I Seek Immortality Across the Heavens

Don't you really ask me for help? I didn't even read a single scolding, and it took a hundred thousand words to show off my sharp edge,???? Please? Anyway, I'll run away first.

I have read the author's first book in its entirety. At that time, the sparse writing skills really made me uncomfortable, but this time I can clearly feel his improvement. Not many people can start out as great writers, but I saw the efforts of a newbie, and I also hope to witness the rise of a great writer.

I can't stand it, the tendency to lick dogs is too obvious! Wudiwen is still so aggrieved and tied up everywhere! Shuangwen is not like Shuangwen. It is passionate and cannot be written. What else is there to watch?

The collection of 20,000 yuan is a bit watery

On dog licking, it's the first time I've seen something so fresh and refined

400 Comments of three or four words, and they are all private

For the sake of punching power, every time a new character appeared, Wang Shisan would "shamelessly" get in touch with him, which really made him laugh to death.

The writing is good, stop writing and find a job in an electronics factory. A planet-level person becomes a god in Panlong? If you don't understand the Zhutianliu system, just look at what other people write. The four elements of Panlongli, earth, fire, water, and wind are transcendent. It means that Panlong's laws are absolutely no worse than Swallowing Starry Sky. Becoming a god with any kind of law is equivalent to analyzing one-sixth of the law of swallowing the stars, at least at the Domain Lord level. Panlong's world is small, and the main god and supreme god deliberately protect the plane. Maybe it suppresses the expression of power, but the essence is definitely not weak. Your God of War level is so wasteful.

What do you call Wang Shisan? Isn't it better to call him Wang B?

I came here from the last book. Congratulations on the new book.