Ke Xue's Killer Queen

As is common with most fan fiction writers, there is a lack of description when characters appear. For example, in Chapter 5, Kudo Shinichi only gave a name when he appeared, without describing his appearance. Although we all know who he is. But opportunities like this to increase the reader's impression are ignored by the author. It makes the characters not vivid enough. When a character appears for the first time, his clothes, his behavior, and what he is doing are the best opportunities to leave a deep impression on the readers. This is the technique of mature writers. Please don't ignore the character's portrayal just because it's a fan. You must know that the essence of a novel is not the setting, but whether the characters are vivid. Without vivid characters, the work is stagnant. Comics do not need to describe the character's appearance in words, because they can solve everything with just one picture, but novels cannot do that. The focus of novels is words. If you cannot use words to make the characters come alive, and instead copy the writing style of comics, readers will read it in an awkward, abrupt, and confusing way. As you said, Ke Nan's work was written many years ago, and the protagonist is okay. If some unpopular supporting characters appear with only their names, how do readers want to understand this character? Specifically to read comics. This is a common problem among fan authors.

I feel like the protagonist is described as very weak. He can't be dealt with by himself, and he can easily escape from his hands. There is no sense of oppression at all. The use of the substitute ability is very poor. Obviously the substitute ability and the panel are very strong. A female kidnapper can easily injure the protagonist with a pistol. Ordinary pistol bullets, Killer Queen can fly away with her fists. It is also said that Gin's sixth sense predicts the first bomb and jumps out of the car in time. You can also see that the first bomb is purple on top, you know. . . It can only be said that the use of the stand-in ability is poor and the weakening is too severe. I feel that the greatest use of the stand-in is to draw comics. The other settings are okay. I hope the follow-up will be more exciting

Why do you want to use a man as the heroine? It's so perverted.

The writing feels so-so, mainly because there are obvious problems with the character design. I have been forcibly imitating Yoshikage Kira. It feels like a tiger cannot be an anti-dog. I want to imitate, but I can't be the same as Kira. The character of the character itself is also covered up. It is too high or too low There is also a problem with the plot design. If you directly join the gang, what if a dozen other people have guns? Obviously a case of imbecility

If possible, please be sure to make the protagonist's image closer to Kira Yoshikage

When the protagonist writes comics, he just reports his ability as a stand-in, which is equivalent to directly telling others about his ability as a stand-in. I don't understand where the protagonist's confidence comes from? So boldly telling others about my stand-in ability, and I feel that the protagonist's stand-in ability is completely inconsistent with the panel attributes. I don't like the setting aspect very much, and I can't say the rest. After all, I really don't watch it very much, but there are some things that you can see what happens later just by looking at the beginning. This feeling is like going to the toilet and it will smell bad at first, but after using it for a long time, it will not be that smelly. The first part does not suit my wishes, and I will not lower my psychological standards later.

I always feel that the enemy is getting farther and farther away from Ke Xue after he has a double 😅 I thought it was about solving crimes with superpowers or committing crimes with superpowers, relying on superpowers to compete with the black organization or Conan FBI, but now it turns out that it is a confrontation between superpowers. It's decided. Although it's a battle of wits and courage, it doesn't have the flavor of science anymore. It's completely a set of urban powers with Conan's skin Since the world is a Conan world, I think it's more to my taste to use Conan's world view as the main one and the substitute ability as the supplement.

I thought the protagonist was the one who committed the crime, but I didn't expect that he was the one who solved the crime.

I saw Chapter 48 and ran away. It feels like the protagonist is about to become another person, and he is always being shot, which makes it uncomfortable to watch. Maybe it's because I haven't watched JOJO? Is this the case for Yoshikage Kira in the original novel?

That is, if you have a self-created substitute, you can leave a message to me! Alias: Hexagonal panel: Ability explanation: Use your brains! ! !

The writing is so messy, I feel like only the author himself can understand it.

Damn it, within fifty chapters, the protagonist was shot several times. The author can do it without rubbing the needle. This is the most unique Conan novel I have read.

To be honest, the biggest problem in writing JOJO in Conan is that the combat power is too strong. And I don't know what the author's idea is. Is it a pure red side or a black side? If it is a free agent who favors the red side, it feels like killing too much.

The setting of the stand-in messenger who travels to the world of Conan is very attractive, but the setting where the insect arrows appear not to improve the protagonist's abilities but to add other people to have awakened stand-ins is really not a good choice. After all, this makes the writing difficult for the author. Fan work is like adding a bright color to a solid color cloth, but if you continue to add more colors, it will become mixed. I hope the author has enough control. There are too few good Conan fanfics, but don't give up or give up 🤝

Oh, I like jojo so much

You said it was good at the beginning, but it doesn't matter that his character becomes more and more like Yoshikage Kira. The key is that his experience is the same as Yoshikage Kira's, being abused all the time when everything doesn't go his way? That's a bit too much, anyway, he is always hurt in a world without demons.

The writing feels childish. And this introduction made Chef Jo lose interest after seeing it. . . It is recommended to modify it and not include the last paragraph.

The protagonist is getting more and more drawn, and then I feel that some details in the last few chapters have not been drawn out.

I remember Doctor Honest is a man? He can't be gay!

Kira Yoshikage? What a tongue-twisting name. There are two Jis in your name. I will call you Jiji from now on...

I feel like Killer Queen is not a bit weak as the protagonist. With such high precision, why don't you bring a toothpick with you? Anyway, every battle is basically out of reach and impossible to hit, and what can I say, the wither and pierce attack has been weakened. Although it has the ability to shoot, I feel that it has been weakened. The function of the wither and pierce attack itself is a mobile bomb, and now this bomb can shoot, so the key movement will be It has been weakened, and how should I put it, the malicious feeling seems to have been weakened. Under normal circumstances, after using the new attack once, it will automatically lock, and then automatically entangle, and will not stop moving until it kills the opponent. Today, when I get to the protagonist, I will always be stuck by something or on the way here, you are outrageous! And regarding Mu Da's stand-in, you have good abilities in all cat grass types! Isn't it good to directly create invisible wall-penetrating air bombs? The remote capabilities of the entire space have not been improved, and active mobile communication is still a big problem, absolutely!

😅 I can't stand it anymore. The protagonists are shot in various ways. It seems that Jojo's fate is that everyone is shot The author says goodbye to the readers in the chapters. If you don't know, you think it's a free book An incredibly honest original work. It is clearly stated that he is a man and the author insists on changing his gender As long as there are readers who question this, bye bye daily I personally suggest that the author tell me his father's name and I will make him a mother-in-law character one day 🤭

Here, give me some cum

Through honesty, we can tell that the author is gay, and he is also a gay who likes Xiao Nanniang.

It seemed that no one was watching. It doesn't matter whether I order it or not.

Damn it, it's a scam (ﾟДﾟ)

A new book has been released. It is a special group portrait and half behind the scenes. I hope everyone will come and support me.

It's so outrageous, the eunuch wants to kill him as soon as he finds it

It has been ranked first in the update list for three consecutive days

I came here to listen to novels, not to listen to your introduction to novels.