Could It Be That I Am Superman?

Superman's most basic way to become stronger - bask in the sun The best place to bask in the sun in China is Lhasa, Tibet, where the annual sunshine hours are the longest in the country. Calculating an average of 8 hours a day, the sunshine in a year can reach about 3,000 hours, and the sun shines brightly 300 days a year. The best place in the world to bask in the sun is the Sahara Desert. It is sparsely populated and the sun is hot 12 hours a day, making it the sunniest place in the world. —— Want to learn martial arts skills? Can! Using super brain, super eyesight and super hearing, you can easily learn all kinds of exquisite martial arts skills. You don't need to learn from a master or compete with others in person. You only need to act as an audience in the audience. Every move of the martial artist on the stage can be clearly seen by Superman. Even the movement of muscles, the flow of blood, and the operation of breathing can be easily seen with clairvoyance. Like the sharingan in Naruto, you can easily learn the skills that the other party has honed hard. As the author, your brain is really not suitable for writing Superman. Why don't you write the Hulk? The Superman you write is just an idiot with no strength. Bah!

I suggest you delete and rewrite everything from Chapter 8 onwards and think about it carefully, otherwise it will be a waste of time and you won't make any money if you write again.

One thing to say, I came here for the ancestors mentioned in the introduction. I hope the author will not disappoint everyone.

Bai Xiang has a good subject matter, and the writing is fine, but there is a problem in figuring out the characters' personalities. There are many inconsistencies in many places, especially in the martial arts hall, which makes the protagonist look like a second-rate fool. One person can say that he doesn't know that his body is like steel, but the second person is considered a provocation. How can he not figure it out after leaving the martial arts hall and continue to find a place to learn boxing? And according to the setting and previous foreshadowing, the protagonist feels that the world is like glass, so why would he consider going to a martial arts school to learn kung fu?

What kind of martial arts, realm, etc., If you honestly write about an ordinary world, the feeling will make others read it. Why write so many bells and whistles? Look who likes to watch this kind of thing?

! In a similar domestic background, let alone Superman, you are Sanqing. At most, the male protagonist can only pretend to be cool in front of ordinary people, slap his face, and sleep with a few more women. . These, money-making abilities are also fine. So, choosing the wrong background country is a flaw. Return to Superman, our ancestors... Come on and see a story where the male protagonist defies order. Try 404 to get you. Next time, remember not to choose a background similar to that in China. People who are so awesome are not allowed at all...

That Mr. Zhou is really disgusting. Just because the protagonist is a good person, he forcibly drags the protagonist into the martial arts circle, saying that it is a pity that the protagonist is so powerful and not famous. Bah, regardless of the stupid personalities of those people in the martial arts circle, Mr. Zhou is a big figure in the martial arts circle. Dude, I know the personalities of those people. I knew it and deliberately recruited the protagonist just to make him famous. Good people deserve to be pointed at guns. If it were me, I would just kill Zhou Zhou. If you use me to harm the people around me, you should be taught a lesson.

There is one thing to say, the ancestors must take action. If you want to be a superman or something, I will look down on you.

The above is too cruel. You have a clear understanding of your own abilities and know that you have superhuman abilities. Yet you still go to the gym to deliberately show off, break other people's bones, and extort money from others? What do you think, author? The creativity is okay, and the ideas halfway through are okay, but the writing is ugly.

Actually. . Everyone who clicks in wants to see the protagonist's daily life in the city I can't handle this Gu Wu. . Dream back to ten years ago

Chapters and chapters were all written in a way that was poisonous 10 years ago, and the introduction took another year to write. As a result, the plot every day is that everything comes to you automatically, the supporting characters have low IQs, and there are some other poisonous points that cannot be resisted. Come on, the author, you can actually refer to other similar works to improve it.

Ever since the protagonist went to the park to practice boxing and met the old man, he started to become addicted and couldn't stand it anymore.

It's like this again. Once you gain abilities, everything comes out. It's no longer an ordinary world.

Let me emphasize that I only have martial arts in this world view, but the protagonist has never used martial arts. The protagonist's super brain knows all the martial arts after reading it, so why not learn it? The protagonist learns fighting skills to prevent the emergence of strong men of the same level, okay? If there is a strong person with equal strength, and I am 0.1 Stronger than you, then it is still strong, right? Moreover, skills are by no means as small as a fraction of a percent. The protagonist's mentality is not necessary, but he must know it. In the movie directed by Zha, Da Chao at the beginning is like a powerful fool, being hung up and beaten by a group of Kryptonians who know fighting skills. The protagonist does not like to have such a day, OK?

Let's discuss what you would do if you got superhuman powers, and let the author see how normal people do things. The following are the restrictions: ⒈This is a modern city with surveillance cameras and the government is not incompetent. Your understanding of the world you live in is very superficial. You are not sure whether there is anything special in the dark side of the world, such as seclusion (level of force) Unknown, ranging from martial arts to fantasy), such as superpowers (also unknown, maybe a rule system like a substitute), such as black technology (it is unclear whether there are future people, aliens and other forces stationed there) ⒉Your superhuman abilities It fell from the sky. You don't know the source of your ability. You can't be sure whether there is someone as lucky as you, and whether the other person is better than you (the way you got your ability is very childish, and you can't be sure whether you are a guinea pig in the eyes of others) ⒊Your superhuman ability is not a particularly awesome version of Bai Yinchao. For example, your brain has not become very smart, you have not effectively controlled your own power, the biological force field has not been awakened, and abilities such as heat vision and clairvoyance still need to be discovered by yourself.

After reading the previous chapters, the content of this novel is just funny, but the subsequent plot is just funny for the sake of funny. It will be a little fresh at first, but after adding the Chinese martial arts and kung fu plot, it is not flattering, and it is straight out of the drama. I hope the author will work hard.

I think no one will become an ancestor, a few careerists, or a few people with abnormal brains. Show your strength, put out fires in big things, but it depends on your mood in small things. Play games and earn money in normal times. Get a national co-branded black card with unlimited swipes, eat, drink, have fun, and bask in the sun. When you have enough fun, go to the universe and play with aliens. Maybe you can meet the evil alien empire and live a wave of savior addiction. Isn't he delicious? !

The first 6 chapters are all fine. I just pulled it after going to the gym.

This plot doesn't work. Superman has to fight and kill, help the country develop science and technology to become a cosmic civilization, and explore the universe. There is already written about it. Moreover, human women at this stage are just scraps of paper, which have no meaning and cannot be touched. Or explore the universe to find a similar superwoman, or use genetic technology to upgrade a superwoman. In short, the current plot is not good.

Open a discussion thread. As the title suggests, can Dachao, who has absorbed the power of all the stars in the universe, holding the Heart of the Universe in one hand and the "Superman Sword" in the other, defeat the strongest enemy in the universe, the 404 River Crab? !

Brothers, I will do my best to finish this book despite the 404, but maybe when you read the book, your perception will be much different, such as chapters suddenly skipping, such as the plot not being connected, such as many words suddenly being deleted, I will try my best.

People of the motherland: I can do whatever I want, I will step on the crescent sky 😏

Slowly getting better and better, although the previous writing was a little off, but the decisiveness has been brought back a bit, and I am a little more interested. Don't use too many words to describe women, it will easily annoy people.

As long as the Hulk knows skills, it won't be Captain America who defeats Thanos. As long as Superman knows the skills and beats Supergirl, General Rhodes won't have such a hard time.

It's all toxic, but it's fun to watch.

So to use an analogy, it's like Yujiro imitating Kuo Haihuang and spending his whole life

It's okay so far. I'm finally starting to look a bit like my ancestors. I just don't know if I can time travel. If I don't, I'll get tired of this modern martial arts world later on.

The taste of ancestors is here, but the disadvantage is that it is a bit slow to write.

There's not much to say. Some places are a little bit poisonous. The subject matter is good but a little too white.

The plot develops the worldview! This is what I want to feel good about! OK OK