Super God: Picked up a Hexi at the Beginning

The author listened to my advice, you can no longer write a single female protagonist like this, you can no longer control it. If you engage in ambiguity and then refuse to accept it, it will make people feel worse than a scumbag.

Don't be affected by the comments, write it according to your own ideas, and it will be considered a complete novel. Don't be afraid to jump in. I'm looking forward to the next story. If you just want to write a book with good results, then pretend that I didn't say it before, but I will be very disappointed. Every novel is a story. The excitement and writing style will certainly enhance the reading experience, but the story itself is the soul of a novel. Come on!

The protagonist in the early stage is useless, just like a waste, so forget it. In the middle stage, I spent so much pen and ink writing about the exciting emotions, but in the end I didn't stop it. It was so frustrating to read, should novels be so frustrating? And Ansu, this is a novel, can there be a better ending? Reality is so tiring, and I have to be knifed to read a novel. This time I am tired. Alas, I'd better read Shuangwen, this is not suitable for me

I hope there will be a single female protagonist, otherwise it would be too unfair to He Xi, after all, someone else has been protecting him for three hundred years. If he found a new love as soon as she was gone, that would be the case. . . . .

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It was rubbish. I wrote fifty chapters of this simple branch line, and then suddenly it was 30,000 years later. I was laughing all day long. There was a lot of emotional drama laid out, but in the end it didn't have any impact. As soon as the person died, he immediately started to create people with a smile. The routine is too obvious. Your girlfriend is going to die, then you explode, then you can't beat him, you are beaten to the point of death, and then you force yourself to survive and linger. Just use it twice. If you use it too much, you will lose your memory.

You might as well start a harem, have an affair, and still not accept it when it's over. Worse than a scumbag

The more I wrote, the more wrong it became. I gave up jumping and was seriously injured in a duel with Su Mary because He Xi and Su Mary were not dead! What are you doing? Do you want to develop in a bloody direction? It's all laid out to such an extent. It took dozens of chapters to describe Yue, but in the end, it just won't stop. Sumary, a minor supporting character in the original work, can't die twice? Can an angel general die as soon as he meets him? Even dog blood doesn't have such an aw. I really think the author's early writing was great, a rare resource for super-god fandom, but in the last few chapters, I feel like the author has lost control over it more and more! Regarding the mistakes in controlling the protagonist's emotional line, and the handling of details such as the small character who died but did not die, all show that the plot is developing in a bloody direction, and the author needs to think about how to get the plot back on track.

Why did you write this emotional scene? I feel like it will be a big poison when the memory is restored.

Under certain circumstances, special affection equals ruthlessness. To use an inappropriate metaphor, Yang Guo is devoted to Xiao Longnu, but he is also too ruthless to other women. For a bystander like me, it is difficult to say

I'm so fucking speechless 🙄 It was so affectionate before, but then an angel jumped out, entangled her, and now she's become the heroine. I beg you to let He Xi go.

The protagonist feels like Yi Xiaochuan, disgusting

Brothers, the contract is about to be signed😁

I don't want to write a novel, I want to play games! ! !

After reading Chapter 130, I didn't dare to look down. Suddenly Ansu was stabbed. What was the reason for Ansu's death? He Yue's emotional line is also inexplicable 😰 Just don't give away girls in the super god world. You just create two of your own for nothing, and then you kill one in return 🔨

You have no responsibility as a king at all. You must have an attitude towards ultimate fear, whether it is a ban or an active research. It depends on you whether you want to fall in love or pursue a career.

It's really poisonous to step on a horse. This is the first time I've seen a Mary Sue romance written by a super god. It's so forceful that it disgusts people.

It's really disgusting to force a return to the original plot.