Douluo: Starting from Shrek Dropping Out of School

My evaluation is that the writing is okay, but the settings are too elaborate and there are too many explanations, which makes it boring. On the surface, the genocide by the evil soul master has greatly changed the mind, and coupled with the conventional system, the plot can be opened reasonably. As of now, it can still be read as an ordinary excellent fanfic without genre. Later, Xiao Xuan and Xiao Yan are inexplicably introduced into one body and three souls. Compared with Xiao Yan and Xiao Xuan shaped by Tudou, the protagonist of this book seems extremely mediocre. Since one body and three souls have been introduced to explain the problem of strength, why do we avoid mentioning another question, what is a system? Since the protagonist's power comes from three souls in one body, why is it given by the system? Originally, I turned a blind eye to the obvious cheating of the system, but now that you want to put it on the table, what's your explanation? No. Revealed? Neither. Finally, a little selfishly, I will always like Qian Renxue. Overall, it was a blast to write and very interesting.

It seems reasonable, but it also reveals that it is unreasonable. After reading more than forty chapters, the author gave me the impression that it is moderate but also tends to abuse Tang San. —— First of all, there is the issue of timeline. From birth to admission to Shi Da Ke College, the author directly skipped this timeline. There are many other authors who have written more than a hundred chapters before this. Therefore, the entire book will be relatively short. But there is a system, the plug-in is Doupo's Qinglian Earth Heart Fire, and the second martial spirit can even be the Taixu Ancient Dragon. The system means you can play Zhutianliu, and the Dou Po cheat means you can play Dou Po World. With the two added together, it is completely possible to clear the God Realm dungeon and then the World Breaking dungeon. That's enough space. The key is to be reasonable. There is a system and Qinglian's heart fire. If you don't fight and break, you will be sorry for these two cheats. Then the problem comes again. If we really want to fight and fight, the single female protagonist cannot be played, and the tragic characters cannot be solved. Qian Renxue, Bibi Dong, Little Doctor Fairy, and Yun Yun are the four tragic goods. So, if you don't go through the Dou Po dungeon, even if you go to God Realm, the overall length will be very small. After leaving the Dou Po dungeon, the single heroine failed by herself and played herself to death. This is the first one that I think is unreasonable. —— Then there is the second unreasonable question, about Dugu Yan Let me talk about why I feel that the author is a moderate school, because some who tortured Tang San more cruelly poached Dugu Yan so that he could directly destroy Lan Dian later. Because Lan Dian has Yu Xiaogang, many readers have a very low affinity for this camp. In the recently updated Douluo fanfics, no one was born in the Lan Dian camp, and the probability of Lan Dian being wiped out is also very high in the Douluo fanfics. But now the protagonist has been cheated by Dugu Yan, but she has been attacked by Yu Tianheng, and Yu Tianheng has a better relationship with the master. I think the author's setting is to eliminate Yu Xiaogang, give the unsuspecting Dugu Yan to Yu Tianheng, and let Yu Tianheng take charge of Lan Dian in the later period. But you worshiped Juhuaguan again, and you are already half a member of Wuhun Palace. Wuhun Palace is going to destroy the three sects again. Because of the relationship between Dugu Yan and Yu Tianheng, Wuhun Palace destroyed Lan Dian, and Dugu Bo was more or less likely to take action, but the protagonist was half of Wuhun Palace, so there was an overall conflict. Unless you can make the Wuhun Palace immortal blue lightning, but this is more troublesome, with a lot of problems. The relationship between Dugu Yan and Yu Tianheng, and because the protagonist is half of the Wuhundian camp, there are too many variables that can be introduced, and if one is not controlled well, it will overturn. Some Douluo fans just accept Dugu Yan directly and destroy Lan Dian in the later stage. It is simple and crude, and there are not so many variables. But this book has a single female protagonist, and Dugu Yan has already been conquered in the early stage, so there is nothing she can do. The recruitment of Dugu Yan in those harem streams is more of a compromise with the plot, just like the Qibao Glazed Sect. This is the second thing that seems unreasonable to me. There are really too many hidden mines. —— Then Qibao Glazed Sect As mentioned before, the inclusion of Dugu Yan in the harem is a result of compromising to the plot, because not compromising can lead to too many variables, not to mention that the protagonist is half of the Wuhun Temple camp, after all, they all worship Juhuaguan as their master. Ning Rongrong in the harem stream is also the result of half-hearted compromise with the plot. There is no way, there are too many scenes in the original work, and the network of connections behind it is too wide. If you don't bring him over, you will become Tang San's enemy. So she always used something to polish off the temper of the eldest lady, and then indirectly conquered her. The overall plot was not much, and in the end she conquered it by herself. With one set, the Qibao Glazed Sect is almost your own, and it can be implemented peacefully in the later stage. As for Oscar and Ning Rongrong teaming up for CP, forget it. In the original work, Grandmaster and the others used Tang San's talent Ning Fengzhi. At the same time, Grandmaster and the others knew the relationship between Tang San and Xiao Wu. In the end, the obstacle to Oscar's strategy for Ning Rongrong was gone. Right now, Ning Rongrong doesn't have a favorable impression of Shitadake Academy. In the future, it will be a good idea if Ning Fengzhi doesn't let anyone take over and go back. At present, the plot has entered into dealing with Ning Rongrong's plot, and I don't know how the author will arrange it. —— On the whole, accepting Ning Rongrong and Dugu Yan is a compromise with the plot. There are too many variables that these two characters can introduce. If we want to resolve it peacefully, the first thing to do is the soul extermination operation of Wuhun Palace. This problem is even more problematic. How can we get the two leaders Bibi Dong and Qian Daoliu to agree? This is already a regional copy. In my opinion, there are really many potential landmines. The plot is okay, but because of the single female protagonist, there are too many landmines. —— The problem of the first chapter of admission to Shi Da Ke Academy and the overall plot being too short The problem of system + Dou Po plug-in and whether to go to Dou Po World to extend the plot Already worshiping the chrysanthemum monster as a teacher is considered half a martial arts The people of the Soul Palace and how to deal with the problems of Dugu Bo, Dugu Yan, Yu Tianheng and the Blue Lightning Tyrant Dragon Sect in the later stage There is also Ning Rongrong, a big variable in the plot, interspersed in it So it feels very confusing to me. It is reasonable, but it is also unreasonable. It's really difficult to write a single heroine. There are so many variables to consider, and one of them might cause the whole story to overturn. Although the harem story is a bit mindless, it can solve some plot variables unintentionally. Finally, I am really curious about how the author solves these landmines.

Speechless, Lan Yin Cao admits that those with useless martial souls who cannot be cultivated can be admitted. After all, Huozhong can cultivate to the soul king, but he can't? For the sake of plot?

Like the title, a new author who writes about Douluo fandom didn't know it would be so popular. I am so flattered that I am not someone with a background and money to buy hot searches. Furthermore, the author's writing power is limited and he can only describe the world in his mind as much as possible. If you think it's good, readers can give it a vote. If you think it's not good, you can just abandon the book. There is no need to use all kinds of abuse. To put it bluntly, writing Douluo is everyone's second creation. It is more important to make up for the regrets in the heart. There is no need to be a bit venomous or a bit venomous. Just leave a message if you have any opinions. The author will accept reasonable criticism. In addition, the author of the system popularity calculation also asked the editor. I don't know what the situation is. I hope you won't worry about it. If I can really buy hot searches, why would I write fan fiction?

Qinglian Earth Heart Fire

She defected to Shrek from the beginning, but Shrek refused, and then he was slapped in the face again. It was too vicious. He obviously had a system and was better than Tang San, but he still wanted to hug her. The protagonist was too cowardly. If he had a system, he should have snatched the heroine, tortured Tang San, and hugged the goddess of the divine world. But then he got slapped in the face with a counterattack, ugh.

This book is weird. . . It's actually pretty good among Douluo fans. . . Douluo colleagues are just like the late Ming Dynasty, they are worse than each other. . .

After reading forty or fifty chapters, at first the setting was not consistent with the original work, but after reading it it was okay, and after reading more than fifty chapters, I felt like this. . . The writing is too verbose, and it affects the perception very much.

I've read less than ten chapters and it's very weird. It seems to be a reasonable and fair description but also guides the readers' thoughts step by step. Shrek's behavior of only cultivating monster students is disgusting, but the signs of forced intelligence reduction by the admissions office are very serious. At the first threshold, he refused to enter the school on the grounds that "the fire spirit cannot break through the soul king and will affect the school's reputation in the future." Don't forget, the main test at the beginning is whether the soul power level has been reached. How can the spirit be verified by people like Zhao Wuji? The admissions office soul master you portray here is somewhat dark and selfish.

Is Bibi Dong the female supporting character? ? ? That would look boring

It's a rubbish article about leveling. I had to force myself to level 35 after more than 20 chapters, and even reached the Ice and Fire Eyes, but I only got the fourth soul ring in the 190th chapter. A sewer upgrade article like Douluo has a shaky foundation.

Grandma's, I was level 30 at the beginning, and I haven't gotten the soul ring yet at chapter 89!

All kinds of strange, reasonable and unreasonable ones, including soul beast names, skill names, martial spirits, etc., Can be submitted!

When I went to Shrek, I felt that I had the talent and hard work of Tsinghua University, paid the money of a noble college, and received the education of New Oriental. 🤓 You are a talented person, but whether you go to the job market or not depends on how hard you work.

The scene of dealing with Shrek in the Star Dou Forest was a bit delayed, especially the protagonist's ability to answer questions. I was afraid that his next sentence would be like "The plan to kill Tang San was decided by Tang Yin." It was a bit too much, and it took several chapters to describe it.

It feels uncomfortable. Although it is a refreshing article, it is like a rat droppings dropped into a pot of meat. It doesn't matter if I eat it or not, it makes me very irritable.

To be honest, Shrek's setting is not a good thing in the first place. Let's not talk about how many geniuses have been cheated in the past. When Dou Yi was recruiting civilian students, almost all the seven monsters except Oscar had the strongest backgrounds in the entire Douluo Continent. Even Ma Hongjun was a direct disciple of Owl. When you arrive in Dou Er, you must have a letter of recommendation from the city lord before you can take the Shrek Academy exam. Is this a civilian college? Although Wuhun Palace is not very good, it has also helped civilians awaken, and it has also helped civilian soul masters overcome the early difficulties. There is no force on those who are unwilling to join Wuhun Palace. From Dou 1 to Dou 4, Shrek Academy has always used cheating to compete, and they even claim that this is part of their strength. For the honor of Shrek, Dou Er even showed up and asked Jiang Nannan to sell herself to save her mother. Dou Yi said not to kill innocent soul beasts indiscriminately. Tang San killed many soul beasts to do justice for heaven. The soul beasts in the Colosseum, which totaled a small gram, could it be that the soul beasts ran in on their own and used century-old soul beasts and thousand-year soul beasts to conduct actual combat assessments. How many innocent soul beasts among the students died at the hands of these students. This is how to protect the soul beasts and not kill the soul beasts indiscriminately.

If you don't want to get the soul ring, you just forcefully suppress the level and it won't improve. It's really poisonous.

Come on For no reason, it just disgusts Tang San

I thought you were normal, why are you always like this? Everyone is so outrageous. Is there any ordinary martial spirit? The soul rings are ordinary, some are not that big.

Shui Bing'er's martial arts fusion skill was a bit annoying, and Zhu Zhuyun did this kind of plot later, so I didn't really want to watch it.

If you want a character, you can set up the soul ring skills and basic personality, etc. Just don't be too exaggerated...

There is a big question, why is Ju Douluo still at level 96? I remember in the original work, wasn't he always at level 96? Why are you still like this after eating grass jelly?

The protagonist's second martial spirit is: Dragon and Phoenix Spirit This martial spirit is: a dragon and a cyan phoenix phantom, or the original martial spirit. I haven't watched Douluo II or Douluo III, so I find it awkward to watch. Is there really such a setting?

"The Three Kingdoms: I Have a Game Simulator" readers can take a look!

Why is the Dragon and Phoenix martial spirit the original martial spirit?

Did someone else write it? Why did the fight suddenly break down?

Study hard and make progress every day. There is a lot of room for improvement in this essay.

Woke up? Another protagonist, or a dark side protagonist!

It just so happened that it was time for me to get my second martial soul ring. Now that it's here, let's stay and become a stepping stone on my growth path. Calm(;¬_¬)