Commoner Immortal Emperor

Let me comment after reading Chapter 17. I have to say that the author's characterization skills are good. Bai Qi only wrote one chapter from his appearance to his death, but it made people infinitely sad. This is Jianghu. There is also Sheng Xiaoxi. This character only appeared in two chapters, but he wrote the main line of the story, the characterization of the protagonist, and the darkness of the world view openly and covertly. It also made people feel sorry for the female supporting role. Her writing skills are experienced and she really doesn't look like a new author. So far, it is indeed well written. If I were to rate it, the quality would be somewhere between that of grain and grass jelly.

This author will take a look first. 🤓

Woohoo, there really is no heroine, I'm emo

Use the chapter names to comment on this book. One word.

Five hundred collected, to commemorate.

The title of the book has been changed and the cover will be changed soon.

The author's characterization is very good, especially the female characters feel very comfortable.

I've just read about five chapters, and it's pretty good. The quality has improved a lot. Still the same sentence "As long as you continue to update, I will continue to watch"! Come on brother!

In the second chapter of the opening chapter, the protagonist is forced to be enlightened. The protagonist is nearly 40 years old. Doesn't he know how to bring a package out? Isn't it obvious? Is it still so early on a street? I don't know, are there bullies? Don't you know I'm hiding in my clothes? The clothes in ancient times were wide, and you didn't have to buy everything at once, so you had to carry less and more, so that it wouldn't be obvious if you hid it under the clothes. Many people say that there are three golden chapters, but your second chapter directly persuades people to quit. Now I am doubting that those authors are good at writing. Is it a lie? Anyway, I can't guarantee that most people, but I can guarantee that some people will leave directly after reading the second chapter.

The content is a bit sorry for the racy presentation

Author: The protagonist of your novel has the taste of practicing the all-heaven-level Zhanwo Mingdao plus the all-heaven-level Heavenly Escape Sword Technique.

It's a holy book. If you want to read it, you can give it a try. It's still very well written.

What does the protagonist think? It's a miracle that he's still alive.

Are they indigenous? The natives stopped watching. It feels like there is no sense of substitution.