I Made a Copy in Naruto World

It is still necessary to have a book that is worth a million copies. It is true that feelings cannot be eaten, but if the data is wrong and the book is cut directly, the difference will continue to be worse, because there is no progress at all, and it will just keep opening and cutting books in an endless loop. If your grades are really bad and you can't continue writing, you can change the day to two chapters in three days or even three chapters in a week. It's slower and better than being a eunuch. Nothing can be accomplished without training. If you want to make money by writing a book, early investment is essential. I would rather write a book for several years than write it in a few months, wasting time and not getting exercise. Thank you.

In fact, this kind of theme can have no protagonist at all, or the protagonist can be world consciousness or something like that.

Isn't it a copy? How can it appear directly in the real world? Is this also called a copy?

Orochi Princess

Every time an Uchiha is encountered on the battlefield, they will run away. Tobirama has been controlled by the three Magatama. The Raikage has no power to resist in front of the Eternal Eye. Danzo's Mangekyo will also be affected in front of the two pillars. Kisame is even played in front of Itachi. The author can think about why Uchiha is feared.

If this book does not have more than 2 million words, there is no need to appear. By the way, water numbers cannot be included.

Is this obviously an invasion by alien monsters? Where did you get the copy?

In fact, Tsunade was born in the 10th year of Konoha. When Hashirama died, it was the 14th year of Konoha. Tsunade was already 4 years old. Tobirama came to power in the same year. The following year, World War II broke out and the third generation came to power. In 2019, Tsunade was already 9 years old. The author set the age as 4 and a half 😥😥

Why hasn't it been updated yet? Did it collapse again?

The writing is very good, but the main character is superfluous and I have no desire to continue reading.

Monsters siege the city, just monsters siege the city, let alone dungeons. If you kill hundreds or thousands of people at once, if you do this a few more times, Konoha Village will be gone. Population does not grow out of leeks in a few days

After reading the introduction, Bucky would be seeking death if he didn't step up his efforts to invade Kirigakure. This is the place with the most water escapes.

Hehe

You can go to those book owners to promote it. Your book is above average in terms of ideas and words.

What you wrote is very similar to a book I have read before. It seems to be called One Piece: The Strongest Chaos.

Can you not add those racial values ​​to make people think that you are just talking about the number of words? You can briefly mention it or introduce it in detail when you want to present it😅😅

Naruto's power system is good but the world view is too small.

The time is too early, it doesn't seem interesting

I always feel a little awkward, but I don't know how to describe it. 🤫

I'll make a new post and express my views again. First of all, I think your dungeon setting can be changed (because the dungeon described in your novel is too simple, only monsters attack the city). I think you can create a city or a village or a secret forest place where things can be released, and place monsters from other worlds in it. At this time, the number of monsters can be increased, and then you can assign tasks to them, such as wreaking havoc in the ninja world and defending the city from being attacked by ninjas. Just like a strategy game, there is a lot of room for manipulation. Of course, you can also turn a certain place in the ninja world into the birthplace of monsters, and then assign tasks to them. Of course, for dungeons, it's best to add some plots to your dungeon, just like an adventure game like Dungeon & Fighter. Rewards and other things can also be done where you manifest them. The reward method is just like in the game, so that it won't give people that abrupt feeling. Of course, the author, you can also study the novel Konoha: Infinite Clone and arrange for some people from another world to cause trouble in the ninja world. You can create a few more big events, enrich the plot, and let stories from other worlds be staged in the ninja world. (Wouldn't this make the story more exciting, and there are many things that can be learned from. For example, make a ninja version of the Holy Grail War, Resident Evil, etc.) There is also the issue of the timeline, which can completely skip these times with major events. (After all, the timeline is too early to write, because the main story of Naruto revolves around Naruto and Sasuke.) Also, the protagonist can also find a reason to fake death and escape. Anyway, he is hiding behind the scenes and being the mastermind behind the world. Another point is that the combat power must not be too low. The combat power of the novel Konoha: Infinite Clone is a bit low, but it is not a big problem. It is just a bit regretful to finish it hastily. It may also be a problem of combat power. Therefore, the combat power of your novel must not be too low (do not be too different from the original work's combat power). It is best to make more references. Another point, the author, you can try to downplay the ordinary people in the ninja world. After all, the ordinary people in the ninja world are not described in detail in the original work, and can only be imagined. (In the comics, when Jiraiya fought with Payne, Payne once said that he would wipe out human beings in units of 100 million in an instant, making mankind feel afraid and making all countries feel pain. There are also the almost endless bandits and pirates, and the huge area of ​​the ninja world. It is roughly guessed that the population of the ninja world is more than 100 million. There may be hundreds of millions or more. There are also various details in the original work, such as armored vehicles, self-propelled artillery, pistols and other weapons; there are also TVs, vending machines, refrigerators, microwave ovens, various experimental instruments, and modern or modern items such as wires and air conditioners everywhere. From these, it can be inferred that the technological level of the ninja world is not much different from reality. Maybe the technological tree is a bit skewed, but in terms of productivity, it is enough to support such a large population). You can also refer to other Naruto fan fiction here. That's all I can think of for now, and I will make a new post if I think of anything else. (One more thing, I am a hard-working student party, and it is quite difficult in terms of finance and time. I won't go into more details. I understand everything.) Oh, one more thing, the novel you wrote is very important to me. It's not bad, but it's just a little less interesting. Anyway, it's still readable to me (one more thing, I found that this book lacks a lot of comments, and some comments appear and disappear from time to time. I have also encountered this situation, and I won't say more. It's quite hard for me to write so many words.). Finally, I hope the author will keep updating novels and write better and better. Ps: What Pain said to Jiraiya is in Chapter 374 of the Naruto manga. I have seen all the other things in previous comments. It was a column about the technology system in Naruto published by Bilibili up Alice Corn.

I took a quick look at it and felt that the Fire City section was quite unreasonable. Of course there are other places I will explain one by one. First of all, the army in the City of Fire is too small. As the capital of the Land of Fire, a place where the supreme ruler is located, and a symbol of the entire country, there are only 5,000 troops, which is not as many as the ninjas of the Konoha sect during the Third War. Also, when the army was fighting the goblin, it felt like a gangster fight. There was no reasonable cooperation and no reasonable arrangement. I didn't see what other legions should show in their battles. Also, in this book, I feel that the combat power is a little strange. In the previous chapter about Konoha's rat-whackers, Konoha's ninja system was not taken into account, and those family ninjas did not come out to show off (such as the fire escape of the Uchiha clan, the Byakugan of the Hyuga clan, The parasitic insects of the Aburame clan can easily kill those rat men. And the third generation of Hokage, a ninjutsu doctor who is proficient in various escape techniques, feels that the part where White Fang's father goes into battle is very reluctant). I won't talk about the 5,000 troops in the subsequent section of the Fire City (too few). There were not many powerful ninjas to protect the Daimyo and the Fire City. During the battle, they did not use very ordinary but very powerful ninjutsu props like detonating charms. The performance of the 5,000 troops was also very poor (sorry, I'm going to kill them again here). As an army to protect the capital, they really failed. Also, the author, the combat power displayed by your plug-in feels quite strange. The Skaven and Goblins did not show a complete system. They felt like slightly stronger beasts. Their combat coordination, spell matching, lineup matching and professional matching were all problematic. They felt not as good as the Qiuqiu people in Genshin Impact. At least the Qiuqiu people could do elemental coordination (Sorry, I mentioned it to Genshin Impact.). In addition, the Qiuqiu people have systems (the Qiuqiu people's crossbowmen, thugs, priests, warriors, and throwers have various subdivisions) and coordination (priests, crossbowmen, and throwers all know how to cooperate with thugs and warriors to defeat travelers.) There is also the overall background of Naruto. I know that there are a lot of bugs in comics, but as a fan author, if you want to write a good fan, you must find a way to solve those bugs. Instead of discarding many of the original things (of course you can discard some insignificant parts, but there are many things that are details and indispensable backgrounds), otherwise it will lose the feeling of being a fan the further you write it. Okay, I have said so much at once, I hope the author can write better and better, come on!

The book is my favorite type and I am looking forward to it. But a little too little

By the way, aren't group portraits all about male protagonists and female protagonists? Why do you have a female protagonist and a male protagonist? Do I have any misunderstandings about group portraits? Isn't the core of group portraits that every character can be a protagonist? Everyone can be killed. Isn't reading group portraits all about the collision of different systems? What can you do with a protagonist to limit the world view? Do you want to see the protagonist pretending to be a slap in the face? It's completely unnecessary. I really want to see the protagonist. Why should I watch group portraits?

When I read about the Saints, I felt that it would be difficult to end it. The Bronze Saints must be set to completely torture ninjas below Shadow, and the system of arranging poisonous milk powder is more likely to collapse... What a pity.

Isn't the world line too early? Naruto has no real protagonist.