Wizard Frontier

It's too long-winded, and many people don't have the patience to read on. Disadvantages

The chapters are messed up and all are repeated chapters, which is inexplicable.

It feels like the setting is like the wizarding world... It's a process from a single world to a community of worlds.

The writing is okay, but the writing is too cumbersome. More than 50 chapters are still being written for a novice getting started.

I would like to make a suggestion, it may be a good book, but the author needs to refine his sentences. Too many adjectives, metaphors, etc. Are used, which fails to highlight the key points and makes people feel less involved. What should I say? Your sentence is a bit like the sentence on the test paper where the question is "Please use two or more rhetorical devices to make a sentence."

Happy Wedding Copy and paste, there is no need to send it out, I don't even know that chapter is new content. Let's reopen it. I'll reopen it after I'm done with this period of time. This book probably won't work.

Why is it so messy all the time? I just jumped to the previous plot

Let me ask, does this book have a female protagonist? What is the protagonist's behavior? I just came to ask.

At the beginning, more than 60 chapters are still being tested. If you don't rush to the street, who will?

Why are the last few chapters heavier than the previous ones 😵

The writing feels quite reasonable and I finished reading it in one go

The biography of a hero or great man should be like this. He was born in XX, and he was first known as a little famous. Who cared about him before he became famous? People can't remember an ordinary person. The author of Qidian especially likes to write from level zero to level one. Isn't it possible without this routine?