who lick Ye Hei. Ye Hei will not accept a lot of help from you and still insult you. Prince Ryoma Tian receives your help and relies on your resources, but he also points his finger in your face and threatens you. Your imperial soldiers are also dead. They watch you being bullied and your father is scolded...
What a native who knows the plot should do is to unite those who can become immortal emperors and survive together in the end. Are you trying to seize opportunities everywhere with the intention of relying on your family to quell the weird ones?
The more I watch, the more skewed the protagonist's position becomes. What the protagonist is doing now is not much different from the source of darkness. It's just that he is the protagonist of this book.
This fanfic is really well written. I always felt that the friends around the protagonist in the original novel were of low character and disgusting.
I'm surprised that time travel so early, I don't want to desperately follow the immortal path of the mortal world, and be sealed to the later generations. In the later stage, Ye Fan and others broke the timeline to find Huang for help, but imagine how difficult it will be for them in the later stage. Personally, I feel that the protagonist will not live long like this.
The author doesn't like the characters in the original book, so why don't you still like it? Why are you writing fan fiction? You write your own book. Why are you creating a whole family of characters in someone else's book? The Holy Spirit is just a bunch of rubbish and has lived for so many lives, but has the result changed at all? The restricted areas are still the same, and there are probably a few more Dark Lords. It's a waste of food. As long as the Holy Spirit is fine, nothing else matters. This thing will be surrendered in the end.
Not suitable for having a brain
1. While doubting the traveler's memory about Zhetian, confirm this thing and confirm that thing, but I firmly believe in the opportunities related to Ye Fan and have never doubted it. If a story is false, shouldn't the protagonist be the easiest to be falsified? 2. Set a strong background, but it will become a background board when encountering the original work. Being tormented by dragons and horses in Kunlun was of no use, going to Zishan without the imperial soldiers for protection and suffering a loss, going to the descendants of Yuan Tianshi who feared the saint Yuan Tianshi with the quasi-emperor... There are too many self-contradictions. I want to write about being a proud man of heaven, but I dare not touch the timeline.
I'm a little confused. After knowing the plots of the three books through time travellers, and knowing the road to immortality and the burial plateau and darkness that need to be faced, the protagonist actually chose to declare himself until Ye Fan was born? Say that the protagonist is afraid of death and wants to do something secretly, so he shouldn't start practicing at the beginning of the plot. The cause and effect of the trio is so big, wouldn't it be over once they are involved? Why should he just find a suitable time to be born, become an emperor first without too much danger, and then embark on the path of mortal immortals? Then wouldn't it be too easy to slap Wu Shi ruthless man to death when he was young? Must we all follow the plot? You obviously want to be a villain, but you don't dare to deviate from the original work and write your own plot. It's quite awkward.
Damn it, I suddenly remembered something. In the dark turmoil, the Supreme Beings leave their seeds behind, and it seems that they are killing those who have accomplished cultivation 🙂