Siheyuan: Qin Huairu Breaks Off Her Engagement at the Beginning

The writing is too messy, and a lot of the verbose text is filled with numbers, which makes the reading experience very poor.

To be honest, Qin Huairu could kill all the women in the entire TV series with one hand!

Chapter 2: I was drunk even on a motorcycle. Is there no threshold for writing a book now?

In the 1960s, there were no gas stoves in China. Only his family had one. How old are you, the author? You probably just took off your diapers.

What did you write? ! The protagonist doesn't have a goal. You should get promoted, get rich, and marry a wife. You should have the same goal. You have spent more than a hundred chapters like a passerby, and you don't know what happened.

Qin Huairu never abandoned his children or his mother-in-law. If someone is hiding from the wind and rain, how can he be exposed? Everything Qin does is for his children, and all other thoughts have to give way in front of his children. As a mother who cares for her children, I don't know the psychology of someone who keeps writing bad things about Qin Huairu.

Light all day long, light

There were water meters in that era that disgusted me. They were all public use in those days. The main character was too pretentious. He was bullied by a fool and had his life stolen. He still felt like he was in control of everything.

Jia Dongxu should have been the head of the family when he was alive, and Qin Huairu's charming skills should have lived well before Jia Dongxu died.

What are you writing about? You have incorrect views, harm others and do not benefit yourself. You are neither a good person nor an evil person. Do you know what you are writing?

After reading Chapter 177, I really can't stand it anymore. It's so poisonous, I wanted to be a divine farmer. He tried the poison on his own body, but he was poisoned and died.

The first chapter was too toxic and was withdrawn. When writing a book, at least check the information. Motorcycle tickets only began to appear in the 1980s. Before that, they were all supplied to the military and government departments. There are some other minor problems, but they are not as poisonous as this one.

This kind of book and the monthly pass must have been stolen by the author himself. , Let's not talk about motorcycles. Drive-thru food delivery in the 1960s. Too luxurious? And the first one is extremely poisonous. , How did he and Qin Huairu know each other since childhood? , And why is he short of daily necessities? ,

Are you writing a TV series? It's like adding a protagonist and watching a TV series. There is no sense of immersion at all.

The protagonist, a truck driver in a factory, had a motorcycle in the 1960s. Is it really that special? Next time, the protagonist's flying tool must be B2, awesome!

Catalog... Motorcycle ticket... Slip away

It's blinding to me that motorcycles were still available in the 1960s. It's hard to buy a motorcycle even if it's a bicycle. I'm afraid you're looking for death.