I Can Modify the Item Time

To be honest, this book is pretty good. Logic, IQ, anti-routine, mature thinking, interesting cheats. The girl at the beginning didn't handle it well. (Essentially, logically and rationally, there is actually no problem with what the protagonist does. The problem is that the author wrote such a plot. Although it will not make the readers uncomfortable, it will not be very comfortable either) Then the content of the plot has changed too much. In the beginning, the protagonist was adventuring alone, but the real heroine suddenly appeared in the middle. A lot of the plot was about two individuals accompanying the adventure. Although the main plot was not lost at this time, I still felt that the style had changed too much. Then after I fell in love with this kind of companionship and fell in love and cultivated immortality, the two of them temporarily separated and started to take risks alone... It made me think about when my wife will come back every day 🤤 Finally, don't believe those who said in the comment area that the male protagonist is selfish, extreme, and fabricated facts. I will not post the specific evidence. Someone provided it below that comment and in the discussion area.

The writing is a bit very ugly 😰

The protagonist is a selfish villain. The first map in this book is "Wushan Town-Liu Family Boxing Gym". Liu Dahong, the owner of the gym, takes a fancy to the protagonist's "qualifications" and plans to recruit the protagonist as his wife and teach him the traditional internal martial arts "Rock Eagle Fist". The protagonist, who killed the gangsters in the previous article, obtained the internal strength "Opening and Healing Strength". When Liu Shao, the son of the owner of the museum, confessed to the protagonist, the protagonist buried the "Rock Eagle Fist" in his heart. He did not agree with the marriage with Liu Qianqian, the daughter of the owner of the museum, saying that he was an only child and did not want to marry into another family. However, Liu Dahong, the owner of the museum, is really optimistic about the protagonist and changes his wife into a daughter-in-law. The protagonist, using the excuse of asking his parents for their opinions, delays time. So, the protagonist goes home and changes his parents' memory. If you get married after the age of 20, you will definitely die. However, without a clear attitude, the protagonist took advantage of the attitude of Guanzhu Liu and his family, and "reluctantly" accepted "Iwa Eagle Fist" with "half push and half give". When he was determined in his heart that he would not marry Liu Qianqian, he lived in the host's house and used the host to teach him his experience. And he said: In the future, if the Liu family is wise, they will give them some benefits. Otherwise, don't blame the protagonist for being rude! Since the protagonist has successfully declined the marriage, why did he learn the Liu family's ancestral internal skill "Rock Eagle Fist"? Since I despised Liu Qianqian, why did I become obsessed with other girls for the sake of a martial arts book that I despised? I was thinking, why did the author arrange such a plot? For a trashy "Fist of the Rock Eagle" that the protagonist looks down upon, the protagonist has been successfully shaped into a "villain"!

An ability to change the time of an item was forced to be completed by the protagonist as a drug catalyst. A fragment, or a peel, who knows what it was a hundred years ago? Changing the century-old red fruit to thousands of years requires more modification points. How much more modification points are needed to change the remaining core after eating the red fruit back to a few minutes ago? A person with incredible ability imitates the little green bottle used by other mortals to cultivate immortality. He is so awesome and ends up suppressing the protagonist, so he shouldn't be so screwed up!

The plot of the protagonist acting with the witch lacks a driving force, and the protagonist has a cheat, but suddenly he has to fall out with the witch for a mere hundred-year-old fruit, so the cheat is completely thrown away!

The writing is slow and sloppy. Now the protagonist looks like a dog🐶. The protagonist's philosophy is dog. It's a failure to hang out with that purple sheng witch.

Why not get rid of that red fruit tree? If the age reaches ten thousand or one thousand years, it is estimated that it will bear a lot of fruit.

After seeing the episode about the witch, I was persuaded to quit.

Ever since the Hunyuan Sect refused to meet the witch, this book has become a piece of shit.

How can a fool understand everything just after returning to normal? If you are able to time travel yourself, there is no problem. From the perspective of others, you have been stupid for more than ten years and can't even get out of bed. Suddenly you are no different from a normal person? Even if you are a normal person who has been in bed for ten years, you cannot say that normal is normal.

Purple Moon Witch is schizophrenic! The protagonist has masochistic tendencies, has traveled through time, and is still a bitch

A person with cheats doesn't want to look for opportunities and just acts like a licker every day. I can't stand it any longer, so I say goodbye.

Author, cut it off, the book is really not good, poisonous, extremely poisonous

Is it possible to maximize the internal strength of one's martial arts over time?

Liu Qianqian just accept it, don't be a bitch, age doesn't matter, you grow up all of a sudden, they are all people who want to become immortals, what are you afraid of? Everyone else has the potential to be a wife of a bad man, don't abandon it casually, that is very poisonous. If you don't like it, abandon it early, and now everyone else is coming to your home. Is Mojiji the last thing to abandon and poison the readers?

It is indeed not good to hang someone else's sister-in-law in the cold, but you have to consider that the current background is an ancient background. Is it shameful for a girl to break off an engagement? Even a time traveler like Xiao Yan feels that breaking off the engagement is a humiliation. What kind of psychological changes do you think an ancient person would have experienced? In addition, the other party has a grudge against me, so it is not easy to break off the marriage. And there is a concept called "Sheng Mi, Enemy, Dou Mi En", and there is also a view that wealth should not be revealed. Those ancient people are not the protagonists, but just people in the Tao. If they go out to show off, it will be haha.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       ? So I seriously suspect that you people who set the pace have bad intentions.

The first 30 chapters are very good. After the 30th chapter, I was entangled with a witch every day. I basically skipped it. It was difficult to read. It felt like it was off topic.

If you really can't write it, don't write it. It's too watery.

It started out okay but turned out to be extremely toxic after the Demonic Saint appeared. She didn't know how to write emotional scenes at all and just forced them to write. It was so disgusting and she kept licking it. I couldn't stand it anymore! The first disgusting book of the year!

... The dramatic conflict that ignited the plot of the novel was not well controlled. The plot of the witch was too abrupt and illogical. I have already adopted the mode of reading books without thinking, but I still can't convince myself to continue reading. The plot of getting along with the witch is too embarrassing, and the two characters of the protagonist and the witch are ruined.

It was fine at first, but if you make an emotional scene, it will look like a novel. 88

Parents in their right minds would not name their sons Zhang Que. Generally, parents in ancient times would name their children Zhang Mancang, Zhang Manshan, Zhang Manshu, Zhang Manshuan, and Zhang Manguo. . . . This kind of

Too poisonous! As for those two women, no matter what their character is as a supporting actress, I can tolerate it! I really can't stand the protagonist's dog-licking personality! This is my favorite genre to watch, but I really can't watch it!

Either he is too young, or he rarely writes books. People's basic reactions, the superiority of elders and inferiors in chats, and the sophistication of human beings are all basically based on imagination!

It's over, it's time for the eunuch 😡

There is a problem, that is, modifying time can upgrade items, which is wrong. For example, a red fruit grows on a tree for ten, one hundred, one thousand, ten thousand, one hundred thousand years... Yes, ten, one hundred, one thousand, ten thousand, one hundred thousand years... Red fruit. Nutrition is provided by the mother tree to the fruit. You can't pick the fruit off. It will be upgraded if you leave it for a while. If the rules of modifying time in this world can change the shape, will the same be true for other people? If a person buys a 10-year-old ginseng and puts it at home, and unfortunately dies, his descendants will not know that he bought the ginseng. It wasn't until a hundred years later that the original ginseng plant was found. What is the current form of this ginseng that has been "renovated over time"? A: Ten years of ginseng. B: One hundred and ten years of ginseng. C: Ten-year-old ginseng (the medicinal effect is lost).

The exercises have no effect. Those with high skills will kill those with low skills. The golden finger has no effect other than getting some medicine to eat. In short, it is nothing to see and extremely boring.

Only write half of the article. Ten days later, you will revise it until you have just finished writing the article. Can it be turned into all articles📃? ? ? ? ?

Although the plot is not to my liking, the creative setting of Goldfinger is really good! Big cheers for the author!

Although one picture per day seems short and weak, the content is still quite exciting 😰