The Inhuman Movies I Made Are Too Real

What I want to see is the sweet love between the protagonist and the heroine, not the drama where they want to be together but have to be separated temporarily for various reasons

Ahem, originally I only planned to update one chapter today because I wasn't feeling well. But I recently saw the opinions raised by several readers, so I decided to keep the update schedule of two chapters a day. First of all, I'm sorry for bringing such a bad reading experience to viewers who want to watch the sweet love story. I'm really sorry. But I didn't expect that I could write so infuriatingly... But being able to infect everyone's emotions also proves that my writing is pretty good, which can be regarded as everyone's affirmation of me. But back to the matter itself, this is what I wrote in the outline... I can't temporarily change the outline now, and let the male and female protagonists be together in the next chapter, right? This is not normal, and will make the subsequent plot very awkward. Furthermore, this is a novel in which the career line and the love line are advanced at the same time. If one of the lines is unilaterally emphasized, it will lead to an imbalance in the plot. And I'm just a newbie, so I don't have that strong control over the plot. I'm also learning and making progress, and trying my best to improve this. At the same time, I also hope to bring a good impression to all viewers, which is also good for me because it can bring me benefits. But I understand that this is impossible, because it is difficult to reconcile everyone's opinions. Maybe some people like sweet love stories, maybe some people like tragedies, and I can't revise the outline ten times just because ten readers have different opinions. Even if you revise it ten times, there will be an eleventh reader who is dissatisfied. That's the truth, so I hope I can understand each other with readers... I will try my best to meet your requirements, and you can support me silently and give me your opinions in a timely manner. So, to the dissatisfied readers, I appreciate your comments, because it lets me know that my book is still being read, which is really happy for an author. Although the male and female protagonists are not officially together yet, their hearts are always together, and no one can separate them. And I can also quietly reveal that the female protagonist left the male protagonist to help the male protagonist, and the male protagonist is a person with no future. I hope you can remember this sentence, this is a big foreshadowing. I can assure you here that in future plots, the male protagonist will make up for all the missed time. Trust me, it won't take long. Finally, thank you all, whether it is those who support or those who complain, I am very grateful. Because you can give me your opinions on this novel that few people read, it makes me feel less lonely in my writing journey. Thank you very much! I will listen carefully to your opinions and then modify my writing style. However, as a newcomer, many things may not be done well. I hope everyone can understand. It doesn't matter if everyone abandons the book. After all, this is a trial work for newcomers, and it is really difficult to come up with results. But if you can continue to watch, that would be my honor. In this place where there are so many novels, meeting each other is a kind of fate. Thanks!

Stop scolding, stop scolding, I'm going up... Arrangements for sweet love have begun. Next, there will be no bloody plot, but a plot of letting oneself go.

In the first chapter, I have no one left. When I read the quantum reading and saw the time travel, Love Letter, Triga, Soul Theater, my brain suddenly burned out.

I retreat first. When will the heroine come back and kick me?

You persuaded me to quit in the first three chapters. It's really yours.

Integrated with life, great!

I felt that the emotional scene between the heroine and the hero was too slow, it was uncomfortable to watch and I wanted to skip watching it.

First of all, this is an author who admires Japanese movies, and the content is similar, focusing on Japanese movies. So after rebirth and time travel, after death, it is not the world in the script, but a real world? How to write in the real world? Do you think it is an entertainment article? You should go there to write this kind of two-dimensional fanfic. You really don't understand the growth path of Japanese male stars.

I want to give him a chance to destroy the world Who agrees and who opposes

It looks very comfortable, what's going on? 🤔

After seeing what happened to Sadako after arriving in China, I immediately stopped being scared 😊

. . . . Hmm, what I read seems to be different from the introduction.

I hope the students who are reading this will understand... Don't keep books, it's easy to die

If you work harder, you will be rewarded with two coins. Throw it away~

I've been watching it while jumping, the progress is too slow

A little more nonsense, 😏

I changed my name 🙂

Not too Japanese, very relaxing and watchable

I can't stand it after watching the beginning! I don't like watching NTR, and the female protagonist doesn't like the male protagonist. I'm speechless. It's really better to time-travel from the beginning or start a new life after time-travel. I'm very disgusted with pretending to be someone else's skin...

Why do you feel like these two weird pictures in today's plot (ㅇㅅㅇ) were foreshadowing before and I didn't pay attention?

I don't mean to criticize anything. I just browsed the comment area and found that the author wanted to write about the dual main lines of career and emotion, but the writing method was too messy. So far, I have read Chapter 54. As of the fireworks display, I have said what I want to criticize in this chapter. Here are some suggestions (only my feelings from the first 53 chapters) 1. This emotional plot really needs polishing. Who doesn't want to watch a sweet love after reading the introduction? This kind of emotion that is neither sweet nor stomach-aching enough really affects the viewing experience. The previous plots did not fully reflect the relationship between the protagonist and the heroine. As of Chapter 53, I only saw a seemingly cute heroine and a handsome male protagonist who seemed to have some brain problems. There are conflicts in the plot before and after. When the heroine first objected to dating the protagonist, the heroine's description of the "man" was "angry" and "roaring." However, judging from the description later, the heroine's father is a kind father who loves his daughter and an elder who cares about the protagonist. The sense of separation is too strong. 2. The career line is not bad, but the description of the audience's reaction after the sequel is released is a bit weak, which is the main point of this type of novel! It would be fine if the description of the filming or the narrative of the script were good enough to immerse the reader, but this book is not that good, right? 3. Regarding the protagonist Goldfinger, this subject is relatively new. It is more or less a good idea to let the seniors in the ghost world guide, but this assistant is really a failure. Since the author wanted to write about a female protagonist falling in love, he shouldn't have set up a female assistant, let alone such a female ghost assistant who can take the initiative to drive. Moreover, this assistant is so unpopular that he will take the protagonist's 80,000 ghost coins in the gold finger and take away 72,000 to buy a dress. Without telling the protagonist in advance, he will just kill it first and then tell the story later? I remember correctly that this ghost coin is an important material needed by the protagonist, right? What's important? Can you buy a dress for your assistant? The same is true for the plot after the assistant appears, and that plot especially affects the goodwill. I also know that it can't be changed, but this is really annoying. 4. Regarding the foreshadowing of the protagonist's life experience and assistant's identity, it seems that they are trying to create some supernatural development? Is it really necessary? It is enough to add a movie about a modern city and a romance novel. Adding a golden finger from the ghost world is enough. Adding a supernatural theme would be too messy. To put it bluntly, it would be neither fish nor fowl. Finally, this is not to say that this novel is without merit, there are some highlights. In terms of the protagonist's attitude and career development, it is still very good. It is just fine for a newcomer. The writing is okay, the imagination is good, and the ideas are good, but the details need to be strengthened. Come on, author.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

The SB system at the beginning persuaded me to quit.