Just talking about morality, right? Is it wrong to hide selfishness?
Can you live by being prominent? Do you deserve to die if you are born low?
Can the immortals in the sky take human life lightly? Can a mortal being in this world only kneel down and beg for mercy?
One punch creates a bright world, and one stroke paints a beautiful world.
I promise not to think about the virtues of heaven and earth on the first day of the new year, and not to learn from the four directions! Let's ask heaven and earth, what mistakes have been made throughout the ages?
There are many dangers and obstacles on the road, why not just smile and walk slowly.
[Traditional fairy tales, the early stage is long and there are many pits to be dug]
Reader comments
I'm desperate, I've already written 120,000 words. Maybe my writing is really bad. There are no recommendations, no favorites, no follow-up reading, not even smart recommendations. It's a bit sluggish, so I'll stick to it until it reaches 200,000 words. If there is still no recommendation by then, then you have no choice but to give up.
I don't know if you write a book to make money, but I can tell you clearly that few people who invest in new books are motivated by emotion, and those who do use up all the free investment, so your book must gradually adapt to the market. I don't ask you to make major changes. In fact, you have already pointed out the contradictions. If you make a small comment before it is put on the shelves, and if you make it more exciting when it is put on the shelves, your results will not be too bad. It will not only be exciting for readers, but also guaranteed to be profitable.
Questions that came to mind when reading Chapter 8. With Taoist Yan's cultivation, would Xu Qing, Xu Chu and Yi and two mortals be eavesdropping? I thought at first that Taoist Yan deliberately let them overhear, so as to give the protagonist a chance to survive. I also imagined later that Xu Qing begged and begged Taoist Master Yan in exchange for his life in the temple to take him to the first grade of junior high school. In the first year of junior high school, things changed a bit as mentioned in the introduction.
The writing is indeed very good, and I like this style of writing very much, but maybe because of the slow pace, the results don't seem to be very good. After all, most readers nowadays like fast pace and novice writing. Come on, author, be a god!
The writing is quite good, and the writing style is surprisingly good.
I feel like the results won't be very good. The writing technique is old-school, and it feels like I was reading books like Kunlun in Modern and Ancient Times. But it is not in line with the current fast-food reading habits. Unless the writing is good, the reputation is great, and it is getting better and better, this writing method will inevitably filter out only a small part of the target readers. And most of this small group are still reluctant to pay to read.
I suggest the author reconsider the plot. The writing is really good, but it just doesn't catch people. Once you put it down, you just put it down. Gives me a feeling that I know is good, but I just don't like it.
If you like it, you can click on the latest chapter every day, flip to the bottom, and contribute some follow-up reading. The starting point data is used to determine recommendations based on the amount of book reading. There are some books that I can't read enough, and I can't even recommend them. So don't keep books. If you can't get any recommendations after the Chinese New Year, you can only put them on the shelves and get perfect attendance. Sigh...
Suddenly I understand why some books disappear after I keep them!
Five-star recommendation, a rare book that only tells stories
To be honest, the beginning is very attractive and unexpected. . Looking forward to further development
The author's writing is very good, but the results on the fan list are really not very good, and there are not many followers. I don't know if the author can stick to it. Add
There is no flaw in the writing style, and the writing skills can show the profound background in the writing. This book is considered very good in terms of its subject matter, writing content and age.
It will be available for subscription on Friday, so hurry up if you want to invest.
I have been updating recently and I don't have time to read the book, so I didn't catch up on it. Please subscribe to the author and encourage me.
Author, your grades are dismal, you won't want to be a eunuch, right? ┐（─__─）┌
I'm desperate, I've already written 120,000 words. Maybe my writing is really bad. There are no recommendations, no favorites, no follow-up reading, not even smart recommendations. It's a bit sluggish, so I'll stick to it until it reaches 200,000 words. If there is still no recommendation by then, then you have no choice but to give up.
I don't know if you write a book to make money, but I can tell you clearly that few people who invest in new books are motivated by emotion, and those who do use up all the free investment, so your book must gradually adapt to the market. I don't ask you to make major changes. In fact, you have already pointed out the contradictions. If you make a small comment before it is put on the shelves, and if you make it more exciting when it is put on the shelves, your results will not be too bad. It will not only be exciting for readers, but also guaranteed to be profitable.
Questions that came to mind when reading Chapter 8. With Taoist Yan's cultivation, would Xu Qing, Xu Chu and Yi and two mortals be eavesdropping? I thought at first that Taoist Yan deliberately let them overhear, so as to give the protagonist a chance to survive. I also imagined later that Xu Qing begged and begged Taoist Master Yan in exchange for his life in the temple to take him to the first grade of junior high school. In the first year of junior high school, things changed a bit as mentioned in the introduction.
The writing is indeed very good, and I like this style of writing very much, but maybe because of the slow pace, the results don't seem to be very good. After all, most readers nowadays like fast pace and novice writing. Come on, author, be a god!
The writing is quite good, and the writing style is surprisingly good. I feel like the results won't be very good. The writing technique is old-school, and it feels like I was reading books like Kunlun in Modern and Ancient Times. But it is not in line with the current fast-food reading habits. Unless the writing is good, the reputation is great, and it is getting better and better, this writing method will inevitably filter out only a small part of the target readers. And most of this small group are still reluctant to pay to read. I suggest the author reconsider the plot. The writing is really good, but it just doesn't catch people. Once you put it down, you just put it down. Gives me a feeling that I know is good, but I just don't like it.
If you like it, you can click on the latest chapter every day, flip to the bottom, and contribute some follow-up reading. The starting point data is used to determine recommendations based on the amount of book reading. There are some books that I can't read enough, and I can't even recommend them. So don't keep books. If you can't get any recommendations after the Chinese New Year, you can only put them on the shelves and get perfect attendance. Sigh... Suddenly I understand why some books disappear after I keep them!
Five-star recommendation, a rare book that only tells stories
To be honest, the beginning is very attractive and unexpected. . Looking forward to further development
The author's writing is very good, but the results on the fan list are really not very good, and there are not many followers. I don't know if the author can stick to it. Add
There is no flaw in the writing style, and the writing skills can show the profound background in the writing. This book is considered very good in terms of its subject matter, writing content and age.
It will be available for subscription on Friday, so hurry up if you want to invest.
I have been updating recently and I don't have time to read the book, so I didn't catch up on it. Please subscribe to the author and encourage me.
Author, your grades are dismal, you won't want to be a eunuch, right? ┐（─__─）┌