Invincible Heroes - Hidden Architect

The back part of this book is really bad. The goblins are written like Warhammer Greenskins and I figured out what skills they need. The main plot of the destruction of the tower, which was laid out for a whole book, ended in a rebellion. So many foreshadowings and hidden clues were gone. The final battle was completed in two or three chapters. It was an anticlimactic and unclear ending. It should be noted that after the daily update of 3,000 to 4,000 words a while ago without the monthly ticket for additional updates, many plots also had this problem. They were written inexplicably and suddenly ended, as if they were writing a running account. I don't know why the author was so anxious that he couldn't write well. Did the author change? I also mentioned that after the above-mentioned time point, the characterization is no longer prominent. The plot characters are really used and thrown away. When needed, I pick them up and write twice. When I don't need them, I just check them out. The most obvious one is Mirola's foodie mission. In the first half, it will be advanced at the end of each major chapter, but in the second half, the setting is completely discarded. The before and after comparison of the characterization is simply astonishing. Looking at the recent rocket-like pace of the plot, there is a high probability that it will be over. The greater the expectations, the greater the disappointment. With such an ending, this author will definitely not order another book.

From accidentally seeing this book to being fascinated by it to being a little bored of it but wanting to continue reading it, let me talk about my personal views on this book. Advantages: The writing is very good, the driving speed is very fast, the imagination is great, the world view is mature, and the logic is very self-consistent. Many world views or events reflect reality, making readers feel the same way and occasionally make them smile. Disadvantages: Precisely because the world view is too big, there are too many characters, and the story lines are too confusing. One story line leads to several branch lines, and branch lines have branch lines. Many things are often forgotten before finishing a task, and many people still use European and American names. Sometimes when reading the book, you have to think about what you did before. A series of heroines such as Smit, Saint Adela, Serena, etc. Have not appeared for a long time. I don't know if the hamster wants to keep up with the word count or if he really has a verbose character. For example, in "Pandora's Box", does Pandora from Nordic mythology have any value in this worldview? He explained it so hard that I wanted to skip it. Generally speaking, the story line was not compact and engaging enough. If the reader wants to fast forward, this is the shortcoming of a book. Although I mentioned above that the logic is very self-consistent and the imagination is great. But the disadvantage is that the mind is too big, and every good idea that comes to mind is wanted to be added to it, which makes the entire combat system, unit concepts, building attributes, character skills, etc. Too long and complicated. It feels like you have thought about it but forgot it after a while. Sometimes a good book not only needs to be able to do addition, but also needs to know how to do subtraction. It does not mean that the bigger the world view, the more character storylines, and characters the better. This way, it will often become difficult to finish, and there will be too many foreshadowings. In the end, you have to remember to recycle it yourself. Finally, I wish Hamster better and better as he writes more and become more and more popular. These are just some meager and superficial opinions of mine, based on my feelings. Don't argue with me, if you book friends want to argue, then you are right! !

I would like to give some suggestions to the author. It is my personal opinion. If you don't like it, please don't criticize it. If the author wants to create an epic feel, it is recommended to play with jokes in moderation, especially the driving content needs to be reduced; and if it is written as a happy light novel, it is better to be casual, although I still feel that there is too much driving content.

Destiny is like a weaving of good and evil The grand plan of the new year The current situation is urgent and chaotic in all directions The Immortal Legend Eternal Book Chaos invades Thousand Miles of Darkness Asha protects Wanjiafu Who said there is no solution and the world is overturned Seven Pigeons never admit defeat

The best of the Invincible Heroes series, I can never look at anything else Unlike others, it ignores all the original character backgrounds and the main character is awesome This work of Hamster is not only about the protagonist, but also the construction of the entire Invincible Heroes world is the most fascinating.

It's been a while since I've seen a book about invincible heroes. The writing is okay, but the problem is that it's painful for us DND veterans to read. According to the DND principle, the nine camps are divided into: good order, good neutrality, good chaos, neutral order, absolute neutrality, neutral chaos, evil order, evil neutrality, and evil chaos. Your book puts the tower in the good camp, and the nine major camps can't be distinguished. It's uncomfortable. 🥺

To be honest, everything else in your book is good except for the main turn-based gameplay of the game which is really abstract...

I have never played Invincible Heroes, but I have read every Invincible Heroes book. The reason is because the first time I read the Invincible Heroes novel was the Twelve-Winged Archangel. Actually, I haven't finished reading that novel yet. It can be said that I collapsed in the later stages of writing. But I still recommend it. If I were to rate it, I would give full marks to the first half of the book. So I have always wanted to find a book with the same feel as that novel. Unfortunately, no one can write a traditional online game. They have to adapt it into a virtual online game by themselves, adding emotional drama to the troops and interactive drama to the NPCs. In my opinion, it's really, really boring. I have been watching online games for many years. It can be said that the first thing that attracted me to online games was virtual online games. Unfortunately, virtual online games succeed or fail. Traditional online game writing has been framed by virtual online games, and few authors have the writing style and talent to set up the background and story of virtual online games. At the end of writing, you will find that instead of writing about virtual online games, it is better to write about other worlds. This is today's online game writing. In my opinion, Invincible Heroes is even less suitable for the setting of virtual online games. Because what attracts people to Invincible Heroes is the treasures, the units, the best heroes, and the competition between players. There are obviously many things to write about, such as treasure houses, conquering cities and territories, and game activities. You have to write about the interaction with the soldiers and the interaction with the mysterious NPC. You can improve through this method, without fighting, without using less to win more, without going on adventures to earn treasure. Isn't this putting the cart before the horse? ………… I felt a lot at the moment and said a lot of digressions. What I really want to say is that it has been a long time since I read an interesting online game article, let alone one of this type of hero invincibility. This novel really gave me the same feeling as when I read the Archangel book. Although, it is not the kind of soldiers and NPCs that I expected. But compared to others, it is already excellent. I just hope the author can work harder.

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Not only that, Heroes of Invincibility is an early electronic war chess game. It has a large number of units and evolutionary upgrade trees, and it is very playable. Compared with the current war chess and auto chess games, apart from the lack of early technology, it cannot be said that they are evenly matched, but can only be said to be evenly matched. When I was in the first grade of elementary school, I also played the most popular version at that time: Shadow of Death, which can be said to be a must-talk topic for boys in the afternoon nursery class. Today's success of Auto Chess is not accidental but an inheritance, inheriting the unit diversity and gameplay diversity of early war chess games. In this fast-paced life, Auto Chess is indeed more in line with the requirements of fast food. This is an opportunity for the success of Auto Chess, and it is also an undeniable excellence aspect of war chess games such as Invincible Heroes. There is so much to say about this series, turn-based, diverse, and competitive. It can't be summarized in one paragraph. I hope you will look at old games, even excellent old games, with a rational attitude, instead of looking at them with contempt and insisting on the quality of the graphics ~ a niche ~ it only proves that you only understand the ninth art of gaming.

The feeling of writing this book is so strange😳 The title of the book refers to an architect, and he is also an architect by profession. However, the whole book is about the protagonist wandering around outside, saving a bunch of rare architectural drawings and building few. The role of buildings is also very low. It was difficult to write about building a city, but the specific process of building a city was passed in a few sentences. The protagonist ran out and wandered around again, and the role of the city was not reflected at all. The battle process is also the same, let alone writing turn-based battles in immersive games. The level of the protagonist's battle has increased linearly, but the protagonist's combat power changes are too low. It feels that the protagonist's arms have not changed much, and the level has not changed. It feels that the author has forgotten the level, and the role of the equipment is not obvious. See What I feel so far is that the protagonist's combat level has been improving, and the protagonist's combat power has not changed. Then the protagonist can still win the battle without loss by relying on operation and luck. It is just like looking at the strategy of a turn-based game. As long as you defeat several low-level soldiers, you can defeat a bunch of high-level soldiers without losing any damage. To sum up, the feeling that the whole book gave me is this: a bunch of turn-based game guides connected together, with a few sentences about equipment and soldier introductions interspersed in the middle to connect them.

Posting a post, I hope the author will not be influenced by readers. Writing according to the outline is the greatest victory First, Heroes of Invincibility actually has many fans. There is still an international competition for Heroes of Invincibility III, and many Chinese players participate. Those who say Heroes For those who are in the Invincible niche, I suggest you grab the Invincible Heroes forum to learn more. I'm afraid you have never seen anything that teaches the niche. Some games can't be found on Baidu and Google. Secondly, Heroes of Invincibility III has been around for at least twenty years, and now many strategy games have been affected by it. The influence of the Heroes of Invincible series The turn-based system of the three Heroes of Invincible novels restores the essence of the Heroes of Invincible game. Third, the series before Heroes of Invincible V, all strategic deployments of the turn-based system, defeating more with less is exactly what Heroes of Invincibility is. One of the essences of Heroes is that in the BT map of Heroes, you have never seen a peasant fight 9999 holy dragons, but the heroes of Heroes and Might and Magic at home and abroad can defeat it. Let me ask you, if you put it on an open battlefield, can a peasant fight 999 dragons? In the Heroes of Might and Magic bt map, one hero can easily bring hundreds of thousands of soldiers of more than a dozen types. Let me ask you how you want the author to write it. There are also decisive strategic magics placed on the non-turn-based battlefield, which are forbidden spells. But in Heroes of Might and Magic, a single magic can assist or kill hundreds of thousands of similar soldiers. This has become a regular magic, and even group magic can affect tens of millions of soldiers. If you really want to write it like this, you will say that the data has collapsed

It doesn't hurt to speak pornographically occasionally, but if you do it if you don't understand it, it will already affect the rhythm of the entire story, regardless of priority.

The combat and plot descriptions are quite exciting, and the hero-invincible novel is the best I've ever read. But I don't really like the female supporting characters and the heroine in it. They all circle around the protagonist. I feel that the women in it all think with their lower bodies. Strongly recommend the author to kill his wife in the right way! ! ! Kill all the mentally retarded women. If you kill your wife, you are a great god! ! ! I don't talk big.

At first, it was quite interesting to write about war chess + military types, but as I continued writing, it turned into another world fantasy + self-propelled cannon.

Brother, I'm so disappointed. I just finished voting for the monthly ticket and the works were exempted and canceled. Without saying anything, the works were removed from the shelves. I'm still following you after you wrote several novels. I really like the genre of invincible heroes. I will never read your future novels again. It's too much.

This book goes a step further than copying and seizing luck. It directly opens the flow of sacrifice. If everything appears in the author's book recommendation column, is there anyone who is not a prisoner? ? ?

The author's imagination is quite impressive. From the laws of the world and various biological forms, to social forms and politics, as well as the design of various special battle rules and unique battles, it can form a complete chain. It feels like I have seen the shadow of classic science fiction novels such as "Fire on the Abyss". Hope to see more exciting designs~ There is actually a coconut song easter egg, has anyone noticed it?

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A few suggestions 1. The pace of the book is a bit fast. It's only the 5th or 6th week of this 1.6 Million words. How many words have to be written in the past 3 years? The protagonist grows too fast and time goes too slowly. The protagonist always encounters various miracles and difficult battles. The protagonist's combat power is a bit too high now (the hang-up is a bit too high). Readers will feel tired after reading it. You can slow down the protagonist's growth speed appropriately and add more bland plots as an adjustment. Write, for example, the background Stories, daily life, city construction, etc. The weekly design drawings can be properly polished, and some tasks can be mixed in. Also, the design of buildings is not as legendary as every time. Give some ordinary buildings to teammates. The guild exchanges money and then finds ordinary players to collect the things and increase infrastructure. Anyway, the good things are basically useless now, so it is better to make some ordinary 2. The player's presence is too weak, the number of appearances is too few, and the presence is too strong. If it's low, it basically means calling 666 (it has something to do with the time passing too fast in the first point). Even the protagonist's own younger brother has a weak sense of presence and feels like he has done nothing. In this regard, it is recommended that more elite players can grow up and cooperate with the protagonist, build a large guild, exchange what they need, and add real-life content, as well as the most important forum function. There is too little content about the forum. For example, you can write about ordinary players discussing what happened, and great gods. (Protagonist) posts strategies (to enhance the strength of ordinary players to fight Chaos), organizes players to engage in trouble, buy and sell resources, learn about things happening in other areas through chat boards (gather intelligence), and the most classic PVP content in online games 3. There are too few dialogues. Every time a dialogue occurs, it feels like only the protagonist is expressing his opinions, instead of communicating with each other word by word Finally, I hope the author can write better and better

You call this the first book by a new author? The plot is connected and the updates are so smooth If it is the first time to write a book, then most authors write books with one hand and one brain

I'm surprised that I'm a novice writer. I saw the chapters published in two days and ordered them all. Please support me.

The hamster only has one book left? , I remember at least five books

Good book. There are too few books in the game and Western fantasy genres to read now. If this book does not collapse in the follow-up, it is expected to become the ceiling. In my heart, it can be compared with "Beast Blood".

🙂 Two rewards of 7,400, plus the previous one, it should be nearly 10,000. Can it be refined and updated?

I haven't read any books on Qidian since I got a girlfriend. I've recharged 20 specifically for you this month.

After reading this Invincible Heroes novel, I can no longer read the other invincible Heroes novels that are being serialized. The author is great and outlines a vivid world. In my opinion, it can only be compared with a few old novels on The Rise of New Powers.

The writing is so wonderful, the background frame of the story is very real, and it feels like you are actually there. As the story unfolds, people feel the joy, anger, sorrow and joy. I recommend everyone to read it. This novel will definitely be a very, very classic novel in the future.

Are there any other novels about invincible heroes? "Power Leveling" and "Godly Heroes". I have read Twelve Winged Angels before, and "Invincible Heroes Kingdom War" and I can't stand the rest. Please recommend similar ones 🌹🌹🌹

It is said that it has not been removed from the shelves.